R3-B1) I-Kontinue [vs] UnaBomber [Final]
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Forum Name: Next Generation
Forum Description: Tournament By: Scotty32 - Won by: UnaBomber
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=9616
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:14am
Topic: R3-B1) I-Kontinue [vs] UnaBomber [Final]
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: R3-B1) I-Kontinue [vs] UnaBomber [Final]
Date Posted: 06 September 2006 at 9:02am
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20lines min - 24lines max First to 5 or 3KO No Biting No Recycling No Dickryde Votes No Feeding/Flipping Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! No Vote swaying Allowed Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 12th of September 2006 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. if your opponent doesnt show, you STILL have to, otherwise you will be concidered as a no-show too. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! or you can email it to mailto:[email protected] - [email protected] Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. -------------  |
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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 22 September 2006 at 12:49pm
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due to stalin backin out.... this is now the final to the tourny rules have been changed to unlimited lines ------------- |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 01 October 2006 at 4:46pm
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am sorry bout the dely - but vote the hell up i-Kontinue:
UnaBomber:
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i-Kontinue wrote:
Posted By: Prophecy
Date Posted: 01 October 2006 at 5:50pm
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DAAAAMMMMM!!!!
Aight heres the breakdown
,;ikon;,
Flow was sick through out the whole entire spit, I was feeling that man, structure was in-tact and everything fell into place like it should. Punchlines were hittin hard.
~Verse Break Down~
Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide
http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8993&PN=1 - You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? ^^ That was sick^^ Nice visual/Personal
I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls
^^ Liked the pen, nep switch up, originalty ^^ Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played
Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�) ^^ Nice Personal Hit^^
Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk
Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* ^^Ouch, Very Nice^^
Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows
And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow ^^Joke on the janitor, Nice Personal Hit again^^
Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and�
This ain�t the first time we seen http://www.toysnjoys.com/gba/bomberman.jpg - "Game drop a Bomber, man" ^^Boom!!^^
Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8728&PN=2 - vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!)
^^Lol thats sad, should have been a 3-0, Nice Personal^^
Nice Drop
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,;Una;,
Dam dude nice drop, your flow was sick, and like ikon ur structure was also in-tact, good personal hits, nice use of mulits
~Verse Break Down~
Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot
I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine ^^ lol bubba gump, nice punch^^
Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered
Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! ^^Solid punch, nice creativty^^
Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery
^^Another nice punch^^
Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!"
^^Ouch^^
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" ^^Swooooot!! Nice!!^^
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) ^^Dope^^
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
^^Dope, Nice Creativity^^
So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beast
An' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;) ^^DOPE!!^^ Nice Drop
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Flow- Ikon
Structure- tie
Multi- tie
Personals- Ikon
Creativity - Una
Open- Ikon
Finish -Una
Overall Vote-Ikon for better flow, personal hits and a better opener
Best of luck to the both of you, Im out
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 01 October 2006 at 5:59pm
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Cool shit I-kon.. Pretty much what i expected.. Personally this should be a race to 5 vote's, cus i know the herb's will be here first (Sorry Pro, decent brakedown) & it deserves some quality vote's from quality head's..
