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Topic: Throne Of Skulls feat, Ill ScripturezPosted: 05 July 2014 at 12:00am |
![]() A King to introduce a King....titles not withstanding All the sickness here within, we dedicate to Hanging.... The Devils Reject off on a rape spree For any child over 8 weeks, left bloody as a scraped knee Since eighteen, I’ve been tryin’ to wipe the slate clean But my dick is tryna to batter kids like it makes cream …but it does Ugh… I suck tampons dry Bloody ones, it gets me hard like sittin’ on granpas thigh I’d make grandma cry from the anal abuse Her anus is loose left gapin’ from brooms When she walks it makes songs like playin’ the flute If what I’m sayin’ is true, I’m Satan to you Should see the persuasion razor blades to you do You should see the things I can do with trachea tubes I want to murder everyone, can’t think of who to leave out Wantin’ to feel the last breath you can breathe out A fast death is something I don’t seek out A cold teen in the basement Like thawin’ protein for dinner, I took my meat out …its time to fuck Runnin’ through her middle like a half back It so chill the cold thrill of her ass crack Smash that, nut on her face for me to laugh at Took off her entire epidermis so I could graph that Make a trench coat, beat ‘til the steel of the wrench broke Keep a carcass out ‘til the stench rose A fresh kill, I cut an artery in a sex pose The blood squirts like mixin’ cola and Mentos ...Hahahahahaha... And for those who dispute my throne of skulls.... Mr Jimmer the Spectre the king of finger collectors Clippin digits off dead girls,to string on a necklace Vicious, twisted'n reckless, victims blistered'n headless Clearly sick in the head and not restricted or censored I'll give you all the facts about a lass named Mandy Candlemass Poor Mandy was a dandy, I unstrapped my gat'n capped her ass And after that, I dragged the corpse'n strapped the whore to a knackered ford Hit the gas'n sprayed her last remains, splattered stains on a massive wall Then I remember, late December, I dismembered Laura Conner Type with blindin' thighs, so nice, her eyes were wide'n fraught with horror Laura thought her door secure, but forced it forward, more's the pity Tickled her bits with a whip'n a switch til her lips'n her clit's left raw'n shitty My next victim, nice Jeff Kitchen, guy with zero violence in him Find him sick'nin, slice his dick with knives I picked with eyes a'glistenin Might be nice t'find his wife and tie the dyke to an iron spike With Stylez so hyped'n vile, oh shite! smile in spite'n dice her children Yo.................Don't call me Jimmer I like to eat the teets of slaughtered whores for dinner Take a pensioner'n hit her 'cross the head with a zimmer Break the ends off little sticks'n pop the next bitches liver.. ..............Don't you know that I'm professional A veteran at wrecking skulls, with heavy sticks'n leaded poles I'm penetrating every hole with steady pricks of deathly cold And devastating bless-ed souls with devilish collectables..... Call me crazy, but a corpse adorned in lace elates me Torture porn'n razor blades I tailor-made for babies I'll break the clavicles of cannibals, snap backs of savage animals Put ya passive ass in traction, hooked to the back of an active tractor pull Settin fire to your extremities, wrecked ya feet with sharpened spikes I'll spread ya teeth apart and calmly make you eat the heart of Christ And make you suck the cock of Judas, spittin buckshots to bruise fucks I COULD stop the abuse.... But, ya mug's what my boot loves stomp your face in t'the kerb'n spray the pave-ment with ya brain stem I've enslaved the greatest patrons of this ancient place'n raped them With a Sword I brought with Stylez t'make ya fear the sparkling knife And squish ya children into bits'n drip the liquid on ya wife I'll infect with a tepid injection, of the mess from a leper's erection I can trace little flecks of the faith that is left in the depths of a necrid rectum Think ya fam'ly's sleepin happy? kids be cracklin when they go BOOM Beefy Mac's the king of bastards sittin laughin in his throne room.. ha-ha-ha-ha..................Don't call me Beefy I like to beat the weakened knees of paraplegic tweenies I like to eat the pussy cheese from a crusty cadaver Dirty berk pervertin virgins with a rust-dusted spanner Yo.......................Don't ya know that i'm a hopeless fool A strange kid, spittin hatred because he's pissed, with twisted quotables The next shit well be hectic, coz my text is gettin over cool I over-ruled ya dopest crews'n smoked the boasts of most you... This is a lesson in verbal violence yo, but most would call it horrocore Don't piss ya kecks or twist ya necks, my flow's what they make potties for Ya not as raw, but listen in to an kid who's grill's an insipid grin Who's been slippin his dick in ya kith and kin, inflictin his jizz on ya missus' quim I'm riddled with sin, that's like me though, aint hard fa me t'fight a ho I'll put staples through her labia....... and spark em with a dynamo My heart is full of violence though, I'd like to snap ya spine stick a mic inside the vertebrae then smile'n rap a rhyme: I'm pure evil, spittin venom, spewing bile, brewing Stylez Acid I poured on masses of whores I battered with force, in stewing piles Of steaming shit, I'm evil, sick, stick needles through the cheeks of kids I'm "raising hell" my hatred swells, I peel the skin'n bleed 'em quick With leeches slick with infant juice, a sinful dude with violent thoughts The type to stalk at night and haunt ya wife with taunts and siren calls And if she