If I Never Come Home
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
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Printed Date: 20 April 2024 at 5:51am
Topic: If I Never Come Home
Posted By: King Jehu
Subject: If I Never Come Home
Date Posted: 12 January 2006 at 5:02pm
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If I never come home I want you to forget I was here Knowing me is something you might just regret in a year (if I never come home)Maybe I was meant to be gone maybe I shouldn't pretend to be strong If I never come home Maybe i'll be happy one day maybe I'll be better off someday I'll never come home You could tell I felt alone from my face Cause I never felt at home in this place If I never come home, please don't pick up the phone I need a change of scenery, i'm so sick of this zone This job sucks... I won't stay though some are willing I feel unforgiven, this whole life in unfulfulling My girl wants to give me the world, I won't let her What good is to have the world if you're feeling no better Damn, why do I take it there that much I's so unnatural for somebody to care that much ... it's not like me to bare that much I'm a man, I'm not supposed to share that much! Yeah, that sucks, I wanna be alone for a while I don't belong here, and I'm not the one prone to denial There's no success here, only death and disorder I need to take a boat, catch a plane, get to the border If I snap, I'll be making a scene If I stay, that's what'll happen, cause I have no way of breaking ruitine If I never come home I want you to forget I was here Knowing me is something you might just regret in a year (if I never come home)Maybe I was meant to be gone maybe I shouldn't pretend to be strong If I never come home Maybe i'll be happy one day maybe I'll be better off someday I'll never come home You could tell I felt alone from my face Cause I never felt at home in this place If I never come home, tell my mother not to cry tears Cause i know pretty soon, I was gonna die here And I know you'll understand this later Everyone gets rescued except for the savior I know you tried to help, but I'm beyond it Only time I don't feel sick is when I'm unconscious My girl sees there's something wrong when she sees my face But doesn't know that I just need my space Yesterday was Ok, today's all bad And tomorrow will swing around like a baseball bat And I feel stuck in between... If I don't come home, you can wish me luck with my dreams You might ask what the fuck do I mean I might succeed by myself, i have failed enough with a team If I never come home... please go on with your life I'll go off to try to make mine right If I never come home I want you to forget I was here Knowing me is something you might just regret in a year (if I never come home)Maybe I was meant to be gone maybe I shouldn't pretend to be strong If I never come home Maybe i'll be happy one day maybe I'll be better off someday I'll never come home You could tell I felt alone from my face Cause I never felt at home in this place I'll I never come home, If you remember me, remember the prophet When I saw injustice, I fought to stop it If I never come home, don't be sad, smile to yourself Know that only I could save myself If I never come home, It's cause I was meant to go Whether you were a friend or foe... I won't come home, so you will never see me again A long, draw-out goodbye and it ends.... If I never come home I want you to forget I was here Knowing me is something you might just regret in a year (if I never come home)Maybe I was meant to be gone maybe I shouldn't pretend to be strong If I never come home Maybe i'll be happy one day maybe I'll be better off someday I'll never come home You could tell I felt alone from my face Cause I never felt at home in this place Hope you enjoyed it. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
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Posted By: frank white
Date Posted: 12 January 2006 at 5:06pm
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Ok i really enjoyed this some of this was made creative i was really impressed by the saviour line. It had a message behind it and you could feel as if you were in the blokes feet. The give them the world was also deep and reflective. This is a classic so mods put it fucking in there. ------------- the punching machine 
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 12 January 2006 at 5:14pm
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There are a lot of classics still not in classics... this was a lot to read and I'm kinda tired but I read most, skimmed other parts... hot shit... Kinda Budden-esque at times, the idea is the sorta thing he might flip, which is a good thing, I'm feelin' that... so yeah... nice peace ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: XXplosive
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 12:47pm
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This is a good read, You have some nice ideas and just about everything was on point, I would like to he this in audio, personally i think it would be quality. anyway nice drop man, keep it up
peace |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 1:46pm
| ey, shit sounded like Kanye to me. A good ass, entertaining read. flow was on point and u got the story thru great. |
Posted By: 20theTruth
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 3:33pm
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hey. you should sell lyrics.
it's a good hustle. and i know you'd make stacks. cuz that was like i said before "D to the O to the P to the E - tastic" ------------- no more |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 4:31pm
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^ Clearly hasn't read G. Writer yet ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: 20theTruth
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 4:42pm
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^ ? huh ?
------------- no more |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 4:53pm
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Jehu's other new piece in here ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 13 January 2006 at 7:02pm
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Just cause someone drops something dope doesnt mean its a classic...seriously, back on the site me and Law came from we were like "this shit is classic!!!!!" when he wrote it, now we like....well, its good shit but maybe not...suppose if its OUTSTANDING for the time u were writin it in then you could make a case, but it seems like every time Jehu writes something people like "classic!!!"...classic shud be something special Not that I read this, HAHAHAHA ------------- 
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:45am
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Budden-esque, sounds slick outloud when you rap it...indeed Winston Old but vintage slickness -------------
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