R2-B2) Dalinquent [vs] Demonic
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Forum Name: Next Generation
Forum Description: Tournament By: Scotty32 - Won by: UnaBomber
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8994
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:14am
Topic: R2-B2) Dalinquent [vs] Demonic
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: R2-B2) Dalinquent [vs] Demonic
Date Posted: 06 July 2006 at 4:58pm
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16lines min - 20lines max First to 5 or 3KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes No Feeding/Flipping Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No Vote swaying Allowed Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Thursday 13th of July 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. if your opponent doesnt show, you STILL have to, otherwise you will be concidered as a no-show too. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! or you can email it to mailto:[email protected] - [email protected] Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. -------------  |
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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 16 July 2006 at 4:55pm
Dalinquent:Demonic:
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 11:40am
Running my name in your battle hey?..
You better sleep with a lepricorn an hope you get a 'bit of that luck', cus IF you get past Dal (haha) & meet me..
Your going down boy..
Ps. Wack battle pshhh.. ------------- 
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Scotty32 wrote:Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 17 July 2006 at 1:37pm
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dal - opener was forced, flow was ok and play was basic... 2nd bar, i think you missed a word, cuz it came off sounding like you did... but the flow was nice... ok bar... 3rd bar was a good play and punch... 4th bar was weak, flow was cool but i wasn't feelin' it... 5th bar was forced, "broad that you worst" was put there just to make the punch flow... good idea tho... 6th bar, flow was good again but punch was weak/ indirect... 7th bar was ok... good idea/ play... closer, again was a good idea, couldve been worded more effectively but still worked... not a bad verse, but not good either... dem - lol @ the opener... sorry junior, but it was actually a good play the way he used it... good opener... ehh... 2nd bar wasn't good... you shoulda said someone with talent other than dollaz... wasn't feelin' it... lol @ 3rd bar... was funny, good punch... 4th bar was personal... but the punch was kinda weak... flow was good tho... 5th bar was a decent personal, but stretched lines fucked ya flow and the punch was indirect as they come... closer was funny, flow was ok, the double "wack" was, well, "wack" (yessss... i did it twice too!), but was a decent closer... overall, not horrible, better than i expected... dal had better flow and wordplays... demonic had better personals... both had mostly weak punches... demonic didnt even post the minimum... daliquent missed the deadline... this is a weak battle... vote: demonic for throwing personals the whole time... and for being on time... i guess... |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 18 July 2006 at 1:51pm
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Dalinquent - I wasnt really feeling ya whole verse...the opener was weak and hd some filler in your flow...flow was good though and multis were decent..some good punches throw but didnt hit as hard as you probabaly wanted...
Demonic - nice shit you posted..opener was really good got me interested in your verse...you had personals the whole flow and it really killed...your punches were good and you just came harder...
Vote : Demonic ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 19 July 2006 at 5:47am
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Thanks...Uppin ------------- |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:13pm
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uppin for votes....
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Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:22pm
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Dalinquent- Wasn't really feeling your verse tbh, the punches were too vague and there weren't many personals, with the exception of this line... ' He wanna prolong this shit but i wont let him imma wreck him quick
And expel the demon from this tourney like an exorcist'
 Also the main problerm for me was that the lines before your main punches really did seem like filler, as if you were devoting all your efforts to the second line. While this means the second is good, youre really wasting 1/2 of your verse. Good drop though. Demonic- Great opener, direct, flowed well. For the rest of your verse, I felt the flow was somewhat forced, but youd done your homework, the punches were there and they made me laugh. Some more multies would have helped. Close battle really, but Demonic GMV. ------------- |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 22 July 2006 at 12:29pm
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ko for demonic wow 3 words i never thought would share a sentance  ------------- |