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sparta 
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..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
 Topic: sparta -v- X-ACTOPosted: 28 March 2008 at 11:41am |
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16 lines, i'll drop first
flips + crew allowed no definite deadline, but dont take the piss good luck |
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 28 March 2008 at 8:25pm |
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First To 3 Right? |
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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sparta
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..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 28 March 2008 at 8:47pm |
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he lost to rameez.
anything else you dont get, ask. ================================= X-ACTO, you aint shit, cmon don't lie to me I'm quick to send you to 0-4 like this verse was a time machine I'll take your drop and leave it toast, I aint stoppin' till ya ghost This motherfucker's avatar's the only time there's knockouts when you post I've handed out 29 beatdowns, and now this punk is next My punches are upsetting X worse than a drunken text This chump's perplexed, I ain't stoppin' till he hits the floor See I'll leave you wrapped up in more bandages than an Egyptian corpse Think you can take on a Pro? Seriously dude, you're falling hard This fucker even got ate by Ram in the fields, I guess you could call him grass I'll put this son of a whore in a hearse with my text You found no-one online? Dude, they read your wack verses and left! I'm lyrically stomping ya face in the mud, ya see; I ain't a pencil, so there's no chance of X-ACTO makin' a cut on me Some noobs got talent round here, but I'm afraid this nerd is without So I'll have to send ya stats into negative worse than Bear Stearns' accounts... |
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 01 April 2008 at 1:30am |
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Nice Drop...I'll Get At This Either Tuesday Or Wednesday Sparta. |
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 07 April 2008 at 6:22pm |
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Hey Sorry About This Sparta. Some "Real Life" Issues Happened And I Had To Take Care Of Them. I'll Post Up Just As Soon As I Post My Verse For The Tourny. |
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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SageOne
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Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL |
Posted: 07 April 2008 at 6:42pm |
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You better get your tourney shit in X...it was due TODAY
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 07 April 2008 at 8:08pm |
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I Just PM'ed It To Point. I'll Start Up On This Now In A Minute... |
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 10 April 2008 at 8:55pm |
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Again Sorry About The Wait. Had Some "Real" Life Things To Deal With. Then I Came Back On And My Internet Was Acting Funny. But Yeah... :Expos:
(Should Be Self-Explaintory, But Still For Those
 )*Women Lose There Last Names At Marriage
*Nestle Makes Crush Bars Not Hershey.
*When You Hear "Sparta" You Instantily Think Of The Main Character(LEONIDAS) In 300, Cuz He Like Symbolized Everything Of Spartan Life In The Movie.
*Guy In Link Looks Like The Main Character...But Gaylord Way!
...Good Luck Bro...
I'm Gonna Spark This Match, Leave This Rook Battered And Torched
How Ya Gonna Say You Pro? With That "Ram Line", Be'n So Damn Forced
Crew Votes? Of Course! No Doubt Ya Gay Crew Gonna Ride Ya Pass
I Laugh Cuz Like Kick'n The "S" To End, This Kats' Simply PART AS(s)
Easy Task! I'm Breaking Through Sparta's Lines Like A Persian Front
Faggot! You Still Used To Put'n "Black Dick In Your Holes'" You Cunt?
Runt! I'll Take Out Ya Keys Like A Was Marrying Alicia, For Real
Dude You Could't "Pop X" Like You On Probation, So Chill
S No Thrill. Biter! Go Ahead And Read Back Your Verse
NOOB...You Used The Same Line And Link He Used First
Whats Worst! You Claim Ya Pro But Like Hershey Ya Bars Packing No "Crunch"
Your Matches Like Amatuer Fights, There's No Sign Of A Professional Punch
No Rush But I'm Straight Cruisin Through Battle With Ease
Playa! Even Ya Best Lines Couldn't Rattle A Slut Tease
Bitch Please! Im Toss'n Out Sparta At Plays, Like He Was Confettii
Check It! Sparta Only Siamese The Way His Character Resembles Thomas Beattie!
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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P0TENT
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Joined: 13 April 2008 Location: chi-town Status: Offline Points: 14 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW |
Posted: 13 April 2008 at 1:25pm |
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i seen dis as kind of a weak battle.....
punches-tie
personals-tie...both were forcing tem
wordplay-x
consistency-sparta
opener-tie...both were weak
closer-tie...both were weak
overall vote=tie
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 13 April 2008 at 4:00pm |
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Rofl....no categorie votes here...plus, you can't vote a tie
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 14 April 2008 at 7:59pm |
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One Up |
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 17 April 2008 at 1:35am |
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Bump Up...Vote Up
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3778 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 17 April 2008 at 11:32am |
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LOL WOW... ahh tie?? lol...
ok battle overall.... sparta had a few good bars... the stock one was tight... but man X nices flips good shit homie...
