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Scotty32 
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 Topic: [Crew] Titu vs Point BlankPosted: 26 February 2014 at 8:09pm |
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Crew battle between Titu vs Point Blank for Tha Syndicate and
Vis Maior, respectively.
16 lines 2 week deadline First 5 (3-0 KO) No crew votes No flipping/feeding No show is instant DQ, no trip to NML Blind Drops - All verses must be PM'd to me Lets keep the battles clean and limit the bitchin to just the linked thread for the crew battle. Edited by Scotty32 - 27 February 2014 at 11:57am |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 8:35pm |
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Titu
Im so surprised on this cunt's strange kind, This kid is hoe and a faggot..But at the same time!!! LOL Aight... here... ** he no showed "tag" title match. ** DTK vs PB (title match-"blind drops"). He said he chokes in title matches. I'll take dean personal!....Point blank and close up! His flow sucks, he said it, asked for T and this hoes shook! Now take a look, Kid's insecure like them homo rapists n maggots, Whats the skin colour of others?<< this proved dude's a RACIST FAGGOT, Point's pathetic.. N's on his ass explains he's obsessed with dicks, Hoe showing the "Tag" match proved He's ugly like a bad facebook pic, How this bitch gon diss when its clear he's an uncreative plain jerk, Cuz dudes such a tool... He recycled his words in the same verse!!? shit hurts but its true.. Only thing PB taught VM are them "bitch moves" his members get kicked outta his crew more than Mobs used to recruit, His stings are fused,his confidence came from that "special school", Even his clique of dickrider's didn't accept "Point's a clever dude", Beside them several proofs, this kid is already lost like a corny whore, He admits he "chokes" in blind drops like SUCKING DICKS THROUGH A GLORY HOLE, Like the rest of his crew , their angle against me 's brief This fool just talks about Ex-Po's like a retired police chief |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 8:36pm |
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Point Blank
-'tu's smooth/2smooth, who returned recently - His pic is on his soundcloud, his hair has mad volume/ the volume on his mic is pretty low - He got mad at me when I said he dickrides Lyricist Inc. L.Inc/Link, main character from Zelda Titu sucks cock and every week it's a different member This bitch rides L.Inc's dick so hard you'd swear he was Princess Zelda Dumb fucking Asian, you make no sense with the words that you utter Titu only 'drops hot raps off the dome' removing his turban in summer! I'll murder this fucker, there's no way he could ever touch me I'll 'wreck this pussy' as I've got 'Tit in the palm of my hand' like I was getting lucky! Always getting slaughtered yet we see no-one defending this fag Cos the only people saying 'hey, 'tu's smooth!', were welcoming the veteran back! And put your fucking mic away, we don't have time for your boring flows I'll leave you screaming 'doctor, doctor!' without you reciting your audios Poor quality recordings, you drop tracks we can't even hear you on People told him to 'up his volume', so he took a trip to the hair salon! Ugly cunt, at birth his parents should have left him for dead Cos the only girls 'waking up to T' are getting breakfast in bed! You weren't ever a threat, I'll leave you battered and busted
Now your whole clan'll get punished for ever revealing Tit like flashing in public |
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Shankley
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Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 10:48pm |
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T2: Opener: A decent opener not WOW but decent had a nameplay and a nice personal
Bar 2: the set up is disconnected with the punch and the punch I feel lacked power could have reworded it to make a better impact Bar 3: didn't like this the set up was all over the place and the punch was weak not good at all Bar 4: it was ok the punch again lacked substance it felt weak Bar 5: this was alot better nice punch and good personal a great improvement Bar 6: this was nice good punch and the set up was ok but they dont rhyme for me Bar 7: this was quite funny and nice punch but the end rhyme for the set up seemed forced for the punch Closer: No punch here it is just a statement and not even a good one it appears you ran out of ideas PB: Opener: Nice opener had a good punch and it flowed well Bar 2: this was funny nice personal and a decent hit... I liked the turban in summer lol Bar 3: great bar good meta and the ref to Lucky D crew leader was insane Bar 4: Another nice bar good punch Bar 5: lol nice the personal was hard and the ref to his audio was great Bar 6: This wasnt as good as previous but still was ok Bar 7: Another good bar nice set up and the punch hits hard Closer: This wasnt good the meta was alright but he hit was lacking power Overall it was a little one sided Titu was off his game didnt have his usual quality set ups werent connected to punches and the punches were missing. PB had quite a polished verse nice set up flowing effortlessly into the punches MVGT Point Blank |
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2smooth
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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 4:58am |
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Another one sided battle here.
