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True Lords

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=47240
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:40am


Topic: True Lords
Posted By: Alien365
Subject: True Lords
Date Posted: 07 May 2025 at 7:53am
Heaven,


Where is the voidless deep?
Betraying my monstrous sanity,
is a thousand images of soulless entropy
Fearless hell that you still won’t spell,
come to tell me the grandest truth
Attacking you by cornering cancer,
preparing to match words
until a seven is answered
Painless abyssal faces,
training my arrangement of spaceships
Making your Hades,
I’m still stuck in the phases
Straining universal heartbeats,
I parse weak that my stars leap
Hours of heaven in the towering reflection
I’m still prouder than intention of towering mentions
Insanely still Satanic spill,
liquid that will never heal
So arrange me,
I destroy the darkness which is carcass
And my soul will forever be cardless
Waiting until it’s time for your heavenly pollution





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Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 24 May 2025 at 8:54pm
You obviously have a clear talent of rhyming, the whole piece was cohesive, easy to read and flowed very well.. you show a great understanding of writing mechanic..

Painless abyssal faces,
training my arrangement of spaceships
Making your Hades,
I’m still stuck in the phases
Straining universal heartbeats,
I parse weak that my stars leap
Hours of heaven in the towering reflection
I’m still prouder than intention of towering mentions

That was my favorite part, the multi syllables were on point.

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Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 29 May 2025 at 2:05pm
Nah, man...

It may have sounded poetic and abstract, but there were a lot of meaningless lines...

That was basic... like making music with just a few chords,
True lords bring the truth forth with brute force,
If hanGing was around, he'd fuck rhymes and choose gore,
But Stalin, for a clear talent of rhyming, I'd choose yours,
You're reppin' a doomed cause...  I find these newbs flawed,
So, I take pleasure in exposing these pussies like nude whores,
That's why I only view boards and forums when I'm too bored,
My crew soared due north, but when you lose wars you're bruised sore,
That's what happened when Orion and I feuded and drew swords,
The beef escalated...  I was baited and grew horns,
I discriminate against Muslims, but I hate Jews more,
They say that I should go woke, but these are whose laws...?

Adios...Geek


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Posted By: Sammy
Date Posted: 21 June 2025 at 1:57am
vote/ Senor Perfecto

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