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J504 
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 Topic: J504 VS Manc
Posted: 26 July 2010 at 2:18am |
RULES
-20 lines
-no flipping
-no feeding
-I can't reference your loss or old battles
-both of our drops due within 1 hour time
-any explained vote counts
-and we both gotta have fun
Meaning we both have to drop within one hour after the battle thread is started, doesn't matter who drops first as long as we both drop (since we won't be using ammo from each other's verses) .
time starts now!!!
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J504
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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 3:04am |
Manc claims to be a wordsmith, but I ain’t heard shit from him that’s worth shit
It gets worse, he’s worthless. Imma bout to leave this bitch purseless once I work this…
This fag loves Dave Becks, he’s always checking out Dave’s pecs (Mmmm!)
When he spec’d those underwear ads, his ass almost straight wrecked (Errrrt!)
Manc just loves David’s chest, the definition, the texture
Manc is ranked Manchester ’s #1 Man Chest Inspector
Can’t throw a punch at one foe without hitting the same folks (fail)
So, You can kiss J’sAss while you get stuck with Ko’s
This slow hoe knows no foe who goes toe to toe like the Five-O-
4 My flow goes mo’ psychosis even Kosmosis knows this!
I go sick, rhyme drunk , make you my Posh ‘cause I’m Beckham
This pussy’s a Toyota Prius, sober-up & can’t recall how I wrecked ‘em
As for your love for soccer, it’s just for the balls and the small shorts
You fall short, you’re small sport, I stand tall over yall who are all of your same sort
Your punch is soft like pussyjuice, your rhymes hardly work
Imma choke your gibby-ass out with your iCarly shirt
Call me Kurt, the way I’m Cobain’n your brain-in and maintainin the hurt
Entertainin’ ‘em while I’m dame’n him , I dress Manc’s name in a skirt
Shotgunned, I pop one, you got stunned…but still I’m not done
This drop won, you got none, you flopped, run! Now, how are U not sonned?
- ideas came from us battlin' back in forth in the "diss the person above you" thread, where Manc mentioned Kosmosis and soccer ALOT
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Manc
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Posted: 26 July 2010 at 3:05am |
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Sorry in advance for the shitty drop
You think I pre-write? - I never once planned keys to harm ya
cuz you cunt lyrically drop bombs if you was Rameez the Martyr
you're damn easy to beat - if brains were rain - you'd be a desert
cuz Manc's too heavy to be punched - if J was weight - you'd see the feathers
I mean, I rub shoulders with giants and rarely flunk tests with big fish
but I guess you must be Gary Coleman, the way you bump heads with midgets
so how the fuck in 1 hour, can you damage this master systematically
my guess is Kosmo probably helped him to draft his shit to battle me
but anywayz, the name 504, is that the code for Louisianna?
and can you beat me here with words? N.O - you'd need a hammer
then you'd still struggle to win, I'd have you practising for eternity
just as soon as you get released from this bout and accident & emergency!
cuz when I fight, I KO you, so aint no chance you can move Manc
but if you run out of self-a-steam, then just fill up your fool tank
but this is cool man, 40 lines of keystyles to grace the forum
it's just a shame your name will have the word "LOSS" placed before "WIN"
it's plainly boring being a looser but you're about to be the next
like a blind man on a braille cell-phone - no doubt you'll feel the text
now J let's face it - an hour time frame and you though I'd not adhere to rules?
I got this owned, now watch the votes, I'll get more props than Theatre Schools
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Kosmosis
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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 1:25pm |
the entity votes:
first off if you have never had the double bacon egg and cheese omelette from subway for breakfast...you should, for it is wonderful.
ahem
i liked this battle, and read each verse a number of times and it was close. props to both. with that said whenever i see a battle that is not just a slaughter, i also look for who has the hardes/wittiest/most intelligent/most skilled lines, and then who has the most. that is what i have used for judging this battle, with that said
J5 - i told you about the icarly thing...that would have been a beast bar against me, becuase of that shirt i have, but we must remember we are on the brits home playing field, and thus it was a gamble, be advised. that said, i believe that your two stand out lines, that were above and beyond your sarcastic, humorous flow tone, was the prius line ( which was very witty, i must say) and the line where you managed to include j sass stuck and myself. well played
manc - i know i have given you a hard time, it is all in jest. you appear to know how to craft a battle, although this one did leave me wanting more, i know it was a keystyle, it just seemed forced in some areas, and the only real stand out punch i felt was the feel the text line ( mad witty! although it seemed like it was a pre packaged diss...like you thought of it for anyone and threw it in there against j5, still in yet, who cares, it was awesome!) the only problem is that in my humble opinion you only made me say "daaaaamn" on that one line.
mvgt J5 for i believe that in a pretty evenly matched battle his two lines killed your one killer line and his nameplay line was the standout.
i would encourage you both to battle again each taking time out to craft pre meditated slaughters.
tally ho!
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Tommy
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Posted: 27 July 2010 at 7:44pm |
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^^^ Agree with that.....The battle again but spend more time craftin' the verses..coz that would be sick
as for this
J504 -
After goin a few rounds in the diss the person above...i wernt overally impressed by your stuff
but after readin this...you defo got some fire! you had some crazy multis in there...flow was nice..
maybe not the most hard hittin punches..abit to much with the dave beckham jokes...wernt really feelin em myself, the 'Man chest' punch was pretty creative...but what mainly stood out in your verse
was use of some sick multus..you had a fair few punches just none that really had me thinkin
awww shit lol.....good verse tho man...