Surely this is hall of fame shit... ------------- 
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Posted By: G-Pfeif
Date Posted: 01 October 2006 at 8:19pm
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Game Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo ^^^ nice idea... wasnt feelin it tho, lesbian homo is redundant... A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!) ^decent personal with an ok multi Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide forum_posts.asp?TID=8993&PN=1 - You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? ^^despite what Prophecy says... this bar was gay... good personal... but you didnt do anything with it You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu forum_posts.asp?TID=8922&PN=1 - duckin' ma calls I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls ^^^ Nice... by far the best bar in ur verse... Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here) ^^^ mediocre line This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay! ^^^ lame Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�) ^^^ lame Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee) ^^^ first line is dumb.... but second line is a pretty tight personal/punch Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty) ^^^ first line, ehhh... second was pretty good personal/punch Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD! ^^^ ehhh nothin special Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines �EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! ^^^ so-so personal... if its true Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) ^^^ decent personal Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and� This ain�t the first time we seen http://www.toysnjoys.com/gba/bomberman.jpg - "Game drop a Bomber, man" ^^^ second best bar Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes ...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two ^^^ not feelin it... poor setup for second line It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful? Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a forum_posts.asp?TID=8728&PN=2 - vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!) ^^^ pretty good personal... nice Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun? I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned" ^^^ first line- ehhh...... second line is good Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull� http://www.posterplanet.net/new/images/jordanshoot.jpg - You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull" ^^^ nice idea... just not feelin it... "shoot for bull"???? kinda forcin shit to work for ya there --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- UNA Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
^^^ ehh, decent, coulda been better Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you! Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true ^^^ nothin special Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine" ^^^ nice bar Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! ^^^ good bar It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo" ^^^REAL TIGHT Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
^^^ another tight line... lol Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!" ^^^ decent punch/multi
Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
^^ decent wordplay Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine" ^^^ ehhh not feelin it
Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing ^^^ good punch/personal Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain) ^^^ nice wordplay Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain" ^^^ ok I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" ^^^ TIGHT... possibly the best bar of the battle
Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page) ^^^ good personal/punch
Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
^^^ decent My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's' ^^^ decent punch
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) ^^^ nice wordplay
Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop ^^^ ILL PUNCH I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?! ^^^ tight punch I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches" ^^^ decent punch
You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!" ^^ solid
I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
^^^ nice wordplay on his name
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
^^^ decent
..So now my bar's are unleashed, we see Game's far from a beastAn' next time you 'open up to me' i'll make you wear ya "heart on ya sleeve!" ;) ^^^ nice multis... decent punch I give this to UNA.... both had great flow and personals... both came with some tight bars... BUT... Una had more hard hitting punches... Game had some sick lines... but he also had some ehhh ones... and alot of his bars would have weak first lines and nice second ones, while Una had a more consistant level of punches. AWSOME BATTLE ------------- <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 02 October 2006 at 12:25pm
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Firstly, stunning battle, maaajor props Game and Bomber... Ikon... Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo Nice rhyming, not sure about the lesbian homo thing... A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!) Hmm.ive seen this kinda punch used a bit...still worked well tho... Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide forum_posts.asp?TID=8993&PN=1 - You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? Nice..good personal You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu forum_posts.asp?TID=8922&PN=1 - duckin' ma calls I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls Veery nice line... Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here) Pretty good... This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay! Not feeling this... Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�) Ha...nice... Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee) Filler first line but killer 2nd... Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty) Nice... Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD! Seemed like filler to me... Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines �EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! Very good bar... Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) Good enough...nice rhyming... Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and� This ain�t the first time we seen http://www.toysnjoys.com/gba/bomberman.jpg - "Game drop a Bomber, man" Ooouuuuuuchhh......beauty Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes ...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two Really starting to pick up here... It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful? Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a forum_posts.asp?TID=8728&PN=2 - vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!) Ha... Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun? I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned" Beauty... Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull� http://www.posterplanet.net/new/images/jordanshoot.jpg - You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull" This was nice but could have been better... Unabomber... (ncie opening section Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
Just a starter really, but nice Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you! Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine" Nice 4 lines here...first 2 simple but effective Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! Dope play.. It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro
Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo" Once again, really nice play.. Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
And again...smooth rhyming too... Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!" Hahahahahaha...sick Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
Not quite as good... Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine" Very nice once again... Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain) Nice personal/punch combo here...beautiful play... Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain" I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames
Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" Stunning set of bars...2nd one your best of the verse... Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick
Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page) Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
