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BIG GAME 
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 Topic: Chain -vs- Big GamePosted: 02 September 2010 at 12:48am |
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Unlimited Lines
Chain was to drop first according to the call out thread...
but if I get impatient, I might go ahead and drop first
All fair votes
Begins after Chain checks
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CHAIN
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Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 02 September 2010 at 5:35pm |
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hold this...
You just got hip to rap, my speeches are historical And me I did all that without reading the tutorials Wack for 2 decades, I’m deeming it deplorable 2 months ago, you capiche’d what us performers knew Now you’re on the Wizards leaping in your Jordan shoes But the *L.A champs* left you deeper than an orca’s womb Far from being complex, ya thesis is primordial And I was mod killin’ on these demons way before your crew We only respect you when you’re being a reporter, dude I want the headline for R.I.P-ing you…’mourning’ news Impersonating gangstas, made Eazy-E adorable Talkin ‘bout a sexy beotch u’ve seen all over porno tube U made that childish sig, creepy and abnormal too ‘cause it won’t be long ‘fore u the reach the age of 42 Beat you till u’r organ soup, I keeps it methaphorical U wanna choke me out? Wow, I’m beefin’ with a forum goon REAL TALK! TRUST THAT! The streets are riding for this dude I’d have to be J5 to believe that half your story’s true If your pops could see the weakling that u morphed in to He’d summon Nep’s dad to plead against your corny moves Speaking on the dead, that diva shit is more than rude Fuck beating up the dead, I’m peeing on this horse’s tomb Bitch, you ain’t a man, they warned you like a toddler They got you by the balls but you warring with the mods huh Once again I’ll ask u, who these mods you killin? Predictable and corny, u’r worse than a cartoon villain So fucking sensitive…who you really mad at? The Tourette wigga, hillbilly with the Taz swag Mod killah? man, your crew is on the menu ...'smog filter’…OOPS, did I offend you? Bragging ‘bout the mag, I see what you endorse Tryna score points? you’re ‘Zino at The Source This the nail in your coffin, so stop being shady Beat 2 of your crew, before Scotty and Kay B U were here to battle…but I’m reading mad shit ‘bout u bitchin’ bout Lucky D ain’t active!?? Joined the L.I dinner with no cutlery and napkins Sat down to beef but couldn’t cut the meat he passed them Bound to get placed in the custody of RapDis And u tryna beat Kon? u’r fuckery is backwards I’m on top, relaxing, you underneath my mattress And stop bugging Stuck or we gonna need Chris Hansen Drop the whole act, we can tell that you ain’t hard I’m ruthless…so to hell with your day job Show up to your work to teach u what u know already U’ll stay on the roof like Katrina when she broke the levys Santa ass nigga |
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BIG GAME
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Joined: 16 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 4322 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-4-0 Form: WLWWLW |
Posted: 04 September 2010 at 10:04pm |
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I call him an active user cos he likes to stalk me:
I tell Cal to tell his bitch to quit harrassing me:
Ya aint on my level 'ya BETTER know it's right Chains an active user 'cos he likes to stalk me Ya could join wit Kay, and y'all be my poperatzi  My balls in your mouth 'since ya love ta jock me be the only reason 'ya claim I'm droppin sloppy I done hurt your fellins 'NOW ya approachin cocky first I had to bully ya 'since ya chose to dodge me If Chains a tough guy 'Flexin like he's stocky must be workin out his fingers 'typin at my posse  Feel manly yet? My hits'll swell your lips when the pressure lands Let's get serious Dude said he's BEEN Mod killin 'he's filled wit lies and he's thrife Hmm,,so the pusse's only manned-up 7 times in a matter of 4 years Your crew? It's funny 'KJ said fuck New Era and flipped the set Check it 'Mod Killah or Beast Unit mothafucka ''it's all the same Your verse: Was that a love letter 'or did ya blast at me? Let's end it like this I straight murdered this cat 'now somebody stuff his ass in the hurst You should have added some punches instead raging out flame Get off my nutz rudolph ass nigga |
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Neek
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Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3866 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:47pm |
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My hits'll swell your lips when the pressure lands Then u'll explain ur punch like your spot 'NetherLands' (Never Lands) there you go, now we're making progress. Ashame 'Dudes dreams Big Game 'and this I would fucken bet Chain, quit hating me 'it's not like I've killed your mother............yet really? mom jokes? damn son, you killing em with that shit, real hard hitting. From here 'I'll leave ya permantly sittin 'if ya take another step Boy keep tryin to Mod me 'Imma be forced to make ya another Nep decent line, gotta been worded better, but such is life right? Your crew? It's funny 'KJ said fuck New Era and flipped the set Now your leader's a 'biter' and a bitch' ...with all due (diss)respect .... really? thats how you deliever your best line? gotcha. Skill? it's empty...you've got none bitch...kinda like cash in your purse Is that the best ya can do? Cos seriously 'I couldn't imagine it worse kinda how I feel about your work at the moment. bad setups, very predictable, mediocre flow to it. it was ehhhh my vote goes to Chain. better flow, better read, better lines in general. plus.. it is a text battle, spelling has to be equated to it. If someone spit a verse and unintentionally mispronounced a word, would it get a pass? |
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Neek
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Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3866 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:49pm |
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anyway..
