Open Mic: [WD 4] psychological warfare

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   It's an identity crisis, like I just had a lobotomy
so much shit running in my head like a popped colostomy

I'm ready to plague this generation 'til the cycle arrives at rebirth
but what's it worth when the thirst for vengeance can't be reversed?

it can't be rehearsed, this is warfare - I'm fighting the tyranny of suffocation
like an urban warrior in the jungle thriving despite a tough vocation

but my fucked up mind writhes like a Siamese cat hissing on the sly
my thoughts clump like so much litter, boxed in and pissing on the dry

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Droidian Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie BIG GAME KILLER! Joined: 07 May 2016 Location: Toronto Status: Offline Points: 776 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 7-2-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Droidian Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: [WD 4] psychological warfare Posted: 12 May 2016 at 7:27am
	It's an identity crisis, like I just had a lobotomy so much shit running in my head like a popped colostomy I'm ready to plague this generation 'til the cycle arrives at rebirth but what's it worth when the thirst for vengeance can't be reversed? it can't be rehearsed, this is warfare - I'm fighting the tyranny of suffocation like an urban warrior in the jungle thriving despite a tough vocation but my fucked up mind writhes like a Siamese cat hissing on the sly my thoughts clump like so much litter, boxed in and pissing on the dry


Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3263 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 May 2016 at 9:05am
	Nice work here,I thought you done well to use the key words and make it come together cohesively,and I liked the opening bar which contained that cheeky little play,(shit running/ colostomy),your text flow was also present which is a plus also,im liking this verse as a whole,your showing some sprite here to interesting,a good contender for the drop challenge me thinks...good work...peace.
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