ONce again, brilliant plays... My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's' Filler 1st but fair enough, nice play again You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop Veeery good... I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?! I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches" You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!" I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con) Game had more actual direct punches and a tight-assed flow (and the bomberman line was fiiire), but some of Unabomber's plays were absolutely sublime, and the rest were by and large very nice...he inserted just enough personals and nameplays to prevent the verse becoming too generic...I'll have to say, by a fly's penis-length, on the strength of the plays, UnaBomber GMV....Every one of these really, really ncie... ------------- |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 02 October 2006 at 8:20pm
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Ha @ at a fly's penis length^... So vivid
Thanks for the quick, well explained votes so far though... I've read them all actually, (as I usually do) and it seems it came down to a battle of majority personals vs majority wordplay... different styles... As expected... Still upping for votes |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 06 October 2006 at 12:39pm
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Upping.. -------------
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 10 October 2006 at 4:48pm
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Come on people.. Don't be sleeping on this.. -------------
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 10 October 2006 at 7:30pm
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kon... Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo Meh...kinda played, not up to your usual standard that iv come to expect A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!) Not bad, was a personal so it hit Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? Nice..good personal You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu duckin' ma calls I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls Dope, nice flip on pen n nep...and it hit Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here) Personal...but wasnt much of a punch, more of just a question/statement This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay! Meh....weak for your standards man Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�) Ha...nice...was a personal and it hit nicely Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee) Nice, set up was weak but followed through nicely Threw to the dump� given up a fest to the crows And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty) Nice... Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD! Meh Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines �EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! Dope punch...if it's true Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) Nice, hit and was a personal Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and� This ain�t the first time we seen "Game drop a Bomber, man" hahaha nice, great wordplay Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes ...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two Again played off his name and it hit nicely It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful? Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!) Meh...not bad Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun? I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned" Nice Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull� You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull" This was nice but could have been better... Unabomber... Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!".. Meh....good opener i guess but not hard hittin Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you! Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine" Not bad, not the best lines but they hit cos they were personal Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! Concepts kinda played but it still hit It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo" really nice play.. Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery" Meh again concepts played Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!" lol nice Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran Nice Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine" Coulda been better...but was iight Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing Meh...was more a statement than a punch Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain) Nice Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain" Meh...again a personal statement not a punch I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" Nice Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page) Nice Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?] Nice My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's' lol nice You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) meh Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop Nice I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?! Not bad I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches" hmmm...was iight You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!" nice I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con) not bad I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con) Nice -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Overall - Firstly dope battle by both, both had some nice punches that impressed me, but for me game come with more direct punches and had more than made me think "wow...that hit hard", the bar of the battle was the bomberman bar that was stright fire, wasnt an easy decision at all as Una certaintly held his own in this battle but for me personally game took it with more direct punches. Vote - Game -------------  |
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 10 October 2006 at 7:30pm
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Good battle...
I-kon... flow was sick... Nice rhymes and rhyme-scheme... Multies and transitional rhymes were nice... Not much wordplay... but loads of nice personals throughout the verse... A bit of filler...
UnaBomber... very nice intro... After that... a poor start to the verse until the wordplay picked up... Lots and lots of wordplay... some pretty sick... some played or tenuous... A few nice personals... but too many generic punches... Rhyme-scheme picked up towards the end... Vote: I-kontinue...
Adios...  -------------  |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:32am
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Lmao @ KayB saying Meh at 90% of my lines.. -------------
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:33am
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3-2 Game.. -------------
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 10:39am
90%?..... i said meh to 5 of your lines.... If ya goona cry about it dont count the vote, jus wont waste my time in voting in future, ------------- |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 10:44am
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Shit, this is the dopest battle that ive seen ina while.... Ok...Ikon: Came out blazin...opener was hot punch to start the battle with...personal made it stronger....flow was sick...could have used a couple transistional rhymes to assist however....some dope wordplay...Nep line was fire...the personal about "punk" him not really listenin to rap was killer....
"Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines
�EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) " ^murderous shit right there
The only complaint about this drop is closer...it was a hot line if not kinda played imo...i personally woulda had my second to last bar as my closer cuz that killer...any way...sick fuckin drop...
Junior: On the real, u been on fire lately...aside from the battle with the novice (forget his name...irrelevent lol) every drop ive seen from u has been consistantly fire...this drop was no different...Basically Una put on a "wordplay clinic" with shit...i aint gonna lie i really cant think of anybody who is better with wordplay than jr...this also is your downfall however...it seems you focused on lots of wordplay (as always ur style which is dope) however with the drop that game had, he had waaay more personals...yours was straight fiiiiire...however not as direct as Ikons...saturn line was siiick...Miami heat line was tight...maybe a bit played seein all the heat lines thats been bein used in battles recently...
You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) ^sick ass shit
Opener and the closer was hot...
