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    Posted: 27 April 2004 at 5:53pm

normall rules......30 lines min...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 April 2004 at 6:06pm

you gain pain when i fly above you with a verse who's plain/ (plane)
gettin' slain by the insane mambo, puttin' you out in hard rain/
no one thinks you're someone, so i cut you open to prove you got guts/
poor little boy, you're like a broke squirrel, you got no nuts/
i can see through your bisexual father, cuz he is trans-parent/
gettin' wraped by punchlines comin' from me, you're inherent/
don't attack my empire, i'll 'swing my bat', like dancin' with a vampire/
tryin' to race away from me, but i put rods i your ''damn tire''/
chasing around, trazing you down, cut of your tounge, you makein no sound/
give you punch for lunch, givin' you a whole bunch, and i get the crown/

you stopped smokin', cuz your mama told you to 'cut the grass'
huntin' you down with my killer lines, and i 'bust your ass'
put my emotions for you on a train, so i can 'express my hate'
something bad's gonna happen to you, i say God 'bless your fate'

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^^look, I can write just like a-clipz: sensless multis and no punches 


After this ya won't be able to stay strong/
Take ya seriously?,how?,ya even spelled yo' own name wrong/
What can I say,this queer's through/
Why bring your "nonsense from bars" when nobody "cheers you"/
..or fear you,you should know by by now that frost blast hoes/
Octopuss could be �Will Sasso� and still not make a �mad show�/
You won�t last yo�, you�ll never reach stardom/
Frost�s just nuttin� to fuck with like a ripped condom/
It�s a marathon and you have rabbit feets/
Yo� luck�s runnin� out cuz you can�t master heat/
� don�t feel ya numb rap like ya gotta a sharp object to yo� spine/
Yo lyrics like TVN�s Happy Hour sitcoms, never watched but subject to re-wind/
Battle me?, you should�a declined, you won�t slip as I have ya chased/
Octopuss tryin� to pass off his rhymes as �hip� when they really a �waste�/
When frost takes tha mic, he rockz tha spotlight/
Seendin� ya home to where ya belong,tha dark side/
I�ll spark light and have this homie doomed/
This �puss� only commits crime fo� access to tha jail shower room/

We could never be twinz cuz your skillz can�t "come pair" to mine/

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 April 2004 at 6:31pm

haha...u type verry fast....

i got my rhymes dope like makaveli got 'all eyes on me'/
you a million?...i'll make you look like you got three/
you dont pay attention, i told you not to fuck with me/
yeah im only 14, but my rhymes kill, now ya stuck with me/

hes from norway, how can he speak and make any sense/
he wants to act tense, but im the one making this shit suspence/
you got no offence, ya whack and ya making me look immense/
to beat me kid, ull have to go to the highest expence to incense/

ya dumb fuck ima have to take you off the rails/
ima have to punch up ya face to loose ya details/
im the rhyming king of wales, irratating in ya nails/
chuck ya rhymes down and stick em on the scales/

i dont wana compair to you, who would want to any-way?/
certanly not me, i got things to do here my own way/
after my verse is read make sure you go 2 bed a pray/
try and catch me on a bad time, but kid its not today/

you goin on a 187 straight to heaven/
end up like kaygee dope and that kid devan/
u posted 35 lines before i could count to ten/
u think he bit it, or did he have it pre-written/

yall gota admit it, i am hot right now/
ima have to make this chump million stop right now/
i dissavow of all this, how can be able to allow/
this whack cat post a 30 summin lines is secounds, wow!/

this my next contestent, come on whens the next event/
to get them rhymes plzz tell me how much you spent/
only one bar is aimed at me, u call all that content/
if ya can type that fast then plzz tell my the idea or invent/

cos that shit is very rare, i keep saying it but i dont realy care/
you mite be just a million, but im bigger, a billionare/
bitch im that bit more, i think this bitch was unaware/

did he have time to prepare, ya right, me and you dont compare/

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 April 2004 at 7:12pm
wow millions spits just like me

he about to take over this site

flow:clipz
imaginery:million
punches:million
wordplay:million
multis:clip

hot shit million

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 12:03am
I agree with ILLA... Hot spit with good wordplay and solid punches. Not bad from Clipz, and yeah, he did type that shit mad fast, but you got beat by a plainly better verse.
Vote: mILLion
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 3:07am
anybody else wanna taste some? let me know!!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 3:17am

i can see through your bisexual father, cuz he is trans-parent/

clifts-slit in misfits who diss-this-amiss-remiss gliss-bliss flow-lunches
^^look, I can write just like a-clipz: sensless multis and no punches 

Octopuss could be �Will Sasso� and still not make a �mad show�/

Octopuss tryin� to pass off his rhymes as �hip� when they really a �waste�/

We could never be twinz cuz your skillz can�t "come pair" to mine/

DAMN!!! Milli0n is spittin' illness.... :D Nice choice of word, good wordplay's and nice use of multible spellingrhymes.... blakka blakka....

VOTE: Milli0n

Reason: Better overall.... The "All Eyez On Me"-line misses completly... Wrong album fool ;) Milli0n slaugtered here....

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 3:55am

same here million spat a way more complex , flowing , hard hitting verrse! nice!

clipz you did ok -bit choppy and not as nice as millions

vote:MiLLion

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 4:17am
That's the KO so no point in me votin' now...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 4:41am

and just so all u kno.....milli0n told me that was all pre-written...well done kid

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 10:03am

Yeah... the second part looks like he used it (or someone else used it) against some guy name octopuss

I'm betting Frost beat octopuss in that battle...

I shoulda noticed before I voted, but can the mods take a look at this?

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 10:31am

yeah can u plzz

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 April 2004 at 11:13am
oh damn straight im looking at this.
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