lands upon my hook, I'll choke the bitch, defile the corpse I'm the necrophile who brought the vilest sport on silenced whores ............................Don't be callin me mean Made ya meemaw scream "yee-haw" as I tore out her spleen Battered masses of kids, splattered them on walls with pleasure I like to tear out their hearts, you see i call them 'Treasure' ............................Don't call me a rapper I'm digesting bits of tasty discharged fungal matter I'll crush your skull to pieces with a ball-pin hammer Making bunting from ya mum's skin as a gory banner But I digress, I like breasts, severed'n rendered as cushions I confess that when I'm stressed, I bury my head in the bosoms I like to suck the rotting nipples and imbibe the rancid lactose Like a wine pressed out of crack hoes, this is MINE so step it back bro Yeah i'm violent, what a twat yo, let me crack ya face in half Y'see I pack the greatest bars, t'smash a bastard's breaking heart I wanna mutilate ya cutie's face, you'll see the Glasgow Smile And see the aftermath of her laughter on the liquid plastered tiles And I find humour in the tumours of leukaemia in juniors Givin beatins t'the peach skin, hittin leaves the sweetest bruises I'm the evillest abuser, ending lives with calculation As I rise above my station raining fire upon ya nations Can't ya see that I'm perverted, and my rhymes're quite disturbin? I seen guys decide to verse, but there's more violence in my version I can see you as you struggle to fit these lines inside ya heads Jimmer binds ya minds with spite until you guys are likely dead..... Oh shit.....................Don't get it twisted Yeah I'm sure that all of y'all think you can mess with this shit But if you ever dropped a verse as terse'n deft as this kid You'd be hailed amongst the greatest of the blessed'n wicked ...........................Don't ya know that I'm just havin fun? Like when I say "I shagged ya mum" I'm waitin as the laughter comes They say that I'm a bastard's son, just spittin evil raps for fun But Beefy Mac is sweet in fact, indeed he stabbed you vanquished cunts.... We did something......did you? Edited by SwordedStylez - 09 July 2014 at 2:46am |
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 1:42am |
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This is next level horror story shit!!! I loved this right here. The flow, rhyme schemes, imagery....ooohhh the imagery man! This was sickening from top to bottom and it was fucking awesome. And damn those rhymes and punches hit like a freight train
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 1:43am |
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Glad you like it man, this is my "preferred style" so I'm always happy when it's well received.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 8:25am |
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Ill - you're ridiculous haha. Not only did you bring the nastiness but your rhymes were just insane. I' really glad you were in this piece and I think it met the tone perfectly. Flow and schemes were completely crazy, content was on some gutter shit, tampons, grandmas anus, trachea tubes. Generally jus twisted shit. Totally ridiculous, props.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 9:05am |
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This was sick
Ill You started off with some funny lines you went for humour And it made your verse super sick i just kept crackin when i read Your verse dope shit SS After reading your verse i cursed out loud this was cool nice complex yet compact flow you didnt go for much humour cause the impression your verse Gave me is that you're evil not crazy Lol reallly dope collab ill and ss brought it |
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 9:28am |
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WOW.... You both brought it on this one...
Ill you have bars my dude... nice flow smooth story telling good imagery. nice job... SS you are like that dude at the bar who's called the "one upper guy" you always seem to have to try and out shine who ever you collar with! you murked this verse!!! great read overall im gonna give this stars for dope bars!
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 10:07am |
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Thanks for the feed y'all. Good looks.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 1:39pm |
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This shit was just okay to be honest. Especially for the length of it I thought you would've dropped harder bars. Granted some of your lyrics had high points but most of them were below average at best. A lot of flow dips, delivery was okay, content was the part of this piece
LOL JK... This shit was fire SS. I personally believe I didn't bring the polished verse I know I can due to real life. Lol so I owe you a top notch verse when I can sit down and deliver you something. Your verse was horrific. Exactly what it should've been. I enjoyed you creating characters and how you abused them. Pretty twisted and all but that's what you were going for. You captured that mind state man. All the mechanics and texnicques were on point. I feel like I shouldn't even bother bringing them up anymore. I just will talk content from here on out. Glad to have another collab be a success with you dude. When you wanna get another let me know and I'll deliver a verse ten fold |
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 4:07pm |
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this was really a dope collab you guys both of you came hard.