Overall: Sick ass battle...could prob go either way...but the deciding factor in a really hot ass close battle is.....personals....Ikon simply had the more direct, personal drop...He jus had too many personals that really hit hard..honestly without those personals, Una woulda won...Props to both, i would really like to see rematch...
Vote: Ikontinue....-1
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 11:40am
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Ok i did'nt want to say this but can we have some none Dynasty crew votes... Im not hatin' just i would like a few more vets to peep this or someone thats not involved with either crew... -------------
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 4:57pm
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WOW! first of all, great verses from the both of you...damn this was a tight battle...
Game: Good shit, Nice verse again...I felt like ya verse was dope...Had some nice punches and shit...good personals...some multi's if I remember correctly...I did feel like the begining was just a bit slow though...Opener was kinda played but decent still...didn't like the gay line either...Just about everything afterwords was dope though...good shit, once again
Junior: My how you've grown up...J/P...Good shit though, Ya verse was hot also...As expected, you came with alot of wordplay and nameplay...Your opener wasn't all that great either...Niether was ya closer...Closer was a bit of a stretch...Other than that, didn't see any other problems...You had alot of mentionables in ya verse...Plenty of hot lines...Once again good shit....
Overall: As expected for a final, ya'll both drop ridiculous bars (both in numbers and creativity)...If the battle wasn't so long I would have voted earlier...I finally decide to though...I felt both participant brought their a game to the battle ("A game" nice little name play...) but I felt...
Junior took this, wordplay was fucking tight, Yea game came with nice punches but juniors wordplay had more of an effect to me...I responded more to it, even chuckled a bit...Props to both and stay up... ------------- 
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 2:15pm
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aight, im gonna break this down easier than i normally do... ikon junior just like everyone else, i expected una's verse to be full of wordplay, but i think he worked them well enough IMO to get the job done... he just had more OH SHIT bars to me, and less bars that i thought didn't work... shav, you had a good verse too bro, i just think una came more aggressive in this 1... therefore unabomber GMV |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 3:04pm
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Wow, thanks to all the voters so far... It's now tied at 4-4... It's no science next vote win's...
& im sure Ikon will agree... No herb vote's please... Someone who is trusted to decide who win's this tourny is only fair...
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Posted By: frank white
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:21pm
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I will vote on this tomoz if thats ok with the battlers ? ------------- the punching machine 
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:22pm
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Im happy for you to drop the final vote... Ikon?.. -------------
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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:22pm
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Ps. make it'a dope brake down.. -------------
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Posted By: Mackie
Date Posted: 14 October 2006 at 10:16am
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game
Yeah, Ya moved to Romania just to get with ya hoe, so This PUSSY is pussy whipped� like a lesbian homo lol, nice idea the setup is weak compared to the second line tho.. liked how ya paused after hoe, then said so, think that although simple wud sound dope in a audio,
