Text Battle Archive: Seņor Perfecto vs Stalin... Round 2... |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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Posted: 22 September 2004 at 7:22pm |
Rules: 12 bars... Adios... |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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Yo... Yo... Each of my twelve bars could leave your health scarred, Adios... |
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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ive beat u before dont try to test now, act like ya shits blessed, how?
U couldnt "eat this dawg" if ur eyes were stretched out son u gettin damaged quick, ur crews so inactive theres no one to manage it I think its time for a name change, it dont help to spell it in spanish bitch if u gave birth to Jordan U still aint producin a win, u losin again cuz I "see men" fall more than theres juice on ya chin my text slay dudes, we the best laced crew ya rhymes make this page garbage, so Ill let the 'X Fade' u get ya crew to attack this, u tryin to 'run wit the ball' dude just 'pass it' cuz Im breakin down 'hard drives' like mother fuckin computer hackers i brought death to u when I left the crew now ya troops is scarred try to drop 'bombs' but I 'defuse' ya bars, see how my departure hit ya crew so hard Xfades dead and nothin save them, ya style 'cracks at faults' like busted pavement how can I be accused of duckin gays when, its my 3rd time battlin this fuckin asain how many times we bust ya team, ya rhymes is nothin mean I bet u wouldnt be so cocky if u werent behind the fuckin screen the hits leave u dead man, ya raps 'Common' I can see 'The Bitch In Yoo' by ya red pants I drop lines in '2's' so u catchin more 'shit than bed pans' cant respect this cock sucker, ur punches missed u got stuck first U couldnt 'come' wit ur own 'material' if u was a 'sock fucker' ull get quickly scarred, like 'former convicts' i aint gonna miss these 'bars' no way Perfectos takin this cuz like 'virgin pussy' he cant 'hit me hard' |
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Noxious
Superior Member Joined: 29 January 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 4167 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 63-59-3 Form: NWLWLW |
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Senor - Verse was packed with multis... some nice punches... see you trying new things... Flow was tight... wordplay was cool... had some personals... mainly about the Renegades... overall nice Verse Stalin - Multis were like Senors, but structured like Frank White ... anywhoo... liked the multis they were on point & helped the flow, wordplay was niice... had personals on him... some about his also... punches were nice... Im gona give this to Stalin... just feeling his verse more... & his had alot more of effective wordplay Vote ~ Stalin |
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20theTruth
Superior Member Joined: 10 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2155 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Perfecto = Complexity galore, felt like i was readin a fucckin encyclopedia article haha... flow was nice, multis ..always there... and nice punchez (personals) about Renegades..had some Ok wordplay Stalin =very nice verse, punchez were hard-hittin and like clipz sed internal multis gave it that xtra "umph"...but flow was pretty off in some places....had sum good wordplay in there mayn My vote gota go 2 perfecto, consistent flow, funny punchez and crazy multis, but Stalin still hada killer verse ... good battle v/ Perfecto |
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PoEtIc~RhYmEz
Standard Member Joined: 01 October 2004 Location: Great Britain Status: Offline Points: 106 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: LWL |
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nice battle....
flow - perfecto
vote ~ senor perfecto |
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lately cats wanna know why poetics a cocky~fuck/
cuz im rich im seein more ice then a hockey~puck/ PoEtIc~RhYmEz aka WeSSoN |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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I'll vote anyway... Senor won't mind... Perfecto... this was probably the best flowing verse I've read from you, and best use of multis too... with that came some fire... You came aggressive like you really hated him, but the personals were all too similar... A little more wordplay would have been helpful too... but for coherence and fluidity this was pretty much untouchable... Stalin... flow was also good due to the amount of rhymes you included but not quite up there with Senor, Senor also mixed up his rhyme scheme a lot more... though yours was still nice as always... You had a fair amount of wordplay, a lot of it unoriginal but the way in which you used it didn't require it to be any outstanding concept, but they kept coming and there were plenty of jabs... Personals good, more well-rounded and just as aggressive as his were... Gonna have to go to Stalin JUST about for having more personal battle feel to it, and more constant punching... If we still had battle of the month, this would be right up there along with me/Jehu and IceC/Lawless... damn this month has been good... VOTE: Stalin... 2-2 Uppin'... |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Insomnia
Groupie Joined: 14 October 2004 Location: Slovenia Status: Offline Points: 50 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
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OKey....
Senor: Starts cool......has his moments....but usually drifts into tellin a story....i mean....he gets weak on punches.....to much tryin to tell us what was happenin....weak hittin on the opponent.....you came semi-heavy..... Stalin: His first to barz are fire.....he keeps poundin on his opponent....droppin hot comperations and metas on him....and finishis with a great line....which is the line of the battle as far as I go.....but styed complex thru the whole verse.... My Vote: Stalin |
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Abstrakt
Standard Member Joined: 23 March 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1702 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 32-17-2 Form: LLNNWW |
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Punch:Stalin more consistant
Multis:SP Wordplay:Stalin Flow:SP Good battle, but as senor drifted into story tellin stalin was smashin him in with nice wordplay encorperated punchlines. Vote:Stalin |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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4-2 Stalin... Uppin'... |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Flow and multis usually always go to SP
They do here, but it was close. Personals go to Stalin. Perfecto's seemed kinda like he shoulda used them a couple of months ago when he left the crew. Wordplay goes to Stalin, cause they made the Punches hit harder Vote: Stalin lol at poetic rhymes' vote.... Perecto... |
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Insert something rappy here
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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It's ov3r Stakun wins 5-2. |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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