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I'll take dean personal!....Point blank and close up! His flow sucks, he said it, asked for T and this hoes shook "just nothing solid or hitting here...weak sh opener"
Now take a look, Kid's insecure like them homo rapists n maggots, Whats the skin colour of others?<< this proved dude's a RACIST FAGGOT, "You play ths race card too often too hard man!...Maggots was cheese on the set up too"
Point's pathetic.. N's on his ass explains he's obsessed with dicks, Hoe showing the "Tag" match proved He's ugly like a bad facebook pic, "Proved he's ugly!!! its weak at best here Titu... I see you on the concept but wording was way off and punchline could have done alot more"
How this bitch gon diss when its clear he's an uncreative plain jerk, Cuz dudes such a tool... He recycled his words in the same verse!!? "Something here but nothing real heavy hitting....a little jab" shit hurts but its true.. Only thing PB taught VM are them "bitch moves" his members get kicked outta his crew more than Mobs used to recruit, "Not making much sense here Titu"
His stings are fused,his confidence came from that "special school", Even his clique of dickrider's didn't accept "Point's a clever dude" "Gotta be honest bro I'm not feeling this shitt.....Sometimes the way you use the English langauge hurts you"
Beside them several proofs, this kid is already lost like a corny whore, He admits he "chokes" in blind drops like SUCKING DICKS THROUGH A GLORY HOLE, "Just saying "corny whore" that way is CORNY and its kinda what I meant in the last bars breakdown........punch is not working for me here either"
Like the rest of his crew , their angle against me 's brief This fool just talks about Ex-Po's like a retired police chief "In the nicest possible way.........This closer was naff shitt bruv"
"Feel like I came a bit harsh wth you here mate.....but am gonna keep it real with you so you can improve in the right areas, this shitt really needs work||........Props on the elevation you have made so far but against any experenced writer you are still in trouble..Keep at it fam"
Titu sucks cock and every week it's a different member This bitch rides L.Inc's dick so hard you'd swear he was Princess Zelda "Zelda/L.inc is played and you know that! Not a great start"
Dumb fucking Asian, you make no sense with the words that you utter Titu only 'drops hot raps off the dome' removing his turban in summer! "Yeah this made me lol....It was nicely worded too...deent hit"
I'll murder this fucker, there's no way he could ever touch me I'll 'wreck this pussy' as I've got 'Tit in the palm of my hand' like I was getting lucky! "I get this but think you came a bit awkward with the idea and lessend the potential impact"
Always getting slaughtered yet we see no-one defending this fag Cos the only people saying 'hey, 'tu's smooth!', were welcoming the veteran back! "You could do more to link ya set ups to ya punches sometimes........Never the less you done well to get a decent punch from this......thinking out the box thru experience....props" And put your fucking mic away, we don't have time for your boring flows I'll leave you screaming 'doctor, doctor!' without you reciting your audios "Dope hit here set up and punch came together well ....good shitt"
Poor quality recordings, you drop tracks we can't even hear you on People told him to 'up his volume', so he took a trip to the hair salon! "Funny and that but not much of a hit"
Ugly cunt, at birth his parents should have left him for dead Cos the only girls 'waking up to T' are getting breakfast in bed! "Funny again ...Clever too but not hitting too hard"
You weren't ever a threat, I'll leave you battered and busted Now your whole clan'll get punished for ever revealing Tit like flashing in public ""Awkward on the wording hurt this closer a bit..........Smooth it was not"
"A decent verse here Point you had some very nice moments and a few lazy looking half assed shots that fell off on impact but overall a pretty solid drop"
Mvgt Point Blank
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