R1-B5) freestyleelite [vs] UnaBomber
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Category: Tournament Boards
Forum Name: Next Generation
Forum Description: Tournament By: Scotty32 - Won by: UnaBomber
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8755
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:14am
Topic: R1-B5) freestyleelite [vs] UnaBomber
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: R1-B5) freestyleelite [vs] UnaBomber
Date Posted: 20 June 2006 at 1:37pm
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12lines min - 16lines max First to 5 or 3KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes No Feeding/Flipping Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No Vote swaying Allowed Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 27th of June 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. Votes will last for 1 week from the date of the last verse entry *edit* changed the lines from 20-50lines to 12-16lines, also extended the deadline an extra day, now 27th june *edit* -------------  |
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 21 June 2006 at 1:57pm
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.. Wreckage ------------- 
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Posted By: freestyleelite
Date Posted: 22 June 2006 at 2:51am
| aight. ma verse will post up in minutes |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 23 June 2006 at 4:50pm
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Ya sick? nah ya to played, ya sink an just soon fade
Cus J'll leave 'elite' missing, like the link to the crew page.. E.L.I.T.E ..You gays, are bound to be jocking my ill style
He's to easy kids.. Yeahhh.. Im just dropping this 'freestyle!' Step back, take a breath cus this son is ownage
Cheaa!, this 'styles' straight played like last summers clothing Bring hammers home'n you'se a weak squirt Kid'll have you 'lion on ya chest' like a Puma t-shirt..
Your wackness is real i'll let the heaters unfold'n
You aint seein' U.....na(h), like your mirrors been stolen
Hold on, i'll make you choke an then bleed son
Cus your only hard line is the coke in the freezer
Fall back kid an if you speak then i'll sink ya..
Free'll be out by round 2, like a weak beer drinker
I know fuck all about you, so it was slightly difficult..
Fuck it...
Junior Aka UnaBomber..
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Posted By: freestyleelite
Date Posted: 27 June 2006 at 9:56pm
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real emcee will speak, the heaps ready to fall,
cuz damn you weakand man you'll weep,
hands will beat rash emcee's, or those that creep
dont stand and seek static, no shock while i command you sleep
drippin heat, when im rippin sweet jams, but i dont seek fans, greet stans with kicks that flip the script they wrote with geek hands
call me 'dope man', cuz Im STILL iLL, C the styles bring 'traffic' and tactics scatter rappers, abra ca dabra, magic I 'have it', the mad spit and something called 'star quality' wack mc's, like U, try to 'lock it down' I just make their 'bars fall n bleed' theyre subpar, call it weak, ain't 'sicker' no flicker of 'pathology' confrontation's no consolation, welcome to Intimidation Colony Legends 'Erase' competition when compositions flow pristine 'executions' grow so mean, when 'assassins' hit, foes 'get cleaned' Its about time u grab ur feeder, my spit is hot as if its coming stright out of a heater! Uz messin with the Monarch! the leader! wht d'ya have to say? EVERYONE grab some liquor, and pur it on the pavement cuz its RESTIN DAY i
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:37am
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wordplay, flow, delivery and punches all go to junior... freestyleelite, you had good ideas, but horrible structure and flow, and no direct punches or personals... not that either had much to work with on the personal level... but anywho, pretty much 1 sided vote: Jr. shade
-2s
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Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 28 June 2006 at 5:38am
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Junior had a more direct verse, Used harder punches and better worplay to kill this battle off...He had a decent flow an sturcture also...which cant have been said to free... Free, Weldone for showing  ...You seem a little new to this...But anyway...Had some good ideas in there just didnt work them well enough, Your flow wasnt very good...and you didnt come direct enough...Vote JUnior ------------- |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 28 June 2006 at 3:19pm
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Una killed this wit' the wordplay punches...an all around better verse ...
FSE....flow was kinda off on the verse, and try to make ya punches more direct too bruh... keep practicin v/Una |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 29 June 2006 at 2:49pm
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juniors thru
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