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Rutter knows best
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Topic: [Text] Titu vs Rutter knows best (4-3 )Posted: 03 March 2015 at 9:49pm |
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Rules agreed in pm.
1 week 5 bars The rest house. G'luck.
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Titu
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Posted: 04 March 2015 at 10:40pm |
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Goodluck to you too.
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 10 March 2015 at 7:58pm |
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Ashamed of ya accent?? Call me Bhagwat Paswan how i stop it for reals Caz Best'll cut out ya mother tongue for that shit you drop in the fields Lost in translation and tired of the feed, did you actually mean this..... Past 6 months T's spent more time under the bridge than Anthony Keidis A master of obscenities, but coherent speech, is what this kids missing Clear tits is faking, from the scars on his chest from every Wreckless decision, Pm'm Ashley hoping that rapport grows, no chance - she adores Know U Need to abort bro, caz ya coming off creepier than John Travolta at award shows And I hope he enjoyed his last bday cuz i'm guttin this depraved dweeb Sons Readers won't be seeing tits no more like the culling of page three Expo's Bar 1 - http://www.ndtv.com/patna-news/womans-tongue-cut-off-for-defecating-in-field-721989 http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/accent_topic38851_post398338.html?KW=accent#398338 Bar 2 anthony keidis wrote under the bridge/ so di scott but about trolls. Bar 3 - Fake tits/chest scars - he lost to Wreckless Bar 4 - http://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/style-blog/wp/2015/02/23/how-did-john-travolta-get-so-creepy-yet-another-weird-oscars-moment/
Bar 5 - page 3 of a uk paper called the sun for over a decade had topless models, it recently got cancelled. Empire
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#bananas
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The Law
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Posted: 10 March 2015 at 9:46pm |
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NML
You have 50% of the allotted time.
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Titu
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Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 11 March 2015 at 7:31pm |
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Now La's bout to witness T drop rutter worst than catholic wars, He can only bring heat in "fuck yalls".... nobody feels this whack's crafts, Why "Rut dont do OMs???"; >>>this cunt gets no "feed" on his "bad bars", His brain stays racing like the Nascars, he's more fucked than what his votes seem, Coz the way he "hallucinates dudes" proves him a faggot on some morphine, T's a "grown beast"!!!!! aint no wonder Im gonna body ya, Coz the way he "sucks tits off".. He's more of an "infant from Somalia", Hate on my accent? How can We take you serious?.. You're a faggot whose claims lie, When the foundation of this fag's hatred mostly stands on folks' hairstlyles, Expos 1. T/cross.. Rutter/trooper or horse rider 2. "rut dont do oms" is his OM. He got no feed on his thread "bad bars" 3. Name slip in the vote. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/lawmy-bad-on-the-name-slip_topic35881.html?KW= . 4. He always compliments me and says im a good writer. 5. He said he hates SS's dreadlocks and hes a bloody hippy. If ya need links, say it. Good luck rutter |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Slap Banger
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Posted: 12 March 2015 at 10:26am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Rutter. Bar1 we all ready know about it, that's no personal. Bar2 He got lost in translation so he spent time under the bridge hahaha that's the shit man! nice punch. Bar3 Ok, i didn't comprehend the jitsu behind that one. Bar4 The grammar here is worse that Tits'. i'll just move on. Bar5 lmao now thta's much better, and its fun how u keep mentioning "tits" and it doesnt disturb the Reader. haha nice one man. Overall good flow. Tits. Bar1 so much wordplay in that bar it might raise many questions, bbut i dig the effort nice. Bar2 lmao that's the shit man, that personal did the trick. why he dodnt do Oms? cause he got bad bars? hahahaha it's amazing how u connected his threads to form a killer bar. tight. Bar3 Ok i think the punch didn't connect well with the set up. nice punch and Nascar simile though. Bar4 A grown beast sucking tits offf must be one from Somalia where poverty dwells. shit, K.O. Bar5 lol nice one man. Commentary. I think Rutter had good flow and only picked up 2 hard punches from him. The ANTHONY KEIDIS AND PAGE3 haha. Tits. His flow wasn't so smooth, but he had 2 hard punches too, the SOMALIA AND BAD BARS hahaha shit, i wanted this dude to lose but his lines stood for him like Oscars advocates. VOTE. my vote is inspired by the one who used personals in a more striking way. and that'ts MvGt TITs |
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Words words words my Lord, just words
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Geeza
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Posted: 12 March 2015 at 11:15am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. My keyboards broke, im using an onscreen keyboard... so please excuse the shortness of the vote, i will eleborate upon request. Rutter - anthony kiedis an page 3 lines were sick. good flow, easy read. alright personals. i think you you could come harder, like you held back, but over all a solid piece Titu - this was i jusnt feeling the punches, also the self hype let you down. i liked the alliteration in the last line but the diss didnt do much for me. Also the rhymes seemed off in places ima have too give it too Ruttter for having the more direct verse MVGT: Rutter
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Mission
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Posted: 12 March 2015 at 4:56pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Well I see geeza is here dropping a lame vote.... Tit's - You came with personals, flow was very awkward tho and your rhymes were stretches on most of the bars. You maybe had one solid punch the others were attempts at jabs that would have been executed way better. The expos were fairly weak tbh, only solid punch i feel you landed was the Bad Bars one. Feel like you got lazy on this one. Personal, but no real punches. RKB - Opening bar was creative, not a big punch cuz it's his mother ur attacking not him. But very fresh concept for a punch good research. From there it went up with harder punches and original punchlines, those expos were a big help. LMAO at the John Travolta line. Your flow was a good battle flow, you stayed aggressive and relevant through the whole battle For better flow, punches, and creativity MVGT: Rutter
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dalinquent
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Posted: 13 March 2015 at 5:21am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Rutter... verse was cool... one of the more direct verses I've read lately... lines felt a bit stretched to me tho... like you added syllables to make sure you got ur punches in... never effective imo... I know it's a text battle, but I personally read it these aloud when I vote and this jus didn't flow well to me... Titu... verse was also cool... alot simpler than Rutters... a ppersonal preference if I'm honest... I liked how u didn't feel these need to overdo/overwork your concepts... jus straight, direct, to the point with the play... Must give my vote to Titu... verse was much more polished and therefore direct... the flow was on point and it was jus in general a better verse... props to both |
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Titu
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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 6:13am |
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Thanks for all the votes. Ill get to voting tonight.
