Open Mic: Blood & Bondage: Misdiagnosis

poor Lenny still believes Dr. Deshi, it was a bad trip
was the perfect candidate and had a passion for satanic shit
Metallica and Slipknot jamming in the back of his whip
He's an addict,  Amy had to get him smashed to commit
it was pretty graphic, She clamped on his neck and he panicked
Screams heard throughout the cabin as we practiced black magic
Speaking n tongue and Latin as Amy begins reeking havoc
Blood pouring as his heart laid there on slippery granite
open a cabinet and wrap it with some saran wrap and plastic
We're laughing as the ceremony picks up n people get dancing
Next Day, Lenny heads to Dr. Deshi's asking what happened
Desh chuckles n laughs "Kid, you took some shrooms that weren't so magic"
"Take a nap kid, here's a script for some Xanax so you can relax quick"
This bastard hasn't realized that he has no pulse nor heart
Or how when its the cold n' dark, his eyes pulse with Sonar
Or the sudden sensitivity to light n and interest in folk art
now listens to Mozart n has grown fond of horns of shofars
no longer a stoner nd has lust for broke poor blood donors
No more work, he has the urge to travel to Barcelona 
has to leave California, hes forming melanoma
The corona from the sun causing mellow glaucoma
Water is getting old, hes searching for a fix that he thinks its a fetish
aroma hits his nose, dead animals with their flesh ripped
Hes sick like a diabetic, he heads to a doctor in Venice
"Doc, Im from the states nd' lately my body has became a menace"
Doc checks his pulse nd' gets hit with Lenny's fist in a split second
Hes hesitant, leans in heading for his neck with his his weapons
 replenished, eludes detection nd' realizes the fucking horror
Deshi and Amy the whore morphed me into a blood sucking borer
Now im looking for whores on the corners for rape and torture
I slay and force dumb sluts to take the fangs with force n love
Right before i eat their brains n guts n force em to Fuck

Edited by daydizzle89 - 26 February 2016 at 8:52pm

I was gonna return to this in full tonight. but I got a min - lemme run through it again.



poor Lenny still believes Dr. Deshi, it was a bad trip
was the perfect candidate and had a passion for satanic shit
Metallica and Slipknot jamming in the back of his whip
He's an addict,  Amy had to get him smashed to commit 
it was pretty graphic, She clamped on his neck and he panicked
Screams heard throughout the cabin as we practiced black magic
Speaking n tongue and Latin as Amy begins reeking havoc 
Blood pouring as his heart laid there on slippery granite 
open a cabinet and wrap it with some saran wrap and plastic
We're laughing as the ceremony picks up n people get dancing

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I thought it was dope as fuck how you actually explained what took place. cause it was just a small tidbit - but in detail you broke down the actual goings on. very well I might add. the ritual tones were definitely onpoint and I love how it spun into a real event as opposed to an attempt gone horribly wrong. he doesnt feel so robbed here. he truly got his wish - but at what cost?





Next Day, Lenny heads to Dr. Deshi's asking what happened
Desh chuckles n laughs "Kid, you took some shrooms that weren't so magic"
"Take a nap kid, here's a script for some Xanax so you can relax quick"
This bastard hasn't realized that he has no pulse nor heart 
Or how when its the cold n' dark, his eyes pulse with Sonar
Or the sudden sensitivity to light n and interest in sickening folk art
now listens to Mozart n has grown fond of horns of some sort of shofars
no longer a stoner nd has lust for broke poor blood donors
No more work, he has the urge to travel to Barcelona 
has to leave California, hes forming melanoma 
The corona from the sun causing mellow glaucoma

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I didnt think too many people would catch onto the Dr being in on it in the original, so I was very pleased that you did. I love how descriptive the transformation process is. like the whole sonar thing. real dope.





Water is getting old, hes searching for a fix that he thinks its fetish 
aroma hits his nose, dead animals with their flesh ripped
Hes getting sick like a diabetic, he heads to a doctor in Venice
"Doc, Im from the states nd' lately my body has became a menace"
Doc checks his pulse nd' gets hit with Lenny's fist in a split second
Hes hesitant, leans in heading for his neck with his his weapons
 replenished, eludes detection nd' realizes the fucking horror
Deshi and Amy the whore morphed me into a blood sucking borer 
Now im looking for whores on the corners for rape and torture 
I slay and force dumb sluts to take the fangs with force n love
Right before i eat their brains n guts n force em to Fuck

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the realization couldve played out a bit more - but thats being picky really. I like he came to terms with who he is now, no looking back..no more old boring Lenny.. hes a wandering massacre. it could become a paradox later - who knows lol.


overall I thought you spun this real well. you brought a new light to it. I dug it alot.