Bar for bar sparta started weak and did use some of the same punches i did soo i couldnt really go WOW look at that shit... it was just ok to me...
so sparta - you had high points and i think it was your closer!
X- good flips homie but other than that not much punch wise the part ass was cool.. but ehhh i also liked the persian line.... over all your best part... was the flips... some of your lines had me saying OH shit soo they did have snap no what i mean?...
My vote is going to - X ... good flips won it for me...
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Rameez
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Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW |
Posted: 17 April 2008 at 4:22pm |
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Sparta...
opener: time machine is a played line.. I've seen it b4.. 2/5 2nd bar: nice personal punch.. 5/5 3rd bar: this was ok.. not landing hard or strong.. 2.5/5 4rth bar: this bar was dope.. nice play.. 5/5 5th bar: nice personal again.. Fatal used similar to this but different concept 3.5/5 6th bar: lol funny personal punch.. 5/5 7th bar: Jbrenn use that reference.. this was ok landing.. 3/5 8th bar: wasn't too strong.. Bear Stearns was a weak play.. 2/5 overall: 28/40 70% X-Acto opener: Wasn't force to me.. flip didn't work well.. 2/5 2nd bar: lol funny name play.. cool shit.. 5/5 3rd bar: lmao at this bar.. was funny.. I got it after I watched the video.. 5/5 4rth bar: avoid using like these "Dude You Could't "Pop X" Like You On Probation, So Chill" trust me doesn't work as punch I tried it.. 2/5 5th bar: nice flip here.. good punch.. he did used the link.. 5/5 6th bar: your punch line wasn't strong, I see u tried.. but didn't work.. 2.5/5 7th bar: same as previous bar nothing hard.. u could use best "bar" as wordplay... 2.5/5 closer: need some rewording.. the punch was completely missing.. 2/5 overall: 26/40 65% Overall: Sparta   , Props X.. u improve alot.. |
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NepentheZ
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... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 30 April 2008 at 3:36pm |
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Votes please.
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Swift Styles
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Joined: 24 September 2007 Location: East Coast, US Status: Offline Points: 2014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-4-1 Form: WWLWNL |
Posted: 01 May 2008 at 11:48am |
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ummm wowee I vote X
sparta i thinbk you underestamated this one big time...
dropped a few shit forced lines that lost it for you.
ie
Think you can take on a Pro? Seriously dude, you're falling hard
This fucker even got ate by Ram in the fields, I guess you could call him grass .... ouch...for you.
X had a few great flips! link line was dopeee.. didnt like the PART SA tho very played.,
consistant with good plays which is why im voting for you.
what an upset
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X-ACTO
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Joined: 28 November 2007 Location: U.S.A Status: Offline Points: 228 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: LLWNWN |
Posted: 05 May 2008 at 1:00am |
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2-1 Uppin
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You Overdid It Homes--
You In The Danger Zone-- You Shouldnt Be Alone-- --Notorious B.I.G |
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dalinquent
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Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 07 May 2008 at 6:29pm |
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FUUUUCCCKKKKK
How do I vote this shit... Was a pretty close battle, unfortunately Erm, Sparta, You had a nice enough verse... Some nice shit but some extremely forced shit which ain't really pro like X, you had some pretty decent shit but I fucking hate your wording...It just always seems forced... I think imma vote X, Those flips just won it, tho sparta had a more polished verse overall, I enjoyed x's a lil more |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 07 May 2008 at 9:47pm |
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A bit of a shock here as said above...Real close battle alot closer than i expected, when i read sparta's (which isn't his best shit) i thought he'd take it but X come with a nice verse and flipped alot of what sparta threw and turned it around nicely. Not sparta's best verse but it was decent.
Close battle but ima have to vote X for the reasons others have stated, he dropped some nice punches and won it with his flips...BIG SHOCK Vote - X |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 08 May 2008 at 1:05am |
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I honestly dont see what you guys see in X's verse. I thought he brought terrible worded punches and lots that missed entirely. Sparta brought alot of mad played punches but still managed to out punch his opponent. Verse was way more polished. Against a Pro, Sparta would have lost but fortunately he's facing a novice/ama...Seriously tho the nestle line was terrible...The only good punch that i liked was the flip about "the same link"....way too many misses. But x def has potential...
Vote: Sparta
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