A threat �n you�ll no show, yet you swear ya bad �n ya big The fact of it is� I ONLY TALKED TO YOU FOR AVYS AND SIGS (thanks!) good punch, landed well, flow was dope, liked the bad n big wordin to Damaged ya wit� punches, ain�t lettin� that shit slide http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8993&PN=1 - You won't vote against ya crew? What more proof that ya dick ride? didnt like this bar the wordin of the dick ride bit was off, You bitch. Why? �Cus of the fact I gotchu http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8922&PN=1 - duckin' ma calls I�ll just assume ya peN is dry �cus Nep is suckin� ya balls good play, n multi, wasnt a hard hitter but was good, Ya frontin�, c�mon� All ya claims don�t fill in the gap Why ya register L.A. if you don�t listen to rap?! (�fuck outta here) wordin in second line was off, matbe you jus missed the to i dunno, didnt like the claims dont fill in the gap, jus a litle meaninless or a stretched concept This bitch can�t relax: We all know you hide your age And there�s nooo explanation dogg� Besides you�re gay! i thought this bar was abit weak, hidin ya age don make u gay.. youve worded it to sound like a better punch than it is IMO, Ya rhymes are plays� and indeed ya lines are played Dude�s gotta explain EVERYTHING he�s tryna say (�cuz it�s forced�) not bad flows on point, nice rhymin, Ya types are straight av�rage�There�s no cue to ya junk Fuck ya music preference, dudes already knew you were Punk* (oooooooweeee) think u ment 2 say clue insted a cue.. if ya didnt this bar went ova my hed, liked the wordin n the multi flowed it well, nice punch n personal Threw to the dump� given up a feast to the crows And ya �cleanin �shit� up?�?� think� You forgettin� ya flow! (iiiit's shitty) i didnt like this coz its like you relyin on the comment afterwards. sorta takes away from the lin IMO Yes �n ya know� Ya left, and I�ll admit I was mad But if that�s all you�ve gotten on me then that SHIT IS JUST SAD! yes n ya know part sounds a lil gay, flows everything well, jus think u cud of used somethin more aggressive or productive Flippin� ya lands!� It�s almost like I taught you ya lines �EVEN YOU ADMITTED THAT YOUR STYLE WAS TRACED OFF OF MINE! good solid punch, flowed nice Aimin� ya eyes at him� YOU�LL be seein� the fake: When Nep recruited, even SMOOTH thought you were bein� a snake... (True Story...) nice personal hit, flows on point, Ya easy as cake the way all my punches landing on ya, and� This ain�t the first time we seen http://www.toysnjoys.com/gba/bomberman.jpg - "Game drop a Bomber, man" didnt flow as well as the rest of your verse so far, obvious play to, still nice Plus� Ya can�t defend the way I hurt ya�ll dudes ...Bomb ain�t "dropped no serious damage" since in World War Two nice punch, hit, It�s Ikon verse who? How is it sooo suspenseful? Battled �GAINST a NOVICE rank, and got a http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8728&PN=2 - vote AGAINST you! (Pro?!) good punch again, rhymin was niice, didnt like the comment thing again tho Hence� you ain�t a rival. Tec�s (text) spray like a gun? I-kontinue to call you "Junior"...Why? Ya still gettin� "sonned" lol, favourite line so far, junior - sonned is played but that was dope anywho.. Layed in the dump with text� no resolute to pull� http://www.posterplanet.net/new/images/jordanshoot.jpg - You're second J wit' "forced plays", and always "shoot for Bull" dope line, hit well overall i think ya verse was dope but theyre wernt some of that really clever shit like you dropped in that battle with M.I , n that was time ago, i expected to be blown away by ya verse but think although you got punches in perfect flow all the way through, its just missing sumin, this a dope verse, but you missin the wow factor, i think its cause in battles recently you been takin on cats far below ya level, n you can jus list personals n put in a set up n win, thats what i see in this verse, its all straight but not like 'shit howd he think of that'.. on the good side of things tho the flow was perfect, all ya punches hit sometimes not that hard but they hit, ya rhymin was dope, n its definetly a hard verse to battle against... una ..Im the diffrence between us, a Master with each phrase
Plus i stay hot 'weather' or not you asked for a heatwave (whether) wheter play is playd, still nice bar tho rhymed well wit the multi Let me rephrase.. Fuck Game, i'll get rid of ya crew 'An engrave "Junior" across ya face as my 'signature move'... again nice lines no real punch but yu jus flexin ya plays.. flowd dope, really liked the rephrase bit, cause yu play wit phrases, sorta connected in my hed dunno if u ment that tho.
Summin' smell's bad!, i'll kick your team & there odor
Cus' the 'Game's finished' now like the "Cricket season is over!"..
