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Where Im From

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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=17518
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:00am


Topic: Where Im From
Posted By: Calibra
Subject: Where Im From
Date Posted: 01 June 2009 at 11:23pm

Doomed by location...

It's a hard life, hard days and hard nights
Enemies shake hands then next minute start fights
Sold a dream, this wasn't promised to me
Streets turned me to a man I never wanted to be
Cause where im from, it's like im stuck here
No luck, fucked, and drunk drinking Duff beer
Felt enough fear to last me a life time
No light shines on the victims of knife crime
Home, should really look better in my eyes
But this place owns my soul like the devil in disguise
Destined for demise when I rarely see the sun
Shot down in my prime and I've barely seen a gun
How dare we seek some fun? No happieness achieved
Paying out more money than we actually recieve
But round here, we earn then we drink
Earn then we drink, it's obserd when ya think
Hoping all the money wasted would emerge from the sink
Or the drain, try to change but then return to the drink
Soon a pattern occurs and every day is the same
We can't skip, just repeat, so we play it again
Enough to make ya insane, yet I stay, I remain
Cause a hard knock life circulates in my veins!
 



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Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 01 June 2009 at 11:37pm
This is dope as fuck.. Serious..

I felt every line, can totally understand where your comin' from.. Great** visual effect to it, can relate to every bar.. Opening 2 bars where ill and the rest followed in its path..

Shit man, no hidden or subliminal messages just straight truth..

I'm not a huge Open Mic fan, hense why you hardly see me in here but this was awesome..


Straight illin'...


Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 02 June 2009 at 12:00am
Dope....period

As jnr said every line was felt and had its place in the piece, i think the duff beer line was kinda forced since im sure geordies dont have duff beer haha, dope visual effect as said, being able to relate to this made it better and i could feel it as i was reading....dope shit man


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Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 02 June 2009 at 12:22am
Yeah, pretty much the above, this is fantastic, keep dropping

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Не все потеряно пока...


Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 02 June 2009 at 1:09pm
Destined for demise when I rarely see the sun
Shot down in my prime and I've barely seen a gun
How dare we seek some fun? No happieness achieved
Paying out more money than we actually recieve
But round here, we earn then we drink
Earn then we drink, it's obserd when ya think

def poetry jam ....yup!


Posted By: J BaKe 330
Date Posted: 02 June 2009 at 2:44pm
Yo Im Diggin This Verse Bro,I Can Relate To Almost Everything U Said ...U Need To Put This Down On Audio 4 Sure....Get @ Mine


Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 02 June 2009 at 9:03pm
An all this happens in Newcastle :P
Lol,jk, hot man, you dont need to be told... keep it up


Posted By: Exoduzt
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 1:56am
damn...this is just dope...the emotion this portrays is incredible....i lost the flow in only one part  but other than that this is flawless...the ending was just crazy...

great read


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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 3:49pm
Dope verse, rhyming mixed with content & imagery sprinkled in there...vivid descriptions

Yeah...sick


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Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 04 June 2009 at 4:14pm
no1 above me has lied this is hot shit right here dude i aint gotta say more bout this jus read tha verse peps!
 
Peace


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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!

It aint over till I Rapdisup



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