Need a rank
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Forum Name: Spit for Rank
Forum Description: Dont like bein a Novice? Wanna be a Professional? Spit a verse here
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=9647
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:59am
Topic: Need a rank
Posted By: Red-Star
Subject: Need a rank
Date Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:26am
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This is the first verse of a song i'm doin with hopes of makin it audio be harash lol its called callin card and the styles a bit strange but i think it flows well Peace
(Hook)
I kick in the door leave blood on the matress
Scatteres limbs on the floor kid gets chopped up by hatchets
Stick the knife in the back leavin all life devoured
Gotta lasarate the kneck bytch thats my callin card
As darkness decends on the corner of my brain the voices demand killin
From the seed line of Cain we came the fallen angles children
Ready to take blood every savage killin a work of art a sculpture
Faceless coarpses in the mudd gettin circuled by the vultures
Just victums of human culture
Its animal instinct bascially i stay equiped with a scaple and rip saw
To tackle any problem thats facein me rubber gloves on each paw An solvents so nobody tracin me fuck it I say on top of the food pyrmiad
So pigs aint lyibail to be chasin me shit i swipe at swine with blades
And stab em with knifes so blunt I really gotta force it into the rib cage
A murderous sage when its war i wage i open ya chest
Snippin your main vains with wire snips leave you slowly bleedin to death
And weasin for breath while i'm hackin the limbs pushin the blade back an
forth cuttin the bone an breakin the skin
Survioul chances are slim i'm a professional check my murder methods
I studied Manson, Bunday, Jack the Ripper and Hannibal hit styles been tryed and tested
to much of my time has been invested in leavin bodies layed up in chalk
i'd sooner spray the heat for weeks than see a victum walk and talk ------------- http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=3405862&q=hi&ref=6 - Irish Republician Army http://www.upthera.cjb.net - WWW.UpTheRa(For republician research needs) |
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Posted By: Red-Star
Date Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:30am
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once again excusse the spellin lol ------------- http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=3405862&q=hi&ref=6 - Irish Republician Army http://www.upthera.cjb.net - WWW.UpTheRa(For republician research needs) |
Posted By: Red-Star
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 8:16pm
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what does aguy gotta do to get ranked around here?
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Posted By: ILLSTARRR
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 8:43pm
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high nov/ low ama -------------   www.myspace.com/illsta |
Posted By: Demonic
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 9:05am
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Nov ------------- |
Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 1:14pm
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high nov |
Posted By: xXTormentXx
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 5:51pm
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Medium Novice~ ------------- Abstract~is~Creativity 
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Posted By: Prophecy
Date Posted: 30 September 2006 at 11:48am
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ok im not a judge but in my opinion high nov bro
You had a decent flow but it was all just simple rhyming man, no real wordplay going on and the attempted multis were simple, not alot of vocab going on and the concept was kinda plain
U got good potential though man ------------- I Fuckin Suck |