Open Mic: this girl fucked me over

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   Working 3 shifts a day, shit’s not my own choice

High maintenance chick ok, she wants a Rolls Royce 

Money’s lost she already wrote off two red Porsche’s

That’s fine though because she’s drop dead gorgeous

Great ass big tits! Oh yeah but not flipping enormous

Ideal girl she’s pissin cold beer an shittin chicken kormas

15 years my junior! They say I’m sick ta grab a teen

Why? When this girls all fit for a rude picture magazine

I’m sicker than obscene keeping my princess busy

Could be my last bite ov the cherry! Gotta rinse them
titties

She is a pro that shit I know and just ta fuck this hoe

I’m paying for designer clothes an a reconstructed nose

But fucks she gots the best sex! And ta get it I will

Take on a fourth shift and pay her credit card bills

An handle them daily tantrums, till they aint even hassle

Get to see her with no lady pants on, in the latest vajazzle

Two years on an sadly no longer biggin up my hoe

Worked myself into a wheelchair now I’m picking up giro’s

Honey moved on with my money, sitting in my Rolls

She sold all the bling chains ta people that but gold

Why though do I flow with this on point frank account?

Trying to save another brother from a joint bank account

Keep ya pounds separated from the hounds! They capable

Of pulling mad strokes on blokes plotting to take em all

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spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: this girl fucked me over Posted: 27 September 2011 at 2:15pm
	Working 3 shifts a day, shit’s not my own choice High maintenance chick ok, she wants a Rolls Royce Money’s lost she already wrote off two red Porsche’s That’s fine though because she’s drop dead gorgeous Great ass big tits! Oh yeah but not flipping enormous Ideal girl she’s pissin cold beer an shittin chicken kormas 15 years my junior! They say I’m sick ta grab a teen Why? When this girls all fit for a rude picture magazine I’m sicker than obscene keeping my princess busy Could be my last bite ov the cherry! Gotta rinse them titties She is a pro that shit I know and just ta fuck this hoe I’m paying for designer clothes an a reconstructed nose But fucks she gots the best sex! And ta get it I will Take on a fourth shift and pay her credit card bills An handle them daily tantrums, till they aint even hassle Get to see her with no lady pants on, in the latest vajazzle Two years on an sadly no longer biggin up my hoe Worked myself into a wheelchair now I’m picking up giro’s Honey moved on with my money, sitting in my Rolls She sold all the bling chains ta people that but gold Why though do I flow with this on point frank account? Trying to save another brother from a joint bank account Keep ya pounds separated from the hounds! They capable Of pulling mad strokes on blokes plotting to take em all


J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 September 2011 at 2:51pm
	Entertainment right here and truth lol. This was prolly my favorite bar: She is a pro that shit I know and just ta fuck this hoe I’m paying for designer clothes an a reconstructed nose and this is too true: Why though do I flow with this on point frank account? Trying to save another brother from a joint bank account Funny, cause my homeboy "Frank" just went through this for months straight with his ex. So yeah, well said lol. Enjoyed this one, kid... nice work!

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 September 2011 at 7:15pm
	thanks fa lookin J5 ov course this line She sold all the bling chains ta people that but gold should a read people that buy gold typo.............cant get my edit up ?


Madeye Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 March 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1177 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Madeye Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:33pm
	OO Wow. Good read, spume. I say "wow" because, compared to your recent material (what I was reading before my brief -yet again, hiatus) I feel this is a real improvement. Sorry if I'm the last to knowtice. lol Nice swag in parts, too. The story-telling is quite an ease for you, it seems... good stuff. Laughed at the wheelchair fate... as for critique- I guess there could be a tighter flow, but your certainly on a good path right here, Fam. One ['1]
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Madeye Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 March 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1177 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Madeye Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:38pm
	Side note: fresh rhymes. Diggin' that. UPPIN'.
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Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 October 2011 at 12:49am
	I missed this one Okay - Yoour drops with this style (descriptive/imaginative) always remind me of J5s - which is obviously a good thing cuz yaz both do this style so well - and your vividness is a lot like Js too. The chicken Korma line made me lol. The opener was really good. Set the tone nicely. The vajazzle line might go over a few heads - cuz thats if ya dont know, then ya dont know, yea? lol The reconstructed nose bar was tight too. Multis were spot on. An all round killer drop Mr C.

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:28am
	Thanks fa lookin lads