Open Mic: Two Kinds...

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    Posted: 27 October 2004 at 10:11am

There are two kinds of people... The Good and The Evil...
We're all a bit of both... built with blood and bones... so we're equal...
There are two kinds of people... The Evil and The Good...
But I wouldn't wanna be either one of them... even if I could...

There are two kinds of people... the real and the fakes...
¿When the deal's signed and sealed will you still be standing by your mates...?
¿Or will you demand a higher stake...?  ¿A grander slice of cake...?
Until you've paid the price of fame thrice-over you won't understand that life's a game,
And then you'll see how times have changed... and rhymes have ranged to different styles,
While your mind was wild and deranged... as you behaved as an ignorant child,
Cos given time... every written rhyme's a bitten line,
So you gotta spit-n-shine the other kinds that these kids didn't find,
Maybe I'm reading different signs... or you're sending me misleading signals,
All you've fucking got is God... I've got doggs like I'm breeding pitbulls,
You fakers should be grateful that I cared enough to hate you,
You're scared I'll fucking break you like the time your parents raped you,
Go find and prepare a great crew cos you're sourer than grapefruit,
There's no escape route... no matter how many barrels you try to scrape through,
No, it ain't cute... seeing fake niggas dressed up in ape-suits,
So I paint truths... creating rhymes bigger than scenic 'scape shoots...

There are two kinds of people... The Good and The Evil...
We're all a bit of both... with blood and bones... so we're equal...
There are two kinds of people... The Evil and The Good...
But I wouldn't wanna be either one of them... even if I could...

There are two kinds of people... the educated and the dumb...
I'm a clever Veteran... I bet you hate it cos I won,
I laugh at nerds like you who don't know half the words I use,
¿Why do I battle crap rappers who have the worst IQ...?
But keep rapping and having fun... even if you're lacking in discipline,
So looking back... you can laugh...  You'd have to... to reminisce again,
Give us a minute... and we'll pick it up from the beginning,
So when it's over you'll say I told you to live up to what you're spitting,
You're lucky I'm forgiving... with lyrics befitting God,
Don't try biting or recycling cos you'll end up getting caught,
My head is sweating thoughts... rhymes perspire through my veins,
I'll lose my shame to lose... raise my game... and use my brain,
You can't choose where you came from but you can choose where to go,
¿Will you dare to show... and bare your soul...?  ¿Or will you be too scared to flow...?
As if you'd care to know... I care for those who spare their foes,
And anyone who swears their oaths... when they shared they woes and prayers arose...

There are two kinds of people... The Good and The Evil...
We're all a bit of both... with blood and bones... so we're equal...
There are two kinds of people... The Evil and The Good...
But I wouldn't wanna be either one of them... even if I could...

There are two kinds of people... the lovers and the haters...
Fuck those who state they're greater... but can't push us or evade us,
XFaders aren't afraid cos we have God's aid to palisade us,
Even scallies can feel like royalty... they just need the palace-papers,
Your joy'll be destroyed cos you don't toil in loyalty,
But these spoiled boys'll be recoiling if they think they can foil me,
Cos I do this shit enjoyably... can't possibly be displeased,
Especially when I squeeze a heater between his spleen and kidneys and then proceed to beat his Keys,
You'll never be as sweet as me...  You're a hater cos you're jealous,
You're envious of your enemy's eagerly awaited acapellas,
I'm afraid you have to tell us why you're showing us no love,
Knowing us alone should be enough... if not... so tough,
When you show off... I don't scoff...  I won't choke or cough,
I wouldn't chuckle at your punchlines... funny jokes or not,
¿Hoax or what...?  I must be the only real, educated lover,
In an ideal world I wouldn't hesitate to reveal you made it, brother...

There are two kinds of people... The Good and The Evil...
We're all a bit of both... with blood and bones... so we're equal...
There are two kinds of people... The Evil and The Good...
But I wouldn't wanna be either one of them... even if I fucking could...

There are two kinds of people...

Adios...

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I like this...  some lines were very long, but hey, that shit was hot anyway. I like the hook a lot too. Solid shit man.
Insert something rappy here
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Thickest crap Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 October 2004 at 11:04am
Nice spit about how great you are ...
But for real well done on this one.
You handle the topic well and seems to flow from
start to end.

Love this line.

"You fakers should be grateful that I cared enough to
hate you,"

Tis is great.

Thanks for the great read.

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That is fucking sick nice chorus well complex sick flow multis were dope this drop was of the hook
Man u have sick creativity in your open mic drops seriously now you should join the next open mic tourny or somein


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You want a beat for this...?

Very nice... smooth flow... not as rhyme-scheme oriented as most of your work is which I'd have liked to have seen to be honest but it still works, if you can rap the long lines fast enough then they're very effective too... In general a strong piece... 1

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

You want a beat for this...?



I was gonna ask the same thing.
RP...
Insert something rappy here
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well i think this will sound very good on audio


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There are two kinds of people... the strong and the weak
Those who fight for beliefs, and those who bomb at ya streets
The longer the reach, the stronger you'll bond wit' the beats
Convey the message of truth through a song or a speech
Ominously, misfortune looms like a fuse from a cannon to light
So be sure you push yourself as far as you can in this life
Whether you back from a fight, or you scrap till you die
As long as you maximize your potential, that will suffice
If a win is doubtful, fuck it an' take 'em on
Don't let critics oust you, live to prove the haters wrong
Fuck contentment, always strive for more ways to see truth
Have the strength to excel in all that you dream to
Whether equipped with thesises or spits with meagre hits
Drop that shit from the heart instead of rippin' sheets to bits
When all is done, all I can commit in speech is this
The strongest of us is the one who admits his weaknesses...

There are two kinds of people... The Good and The Evil...
We're all a bit of both... with blood and bones... so we're equal...
There are two kinds of people... The Evil and The Good...
But I wouldn't wanna be either one of them... even if I could...

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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wow....thatz shit right thurr that make a guy think... very nice SP.. multis ALWAYS there... flow ws on point and the message conveyed .. just hit ya hard like Ray Lewis i mean goodness gracious.. felt like i was readin you're mind.. cuz u displayed ur thoughts so well into words bigupz ~1~

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nice.... well everything, chorus was the best part i found but the remainder of the was right up there on consistency, and the message was kept throughtout
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