MVGT pb Titu, a lot of your verse didn't even rhyme to me... And almost every transition was forced and/ or not relevant... Setups were forced as well, mostly. It's kind of a shame u didn't work the personal info u seemed to have into stronger, more meaningful hits. Point, although there was a couple flow mismatches for me, this was clearly the better verse. Punches were stronger, wordplay was mostly simple yet effective and executed well... Just the stronger verse IMO. |
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Point Blank
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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 1:59pm |
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2-0 PB
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 10:01pm |
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I'll take dean personal!....Point blank and close up! His flow sucks, he said it, asked for T and this hoes shook "just nothing solid or hitting here...weak sh opener" Now take a look, Kid's insecure like them homo rapists n maggots, Whats the skin colour of others?<< this proved dude's a RACIST FAGGOT, "You play ths race card too often too hard man!...Maggots was cheese on the set up too" Point's pathetic.. N's on his ass explains he's obsessed with dicks, Hoe showing the "Tag" match proved He's ugly like a bad facebook pic, "Proved he's ugly!!! its weak at best here Titu... I see you on the concept but wording was way off and punchline could have done alot more" How this bitch gon diss when its clear he's an uncreative plain jerk, Cuz dudes such a tool... He recycled his words in the same verse!!? "Something here but nothing real heavy hitting....a little jab" shit hurts but its true.. Only thing PB taught VM are them "bitch moves" his members get kicked outta his crew more than Mobs used to recruit, "Not making much sense here Titu" His stings are fused,his confidence came from that "special school", Even his clique of dickrider's didn't accept "Point's a clever dude" "Gotta be honest bro I'm not feeling this shitt.....Sometimes the way you use the English langauge hurts you" Beside them several proofs, this kid is already lost like a corny whore, He admits he "chokes" in blind drops like SUCKING DICKS THROUGH A GLORY HOLE, "Just saying "corny whore" that way is CORNY and its kinda what I meant in the last bars breakdown........punch is not working for me here either" Like the rest of his crew , their angle against me 's brief This fool just talks about Ex-Po's like a retired police chief "In the nicest possible way.........This closer was naff shitt bruv" "Feel like I came a bit harsh wth you here mate.....but am gonna keep it real with you so you can improve in the right areas, this shitt really needs work||........Props on the elevation you have made so far but against any experenced writer you are still in trouble..Keep at it fam" Titu sucks cock and every week it's a different member This bitch rides L.Inc's dick so hard you'd swear he was Princess Zelda "Zelda/L.inc is played and you know that! Not a great start" Dumb fucking Asian, you make no sense with the words that you utter Titu only 'drops hot raps off the dome' removing his turban in summer! "Yeah this made me lol....It was nicely worded too...deent hit" I'll murder this fucker, there's no way he could ever touch me I'll 'wreck this pussy' as I've got 'Tit in the palm of my hand' like I was getting lucky! "I get this but think you came a bit awkward with the idea and lessend the potential impact" Always getting slaughtered yet we see no-one defending this fag Cos the only people saying 'hey, 'tu's smooth!', were welcoming the veteran back! "You could do more to link ya set ups to ya punches sometimes........Never the less you done well to get a decent punch from this......thinking out the box thru experience....props" And put your fucking mic away, we don't have time for your boring flows I'll leave you screaming 'doctor, doctor!' without you reciting your audios "Dope hit here set up and punch came together well ....good shitt" Poor quality recordings, you drop tracks we can't even hear you on People told him to 'up his volume', so he took a trip to the hair salon! "Funny and that but not much of a hit" Ugly cunt, at birth his parents should have left him for dead Cos the only girls 'waking up to T' are getting breakfast in bed! "Funny again ...Clever too but not hitting too hard" You weren't ever a threat, I'll leave you battered and busted Now your whole clan'll get punished for ever revealing Tit like flashing in public ""Awkward on the wording hurt this closer a bit..........Smooth it was not" "A decent verse here Point you had some very nice moments and a few lazy looking half assed shots that fell off on impact but overall a pretty solid drop" Mvgt Point Blank
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Titu
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Posted: 19 March 2014 at 10:14pm |
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Appreciate the vote and the feed,spume.
Just to clarify, that bitch moves bar was actually about how VM member wreckless got kicked outta his crew for biting and that trizz incident etc Anyways,thanks a lot. Good battle PB |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Scotty32
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Posted: 23 March 2014 at 8:30pm |
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3 KO to Point
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