Manc -
after eadin some of your stuff i was hopin for more, n im sure you got it too!
i wasnt massivley impressed by ya verse, i mean you held ya own definatley..
flow was nice and you had a fair few punches yaself...n some nice creativity..
-like a blind man on a braille cell-phone - no doubt you'll feel the text
-you're damn easy to beat - if brains were rain - you'd be a deser
-but if you run out of self-a-steam, then just fill up your fool tank
-I got this owned, now watch the votes, I'll get more props than Theatre Schools
First 2 wernt really that orignal..but they were cool, i liked the last 2
made me laugh a little...some good shit tho man..
overall -
Suprised by j504 as i said judgin by ur diss the person rhymes..you stepped up for this
which makes me thinks you got alot more as this was a keystyle type verse opposite for manc
judgin from what iseen frm you thought you'd come big..wasnt a bad verse...just thought you'd come
with more....this one is tough...i thought i knew who i was gna vote for after the first read..but after a couple
more....its really hard.....i wanna say draw..but thats just stupid...so (one more read)....I really liked..J504's use of multis
and had a few cool punches....but i think manc had more and slightly better punches..
sooo....Ima say manc just edges it for me....which is weird coz after first read i thought j504...
after few more..i actually preffered manc.......props to both though...very tight battle...
gonna be interestin to see who wins
pz
VOTE = MANC
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Manc
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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 10:01am |
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kos & tommy, thanks a lot for the votes. 1-1is the score. Lets keep this goin lads and can we have some more votes please?
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The Big O
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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 1:01pm |
I am going to have to vote for J504.Most of the previous posts explained the pro's and cons of each vers pretty well. But i don't think you can ignore the fact that J's piece was DEFINATELY written specifically for this battle because of the number of references to Manchester etc.I am not saying that Manc's piece was pre done but I think you have to reference your oponent to get props for keystyle. Sorry my fellow manc! Both pieces well worth a read.
MVGT: J504
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-Que-
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Posted: 28 July 2010 at 6:45pm |
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I read this battle hella times and I just can't pick out a winner.
J5-Dominated the the seen with personal witt ,cleverness,and superior intellectability.
Manc- Grimed the spot with nice punches and fast foward aggression , and a small splash of personal stings.
Both were equal in strength and stability IMO.Which is rare to see.
Dayummm! For me....personals and punches are equal (now some tend to think personals take priority over punches but I don't cuz it takes the same creativity either way).
This one battle was nice and I enjoyed it all the way thru , but the fact remains imma vote TIE if I can cuz the only thing I got left is a coin toss. Sorry my brothas but it izz what it izz.
Tie
If this doesnt count....I won't be mad...I at least wanted yall to know I'm putting my two cents in and not sleeping on voting.
Keyed or not....good job yall !!
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Manc
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Posted: 29 July 2010 at 12:57pm |
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lol wot happened to researching if personals are TRUE?? Anyways, thanks for the votes Big O & Que. Keep em coming lads. 2-1 to J
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Manc
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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 12:30am |
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Any more votes please lads?
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-Que-
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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 5:47am |
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are they false?
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J504
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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 2:53pm |
 Manc wrote:
lol wot happened to researching if personals are TRUE?? Anyways, thanks for the votes Big O & Que. Keep em coming lads. 2-1 to J |
ouch.
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Kosmosis
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Posted: 30 July 2010 at 5:32pm |
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Manc
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Posted: 31 July 2010 at 12:21am |
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Agreed - any more votes lads?
Uppin!
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J504
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Posted: 31 July 2010 at 12:43am |
Manc wrote:
Agreed - any more votes lads?
Uppin!
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Wait, I thought you said you wanted a DQ? 
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Manc
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Posted: 31 July 2010 at 12:54am |
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What the fuck are you talking about J?
Are you trying to spoil the battle or do you want the votes to come in fairly?
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J504
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Posted: 31 July 2010 at 5:04am |
Manc wrote:
What the fuck are you talking about J?
Are you trying to spoil the battle or do you want the votes to come in fairly?
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Manc wrote:
Oh and theres more - but I'm considering whether to blow up your plans and take the well earned and fair call of a DQ just to let people know what they are voting for
I'm still contemplating it .....
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Manc
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Posted: 31 July 2010 at 5:48am |
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Do you want everyone to know you're a concept biter who can't come up with his own line lay-outs????
Cuz, if I was you, I'd be trying to hide that
Now J - be a good boy and lets not block this thread aswell as the others you're flaming in - the votes aren't over yet.
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Manc
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Posted: 01 August 2010 at 12:35am |
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Uppin for votes lads
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 7:20am |
Y'all both had only 1 decent hit here IMO
J5:
Call me Kurt, the way I’m Cobain’n your brain-in and maintainin the hurt
Entertainin’ ‘em while I’m dame’n him , I dress Manc’s name in a skirt
Manc:
I mean, I rub shoulders with giants and rarely flunk tests with big fish
but I guess you must be Gary Coleman, the way you bump heads with midgets
Both were easy on the eyes so therefore the flow was nice.
I think that this broke down to J's multis. His complete verse was full of em.
Good battle.
Like I said there wasn't alot of punches 'one a piece.
The flow was even.
Personals on each side all day long.
Multis is what won it.
MVGT: J5
No Hate on either of y'all but somebody has to win.
Good battle y'all
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