first punch, hit, lol at goin for a sorta u smell punch, was nice, these three bars seem like you jus fukkin about tho, takes away from ya lines a lil, Why'd i join The Dynasty?, sympathy for you! Ya clique's dope? your sick? both simply are not true alrite, liked the sorta question n answer thing, the both simply are not true rhymed well jus didnt sound good, Your wimpy, so's ya crew, there chump's your'a faggot I'll eat this 'shrimp' in more ways than "Bubba Gump could imagine" read this bar three times, it almost flows i think you should have rhymed faggot in a line before it and had the gump shrimp line as a stand on its own line rather than have two non rhyming lines, play is good though, nice concept definetly, Ya shit'll get battered, text ripped up an scattered Kon couldn't 'hang with me in the ring' if we kicked it on Saturn! flows good, play is good, nice hitter, simple n effective, still not personal tho It wont happen cus' your talent's hardly elite bro Una's got Game 'dread-in'a loss' like "Bob Marley in kemo" lol, play was dope, good punch, flow was on point. Darn'it your weak flow ain't nice it's missin' G
He could be'a 'virgin birth' an' still not have'a "tight delivery"
sick play again, not agressive, humourous tho, n clever Kon love's my swagger, he'll be feelin' this fist too
It's like Game's 'saving magazine's' he's got "serious issues!" dope line, deliverd nice Straight k-o this gimmick, who's text we don't mention
Cus' when you write im 'pushing bored' like'a legless veteran
nice rhymin n play, liked the gimmic-con/kon connection Fuck The Dynasty G.. You can't manage'a DOPE team Plus, Battling J's a 'hell of'a gamble' like'a "satanic slot machine" flows nice again nice play Drop your fake personals, it's fact they aint landing
Game ain't sick.. That's why he drafted in hanGing alrite, kinda filla.. Kid your no vet, infact your lame with the text I'll just open ya throat like'a window your'a "pane" in the neck (Pain) lol, at refrence to hanging in last bar n the play in this is one haning used in the crew battle.. no relevence or anything jus thought its wierd how that happended.. alrite play, wordin was wierd Game'll get wrecked cus' his dissing is lame Never thought much of you, like i was "missing my brain" lol... good bar, simple.. one of thoe i cud of thought of that but wudnt lines
I'll eat up an' maim him with the neat'est of flames Kid's think im 'Miami's coach driver'.. I bring "Heat to the Game" nice play, think u need to switch it up abit tho, in the play to punch/persie ratio Assassin's are dope, peeps hate it cus im notably sick Kon the 'writings on the wall' for you like your Dynasty sig (Crew Page) sorta likd it, didnt hit to hard good concept tho Shit your weak an' what you speak & preach is past it
Junior's 'out the reach of kid's' like "bleach an' tablets".. [Sup Kon?]
rymins off a lil for me, My whole clique is dope, we drop sublime theme's
While your's is "clueless" like 'Rookie Cop's at crime scene's' You've never been fire well Una's bar's are hell
Kon couldn't be 'Inn-credible' as'a "five'star hotel".. ;) Junior's praised, he get's props, but Game? his best flop's
Tracks would'nt "make'a kick underground" with'a basement sweatshop I'll detach your limbs.. Leave your back in split's Toss your arm's in the river..... Catch the drift?! I'll smash your shit, leave you fucked up on crutches It's fact brah "I pack more name's then you pack punches" You can't jack, touch this cus' Game force's an' more
His flow's 'dead on arrival' like "corpses in morgues!" I'll make you forfeit of course, Junior's short fuzed
No-one's 'hearing you Kon' except the "court room" (Con)
I'll thwart you, Game'll get left in blood & bone's
When my stunning flow's "air Kon" like summer home's.. (Con)
for above reasons im voting una.. u can discount this if ya really waitin for frank i ain bothered |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 14 October 2006 at 2:47pm
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Wow... You came down hella hard on us both there... I or Ikon can't stop you voting & i don't see you as'a herb so, if Scotty's happy with all the votes...
5-4 me...  ..-------------
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Posted By: Mackie
Date Posted: 14 October 2006 at 2:50pm
| i skool both u bitchaaaas |
Posted By: I-kontinue
Date Posted: 16 October 2006 at 4:09am
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Riight^
Anyway... I just got back home from a week end trip and wanted to see if this had gotten anywhere... appearantly it did... and not in my favor... one of those battles that heavily depends on who drops their vote first... I'm not exactly sure what Frank is a fan of, but it would have been interesting to see where he would have gone with this...
Yeah, this verse wasnt as polished as I usually do... The verses were due a long time before I sent in ma verse, and I thought this was all waitin' on meeeee, so I sent in what I had at the time... I usually read it a couple times through first, but really didnt this time and just sent in what I had... Then I realized Una hadnt even finished yet either... Ha... Ya won't be so lucky next time son... ...Every one loses as a wake up call... Many instances of that... Mark this one down in the archives though Scotty... it's history. |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 16 October 2006 at 4:40pm
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