Ill- you had a dope verse, you brought in humor and said some sick shit haha. But your flow was dope, and you had really nice schemes through out, really nice verse here man, good shit. SS- Damn, this was fucking sick, the shit you say is fucking twisted you have to be fucking crazy to come up with this shit. The schemes were dope, flow was dope, the imagery throughout was amazing man, this really is some sick shit haha. Overall- dope piece both of you came hard, ill with the sick humor and SS with the sick evil shit haha. Both of you did a good job here, props on putting this dope piece together. Keep writing and stay blesssed. Peace.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 5:59pm |
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Good looks and the feed guys, and Ill, you know I'm always down homie, and life happens - always takes priority over this interweb thing.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 6:20pm |
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Alright...I'm gonna keep away from some of the ish said. You fellas are scary, haha. But the skill is something I can appreciate endlessly. Just another level of lyrical assault. The flows were simply incredible and the rhyming was on point and consistent throughout. Both were very intricate and focused with your techniques and as long as it was, you almost feel like there's still more left you both could've dropped but held back. Truly insane from the get go and simply great fun to flow to since you both were quite masterful with your styles. Awesome job.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 6:25pm |
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Good looks on the feed man, appreciated.
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Posted: 05 July 2014 at 7:23pm |
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Thanks everyone
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 5:22am |
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Any more feed?
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 5:44am |
Wonderful. Overall I like that I can hear the UK accent by the way the barz is written, but this was the hook point of the verse on the first read. Nice bruh |
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 9:54am |
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ill- i can definitely see the control here, dug the verse, and for some reason as i was reading yours i kept seeing the opening scene to tales from the crypt, fuckin awesome haha, reaction to your opener was godDAMN and to
Took off her entire epidermis so I could graph that Make a trench coat, beat ‘til the steel of the wrench broke literally LOL, awesome work bro SS- well fuck man... lol that shit was dope, you are one of the writers, no ass kissing here, that i see as top notch, your attention to detail is astonishing and can only be natural, to actually force ones self to sit and write in such a way, where internal rhymes interlock with one another consistently and maintain the subject matter, is maybe not impossible but highly, HIGHLY improbably. such as the master painter paints as a child would, freely and without border, and creates his masterpiece, but does not know it, so you write. except you KNOW this shit was sick lol monster job bro, truly. peace |
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 10:58am |
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Good looks on teh feed bro glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 12:14pm |
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wow I'll give a quick feed because I don't really know what to say about this...
This was dope. I don't really this 'style' but man, this had me excited to read the next bar every bar I read. SS- wow man, you seem a nice person and I didn't you could come up with this scary shit, ahah. congrats as always. iLL- nice rhymes, flow was straight and overall a dope verse. stay up fellas
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Posted: 06 July 2014 at 9:17pm |
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Good looks on the feed man, and thanks for saying I seem like a nice person haha!
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Posted: 07 July 2014 at 2:54am |
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Bloody ones, it gets me hard like sittin’ on granpas thigh
I’d make grandma cry from the anal abuse Her anus is loose left gapin’ from brooms When she walks it makes songs like playin’ the flute If what I’m sayin’ is true, I’m Satan to you that is perfect. one of those i wish id of written that. was funny sickening. very skillfully written technically. just dopeness Mr Jimmer the Spectre the king of finger collectors Clippin digits off dead girls,to string on a necklace Vicious, twisted'n reckless, victims blistered'n headless Clearly sick in the head and not restricted or censored fucking mad opening two. im a horro fan anyways, but damm. smashing it. Laura thought her door secure, but forced it forward, more's the pity Tickled her bits with a whip'n a switch til her lips'n her clit's left raw'n shitty madness. razor blades I tailor-made for babies delivery is sick. But I digress, I like breasts, severed'n rendered as cushions I confess that when I'm stressed, I bury my head in the bosoms I like to suck the rotting nipples and imbibe the rancid lactose Like a wine pressed out of crack hoes, this is MINE so step it back bro this was a crazy drop. epic no doubt, really liked the jokeyness of it aswell as the mixed in bits of heavy imagery, really managed to go over the line, and thats not easy to do on the internet where we are all so desensatized. the baby razor line was heavy. this whole drop was dope. i could of picked a lot more quotes out... btw the colour on text is gayyy lol makes shit hard to read. 5 star drop tho props |
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