Open Mic: therapeutic word association: Blue

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   my therapist told me to associate concepts with a word in the hopes that my subconscious might detoxify.   The first word I thought of was blue.
Blue skies, little boy who lost manhood
little boy cries, little boy abandoned
blue from being choked out
suffocating:
blue balls, masturbate: pressure waning
expensive painting of blue waters gushing
blue dress, silky blue panties pulled down
thick spic dick quick lick on the slick found
she blew Juan and lied. now  I am a fool clown
my hearts dark, blew a gasket and bound
blue....depression, I am Stevens filthy shame
blew my chance at happiness, owning all the blame
blue curacco drowns my sorrows, I weep in the shower
this is shame and pain, and I am deep in its power.

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Steven T. Guidry Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 14 November 2011 Status: Offline Points: 164	Post Options Post Reply Quote Steven T. Guidry Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: therapeutic word association: Blue Posted: 20 February 2012 at 5:40pm
	my therapist told me to associate concepts with a word in the hopes that my subconscious might detoxify. The first word I thought of was blue. Blue skies, little boy who lost manhood little boy cries, little boy abandoned blue from being choked out suffocating: blue balls, masturbate: pressure waning expensive painting of blue waters gushing blue dress, silky blue panties pulled down thick spic dick quick lick on the slick found she blew Juan and lied. now I am a fool clown my hearts dark, blew a gasket and bound blue....depression, I am Stevens filthy shame blew my chance at happiness, owning all the blame blue curacco drowns my sorrows, I weep in the shower this is shame and pain, and I am deep in its power.
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Gemos Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 August 2011 Status: Offline Points: 223 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-0 Form: W	Post Options Post Reply Quote Gemos Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 February 2012 at 10:34pm
	this is cool man, except I think you could be writing a lot better if you got off that juan shit. I understand the dude fucked you over but to get better as a writer you gotta move on. Also dont be droppin the word spic in your rhymes son.
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Steven T. Guidry Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 14 November 2011 Status: Offline Points: 164	Post Options Post Reply Quote Steven T. Guidry Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 February 2012 at 2:32am
	Thanks for the feed man, I am trying, I am just hurt. I dont mean any racism, it just rhymed ya know? I will work on it, no hate.
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Rameez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rameez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:03am
	looooool u can dump that girl the one with juan. there's alot of fishes in the sea.. you got all the lyrical elements so try to make a rap about different story instead involving a girl and guy.. go down in the club and get some lap dance.. fuck 2 to 4 prostitute cool ya self man.. free ya self.. lol


spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:08pm
	Kill Juan for closure man Then yo might get the girl ov yo dreams back That Tramp!


spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:12pm
	Oh yeah Drop was cool bro Done blue me away


$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 February 2012 at 5:24am
	lol yea go run over juan and backup and park on him. anywayz, neat idea an cool drop. be ez!
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