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POEIST 
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Joined: 11 April 2008 Location: CO Status: Offline Points: 2 |
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 Topic: 4 rank-KEYSTYLE BOUT FAKE RAPPERSPosted: 11 April 2008 at 4:58pm |
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HERES SOME SHIT I GOT FO YA
I FEEL BLISTERED AND SCABBED WHEN BITCHES AND FAGS TRY TO SPIT WHEN THEY CANT//
IT SICKENS ME BAD TO THINK YOU SCRIBBLED A PAD WITH TORN WRISTS FROM YOUR HANDS AND A DELIBERATE PLAN TO CONSIDER IT RAP//...
CUZ UR HORRIBLE SON, WITH RHYMES BORING AS FUCK AND A CHORUS THAT SUCKS//
YOUR ACT IS FAKE CUZ U MASK UR FAME WITH SOME STORIES OF LUCK SO...//
POUR ME SOME SUDS FROM THAT FORTY OF BUD AND ASK THE GREAT IF HIS PLANS OF FATE ARE AFFORDABLE ONES//...
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KILLIN RAPPERS LIKE VILLAGE ACTORS
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 12 April 2008 at 4:18am |
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You know how to rhyme and put together multies that make sense. Now fix your structure...also i'd like to see how you write a battle verse so i can rate you based on punchlines....
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SageOne
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Joined: 12 June 2006 Location: At Your House Status: Offline Points: 2976 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-13-2 Form: WLWLLL |
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Posted: 12 April 2008 at 6:20am |
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Dope bars...not the best structure...work on it...and No all caps...its in the rules...props....you've got a lot of potential.
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