wouldn't let me EDIT my post.. I explained my vote on notepad and I copied half.. anyway, heres the FULL breakdown. We only respect you when you’re being a reporter, dude I want the headline for R.I.P-ing you…’mourning’ news that flows so nasty. nice line too. Beat you till u’r organ soup, I keeps it methaphorical U wanna choke me out? Wow, I’m beefin’ with a forum goon REAL TALK! TRUST THAT! The streets are riding for this dude I’d have to be J5 to believe that half your story’s true If your pops could see the weakling that u morphed in to He’d summon Nep’s dad to plead against your corny moves i'm saying.. call a coroner.. cats is getting bodied. So fucking sensitive…who you really mad at? The Tourette wigga, hillbilly with the Taz swag so true, nail on the head. Mod killah? man, your crew is on the menu ...'smog filter’…OOPS, did I offend you? Bragging ‘bout the mag, I see what you endorse Tryna score points? you’re ‘Zino at The Source This the nail in your coffin, so stop being shady Beat 2 of your crew, before Scotty and Kay B damn, the fecal matter just flows endlessly. And u tryna beat Kon? u’r fuckery is backwards I’m on top, relaxing, you underneath my mattress And stop bugging Stuck or we gonna need Chris Hansen your flow is nice and transitions well, you set your punches up real fluid. nice work. Chains an active user 'cos he likes to stalk me Ya could join wit Kay, and y'all be my poperatzi what is a poperatzi? wish I got the punch but i've never heard of a poperatzi. My hits'll swell your lips when the pressure lands Then u'll explain ur punch like your spot 'NetherLands' (Never Lands) there you go, now we're making progress. Ashame 'Dudes dreams Big Game 'and this I would fucken bet Chain, quit hating me 'it's not like I've killed your mother............yet really? mom jokes? damn son, you killing em with that shit, real hard hitting. From here 'I'll leave ya permantly sittin 'if ya take another step Boy keep tryin to Mod me 'Imma be forced to make ya another Nep decent line, gotta been worded better, but such is life right? Your crew? It's funny 'KJ said fuck New Era and flipped the set Now your leader's a 'biter' and a bitch' ...with all due (diss)respect .... really? thats how you deliever your best line? gotcha. Skill? it's empty...you've got none bitch...kinda like cash in your purse Is that the best ya can do? Cos seriously 'I couldn't imagine it worse kinda how I feel about your work at the moment. bad setups, very predictable, mediocre flow to it. it was ehhhh my vote goes to Chain. better flow, better read, better lines in general. plus.. it is a text battle, spelling has to be equated to it. If someone spit a verse and unintentionally mispronounced a word, would it get a pass? |
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BIG GAME
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Joined: 16 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 4322 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-4-0 Form: WLWWLW |
Posted: 05 September 2010 at 12:01am |
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Hmmmmm..Is this how ya seek your revenge? Is this what ya meant when ya told me 'I have no idea what I'm gettin myself into? Look, I dunno how it was back in the day but now adays at LA, I can spot a hater from a mile away...and yes I do....I see one here. I aint gonna cry for Scotty like ya did in your battle with Manc tho..
1-0
Chain
BTW,
Papparazzi
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Cuba
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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 12:24am |
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Vote = Chain
Chain - Strong verse, you brought the focus, rhythm and rhyme scheme of your open mic drops and applied that to a battle verse. You landed a whole variety of solid punches, including very good use of personal info against your opponent. There were one or two instances where your rhythm slipped a little, but nothing major at all. Overall, impressive verse. Big Game - Nice verse, you had some decent punches in there but you started off a bit slow...really you only got into the full swing of it after the 'lets get serious', I liked that boys tears line especially but pretty much everything else in that section landed a decent hit. But overall you really failed to land any substantial blows, and you tried to use links to make some of your punches seem stronger, but you were linking to really nothing comments that he made. That was a bit odd...and more often that not your punches came across either as filler or jabs. Overall, Big Game dropped a decent verse but was outclassed by Chain...better punches, better structure, better flow, generally more advanced verse.
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-XTC-
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Joined: 12 November 2006 Location: Brooklyn Status: Offline Points: 1533 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 19-11-4 Form: LLLLLL |
Posted: 05 September 2010 at 12:26am |
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ok Chain - flow was sick as usual.. punches were pretty direct and on point.. nice personals in there and the plays were pretty funny..
BIG GAME - your verse was aiight.. nothing really spectacular.. you had some weak filler here and there.. you seemed more into making yourself look good amongst your shit talking.. I wasn't really feeling much of it..
MVGT CHAIN simply had a way more polished verse and stayed direct.. punches landed harder..
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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-Orion-
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Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 05 September 2010 at 12:27am |
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Paparazzi
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 1:34am |
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ehhh
you win some and lose some
good verse chain
you're still a faggot tho
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Stalin
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Posted: 05 September 2010 at 3:03am |
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3-0 KO
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