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    Posted: 22 September 2004 at 7:22pm

Rules: 12 bars...

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Yo... Yo...

Each of my twelve bars could leave your health scarred,
Don't ask Orion for help or you might find yourself barred
And forced to leave the Renegades cos it's time for them to fade,
I'll turn them from a crew of men to maids... afraid cos their pens' decayed,
I've bent the blade of my dagger but I'll still stab you with its jagged edge,
This fag alleged I spit so much he drowned... so I had him dredged,
I savage threads like your below-average text everyday,
You should know you can't contest maverick Vets unless we say,
Bless the day you betrayed us... I'm glad you never stayed... plus...
Compared to Apollo's saviours you wouldn't have ever claimed trust,
Cos since I gained thrust my brain's been busting rhymes 'bout,
To fucking flip Stalin's mind and turn his guts inside out,
So look... fly south cos I know you're gonna duck this,
I took the piss even though I don't suck dicks,
But fuck this...  Fuck you...  And fuck your entire crew,
You're a liar if you say Apollo's lyre doesn't inspire you,
But prior to you leaving we held a private discussion,
What weapons of mass destruction can we fire at this Russian...?
I'll push him to rush his spit and spoil it 'fore I crush his clique,
He blushes quick cos he was on the toilet when I saw him flush his dick,
Stalin calls on his poor scrawlings to stall a mauling,
But I'll scorn him at four in the morning without a warning,
He was born into a life of forlorn strife and turmoil,
Before Seņor he was on the floor... rife with earth-soil...

Adios...

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ive beat u before dont try to test now, act like ya shits blessed, how?
U couldnt "eat this dawg" if ur eyes were stretched out
son u gettin damaged quick, ur crews so inactive theres no one to manage it
I think its time for a name change, it dont help to spell it in spanish bitch
if u gave birth to Jordan U still aint producin a win, u losin again
cuz I "see men" fall more than theres juice on ya chin
my text slay dudes, we the best laced crew
ya rhymes make this page garbage, so Ill let the 'X Fade' u
get ya crew to attack this, u tryin to 'run wit the ball' dude just 'pass it'
cuz Im breakin down 'hard drives' like mother fuckin computer hackers
i brought death to u when I left the crew now ya troops is scarred
try to drop 'bombs' but I 'defuse' ya bars, see how my departure hit ya crew so hard
Xfades dead and nothin save them, ya style 'cracks at faults' like busted pavement
how can I be accused of duckin gays when, its my 3rd time battlin this fuckin asain
how many times we bust ya team, ya rhymes is nothin mean
I bet u wouldnt be so cocky if u werent behind the fuckin screen
the hits leave u dead man, ya raps 'Common' I can see 'The Bitch In Yoo' by ya red pants
I drop lines in '2's' so u catchin more 'shit than bed pans'
cant respect this cock sucker, ur punches missed u got stuck first
U couldnt 'come' wit ur own 'material' if u was a 'sock fucker'
ull get quickly scarred, like 'former convicts' i aint gonna miss these 'bars'
no way Perfectos takin this cuz like 'virgin pussy' he cant 'hit me hard'
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Senor - Verse was packed with multis... some nice punches... see you trying new things... Flow was tight... wordplay was cool... had some personals... mainly about the Renegades... overall nice Verse

Stalin - Multis were like Senors, but structured like Frank White ... anywhoo... liked the multis they were on point & helped the flow, wordplay was niice... had personals on him... some about his also... punches were nice...

Im gona give this to Stalin... just feeling his verse more... & his had alot more of effective wordplay

Vote ~ Stalin



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Perfecto  = Complexity galore, felt like i was readin a fucckin encyclopedia article haha... flow was nice, multis ..always there... and nice punchez (personals) about Renegades..had some Ok wordplay

Stalin =very nice verse, punchez were hard-hittin and like clipz sed internal multis gave it that xtra "umph"...but flow was pretty off in some places....had sum good wordplay in there mayn

My vote gota go 2 perfecto, consistent flow, funny punchez and crazy multis, but Stalin still hada killer verse ... good battle

v/ Perfecto

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nice battle....

 

flow - perfecto
multies - perfecto (dayum)
vocab - perfecto
punches - perecto....haha
structure - stalin

 

vote ~ senor perfecto

lately cats wanna know why poetics a cocky~fuck/
cuz im rich im seein more ice then a hockey~puck/

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I'll vote anyway... Senor won't mind...

Perfecto... this was probably the best flowing verse I've read from you, and best use of multis too... with that came some fire... You came aggressive like you really hated him, but the personals were all too similar... A little more wordplay would have been helpful too... but for coherence and fluidity this was pretty much untouchable...

Stalin... flow was also good due to the amount of rhymes you included but not quite up there with Senor, Senor also mixed up his rhyme scheme a lot more... though yours was still nice as always... You had a fair amount of wordplay, a lot of it unoriginal but the way in which you used it didn't require it to be any outstanding concept, but they kept coming and there were plenty of jabs... Personals good, more well-rounded and just as aggressive as his were...

Gonna have to go to Stalin JUST about for having more personal battle feel to it, and more constant punching...

If we still had battle of the month, this would be right up there along with me/Jehu and IceC/Lawless... damn this month has been good...

VOTE: Stalin...

2-2

Uppin'...

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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OKey....

Senor: Starts cool......has his moments....but usually drifts into tellin a story....i mean....he gets weak on punches.....to much tryin to tell us what was happenin....weak hittin on the opponent.....you came semi-heavy.....

Stalin: His first to barz are fire.....he keeps poundin on his opponent....droppin hot comperations and metas on him....and finishis with a great line....which is the line of the battle as far as I go.....but styed complex thru the whole verse....


My Vote: Stalin
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Punch:Stalin more consistant
Multis:SP
Wordplay:Stalin
Flow:SP

Good battle, but as senor drifted into story tellin
stalin was smashin him in with nice wordplay encorperated punchlines.

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4-2 Stalin...

Uppin'...

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Flow and multis usually always go to SP
They do here, but it was close.
Personals go to Stalin. Perfecto's seemed kinda like he shoulda used them a couple of months ago when he left the crew.
Wordplay goes to Stalin, cause they made the
Punches hit harder

Vote: Stalin

lol at poetic rhymes' vote....
Perecto...
Insert something rappy here
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It's ov3r

Stakun wins 5-2.

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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