Legit up |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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AxyRocker
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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 12:47pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Firstly, Sorry guys wasn't free enough to vote lately..... Rkb - First bar had me confused at first but when I checked out the expos, Goddamn I was sick laughing, nice hitting punch. Tbh it maybe just me but imo second bar wasn't even nearly as hard as your opener, Ima call it just a jab ! . Firstly third bar wasn't rhyming for me, that puts it off for the flow part also I don't think missing and decision rhyme for any accent even near mine ! Fine nameplay, fresh take from what I have read so far (Haven't read much of his battles tho lol) but I would call it just a jab not very hard at the opponent. Man ! for the fuck sake plz don't do any John Travolta lines from now on, it was god damn sick.. and relating it with titu and Ashley ... lmao sick shit ! could have died laughing at that. Last line was funny but I think you had the concept but till now the nameplay wore off, it was personal so Ima call it a jab. Titu - Lmao First bar brought some goddamn heat, man ! That was sick funny.. also giving props to the flow. Second bar was again personal and direct, two hits in a row. Third bar was again a great concept but I wasn't feeling it as much as the first two bars, can be just me but I just wasn't feeling it as heated as the first two. Fourth bar again had a nice concept but you know it wasn't as aggressive, I mean I think some wording issues maybe, but it wasn't as aggressive, yet a decent jab. Last bar was again a nice diss for his stuff, Nice execution for his opinion and creatively used ! This battle was close imo... Don't know why many of the voters don't check expos to understand the punch but for me this was close. MVGT - Titu for bringing some heat with his first two bars and then, consistent jabs, whereas Rkb was had some nice hits but wasn't as consistent ! Also rkb's third bar broke the flow for me too..
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 4:10pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator.
Lost in translation and tired of the feed, did you actually mean this.....
Pm'm Ashley hoping that rapport grows, no chance - she adores Know
Overall - Think you had some hard hits and some that could have been better
Im a God the way I impose deaths... You can't win with your average scars, He can only bring heat in "fuck yalls".... nobody feels this whack's crafts, His brain stays racing like the Nascars, he's more fucked than what his votes seem,
Hate on my accent? How can We take you serious?.. You're a faggot whose claims lie,
This was a nice battle. Rutter came in with direct punches and Titz came in with some punches as well. MGVT RUTTER |
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Titu
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Posted: 26 March 2015 at 9:28am |
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wao. . So close.
Thanks for the votes. Up!! |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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nomedic
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Posted: 26 March 2015 at 7:20pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Rutter your opener was nice I couldn't figure out what you're on about till I saw the expo in depth the second bar was okay but it barely scratched the surface in my oppinion third bar was okay but the punch made it so the set up wasn't the best option for the punch the fourth was real solid the set up and punch meshed up well and the flow was nice closer was nice I needed the expo to understand it though but I liked it alot Titu Your first bar was real nice the wordplay was cool the second bar was simple and a nice personal end rhymes were abit sketchy I figures its an accent thing the third bar was an okay personal just a bit lazy in the execution of it fourth bar was not very personal but I had a good laugh from it closer was abit awkward in the rhyme department but the attack was really nice over all pretty close guys but I feel titu had the upperhand cause of the personals that had more venom both were really hott but there can only be one winner vote tits
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XLNC
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Posted: 26 March 2015 at 8:40pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ok It's like this... RKB: First Bar-Not a fan of the opener,U did use a concept with a personal,Flow was basic,I think it wasn't worded well,The concept if analysed didn't cover the punch. Second Bar-Flow again Basic,Concept tied with the personal,Yeah this worked but didn't bring the sting factor. Third Bar-Yeah this was nice,Nameflip with a Personal..Nice one,Flow Basic. Fourth Bar-Nice again,Concept and the Personal were tied well,Setup line was also good Fifth Bar-Nice again,Nameflip and the Concept were good Overall-Though the flow was basic,You did good although some lines just misses,Work with your setups and executions Titu: First Bar-Nice,Tied the concept with the nameflip well,Ur setup was also fine Second Bar-Personal,Yeah nice Setup connected with the punch.Not a hard hitter. Third Bar-Yeah nice personal tied with a concept,Setup connected,Still not hard hitter Fourth Bar-Self hype with ur nameflip,Still was a nice conceptual diss Fifth Bar-Flipped his concept but this was not a hard hitter,The guy hates on ya accent,SS's dreadlocks and ur jus saying he hates them Overall-Yeah u did nice with some nice punches,My suggestions are jus try and make ur concepts complex n punchlines a lil more harder Overall Battle feed-This was a nice battle,U both did nice,had a couple of misses,but IMO Titu takes this he had less misses than rutt. Thus Titu Peace ~1~ XLNC |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 26 March 2015 at 8:53pm |
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Titu wins 5-3
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