Battles under Review: 2smooth vs. noxious

the rules are like this... I will go first, but you have exactally 1 hour after i drop to reply with yours... no flipping or feeding as this was supposed to be a blind drop. 
no hate/ dickryde votes, crew votes allowed (if explained well enough). 5-10 bars. i will put the time at the end of my drop so you know how long you have. 1 min. late, you lose, as a text loss instead of a no show cuz you know that was the rule. lets see what you got.

the losin' you felt was "smooth," you're deranged, insane and stupid/
i've proven myself, *2*, and i didn't have to change my name to do it!//*
the ongoing saga, long chapter but short scene/
Front Line like, "leave him alone, smooth, Corey's only 14!!//*
little kid, you're nothing but ob"noxious" and trans-parent/
it's no wonder you got more losses than the age of your grandparents//*
you're wack, not to mention that im killin' ya, too/
as a matter of fact, the leader but least skilled in ya crew//
at least Nox dont have to worry about anyone bitin' when they're fightin' him/
and he'll prolly complain about dickrydin' when he's kicked from the site again!//*
you can't see past 2s like you're lookin' around in the fog/
and stop sending me I.M.'s askin' me to be down with your squad!//*
punch after punch after personal, and back to the punches.../
this battle is already over.
I just want to know when your mom is gonna stop packing your lunches!//

class is over now. get your young ass to bed!

1:31 pm pacific time.

I Sever-Quick, telling me i Better-Spit
An' its like he's writin on laminate paper cuz he Never-Rips
Sweatin'-Bitch? cuz my spits are Hot-n-Humid
Wack; 'Period', like a Tampon the way im Stoppin'-You-Bitch
You aint Wise-Kid, these punches wearing ya Life-Thin
Cuz him being a 'Baby' aint the only time he 'Bites-Chin'[1]
Its Frightnin', so fuck this wanabe Renegade-Souljah
Glue Ya Mouth Closed, and down ya Nostrils pour Lemonade-Soda
Start Learnin'-Bitch that im Merkin'-Kids wit my Sick-Posts
I aint got this Bitch 2 on 1 but im still gona 'Spit-Roast'
Make yo ass Hit-Notes while im Scorchin-Ya-Spits
An' if he thinks he can Punch, i wana know who Taught-Him-Ta-Hit
Thought-It-Was-Clipz, stop using that name to Force-Yo-Rhymes[2]
Sticking Ketchup on Crack is the time you get a decent 'Sauce'-Of-Lines

[1] - If Yall Read his Last Line, Chincheck has used the same Concept in a battle
[2] - Yall still callin' me clipz, then Nox, just to Force ya rhymes

I think i PM'd you Twice
Grand Parents are Dead. thanx for the Remider man
I didnt chage my name loadsa times, i just made new Accounts
As for me being 14, find a new personal, man... shit, thats Played to the Max

Will Yall Fuck Off Wit These Fucked Up Personals

Thought-It-Was-Clipz, stop using that name to Force-Yo-Rhymes[2]
Sticking Ketchup on Crack is the time you get a decent 'Sauce'-Of-Lines

You aint Wise-Kid, these punches wearing ya Life-Thin
Cuz him being a 'Baby' aint the only time he 'Bites-Chin'[1]
1] - If Yall Read his Last Line, Chincheck has used the same Concept in a battle**

"no feeding as this was supposed to be a blind drop."

hmmmmmmmmmm... so you still had to see what i wrote first, thats fine... but you fed, and that was a no-no...

la la la..

i'll check this out.. means

1) i have to read the rules

2) I would like an offical PM'd complaint.. as really It's lucky i spotted this..

3) Monkeys....

2smooth wrote: the rules are at the top of this thread... shouldnt be that hard to find...

youre so desperate to get cheap wins arent you?

Annoyingly - in the official battle rules.. Thers nothing to cover this (hey dont blame me i've only been a mod for 2days - this time round)

no votes on this.. until the higher power has spoken !!!

(and no more smart ass comments either)

cool - i've passed this on to scotty to decide.. as really - he wrote the rules.. and he forgot this one

sorry i cant help more.

20theTruth wrote: 2Smoothilicious

^ phag!

I think i PM'd you Twice
Well he's sayin' four, no use in sayin' that unless you have evidence
Grand Parents are Dead. thanx for the Remider man
It...was...just...a...punch
I didnt chage my name loadsa times, i just made new Accounts
Same difference... read his verse...
As for me being 14, find a new personal, man... shit, thats Played to the Max
True...

You're both bitchin' to try n' get this win. Difference is, one of you is tryin' to sway shit, and the other one got flipped off of in a blind drops battle.

Hmm.

uppin