My Downfall
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16076
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 6:28am
Topic: My Downfall
Posted By: DressToKill
Subject: My Downfall
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 7:17am
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What Is It To Die?For I Am Not Afraid Of Death I Have No Lover Anymore..No Familly..Nothing Courageous Left The Hand Ive Been Delt Is Cold..Like Feeling Of A Strong Barrel I Stare At Picture Frames..Saying All Of My Long Farwell's The Feeling Of Emptiness..Can Capture A Mans Desire To Strive Through Strife..And Demand Something Higher No More Self Determination..No Reason To Even Get Through No Mother Or Father To Turn To..No Aunts No Neice No Nephew To Be Left With Nothing..Is To Die Inside Itself Loneliness Is A Trigger..To A Man With No Provided Help You Ask Me How I Know This? Well Ive Seen The Tops And Bottoms The Great Memories Of Times..And Others That Should Be Forgotten Feeling On Top Of The World,Is A Man's Worst Possesion Cuz Everything That Goes Up..Must Go Fall Into Depression Ive Had It With Owning Nothing,In A Self Obssesed Enviorment Now I Shall Exchage My Life..For An Eternal Life Of Retirement "Boom"..."Shell Falls" ------------- The original comeback kid |
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 2:54pm
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Read this on the other site and fed it on msn but ill do it on here since every other fucker is lazy, as i said before content and emotion in this is dope definetly a step up from previous things you've dropped becoming consistantly impressive though which is a great thing, flow was on point, wasn't the greatest vocab but it didn't need it to have the effect it did...dope drop
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Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 7:39pm
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Thanks Kay..was kind a return peice :) ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 7:48pm
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Your mean your gonna stick around this time? Damn :( ------------- |
Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 30 August 2008 at 2:19am
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"cuz everything that goes up...must go fall into depression" that was pretty dope... a few other lines stood out too...as a whole, this was pretty good...flowed well, original wording (for admittedly played concepts), and tight emotion...u've evolved duke, keep doin u ------------- I am the one that knocks... |