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    Posted: 24 November 2003 at 3:23pm

 

Drop ya verse,.. dont make it adverse,..
originality is hard to c just drop it and be,. ..
the only crew member to fight it new straight outa the blocks.. u might not make it past the hurdle with those pink gay socks...
pull them up too ur knees girls dont make me say plz
cause u no am gettin angry when some dumb ass PM's me, 
Thats not a 50 line,...... shit!! thats such a crime.........
baby hers a 9........ go and shoot off ur rhyme,............
let me look and whyne....... cause its not in time..........
Kritick sick of seeing jibs sniffin up coke lines.....
pretend they growinup fine.......shit thats the end of my rhyme.

 

Peace

verses have to be 10 lines or more.


 

 

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now this is political issue, if i was to blow ya head off i certainly wouldnt b missin u, caz this is devan x, i kill u next, chop off ya arm and break ya necks, and to the hores i am nothin but sex, wid a vest, wid the best and better than the rest, this devan with Kritical, like i sed its political, caz bush and blair always the men who is hypercritical, i cant take this shit from little you, u nothin to me, and if u to see, then u certain to be blinded from my sight, like i jump on the mic, and spit till the night, now we power, and u the twin towers, u fallin to us, like world trade did on november the fuck, i cant careless, to carress is not on my list, but neither is my fist breakin your jaw to assist, they a real g, who real mean, and when they battle u, u wish u wernt seen, caz u embarresed, caz they no that u from paris, the place of love, another pussy rapper fell under the carrage, but that ways a life, and im afraid yes im good enough to be plainly the mic.
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yo,
getting beat in text; no need to peep or critique his message,
dont make me get personal; im tryna keep the readers interested..
peep this wesson; smoke's taking off your arms and shoulders,
bars are roasted! post up in this rapper crib like a Scarface poster!
Charred & toasted! Sign's a joke; I look at this man and laugh,
bottom of the player pool; ya crew picked you in the expansion draft!
                                                                                                                My murderous lyrics equipped with spirits of the Thugs before me...
Pay off the block evade the cops cause I know they comin for me...
I been hesitant to reappear, been away for years...
Now I'm back my adversaries been reduced to tears...
Question my methods to switch up speeds, sure as some bitches bleed...
niggaz'll feel the fire of my mother's corrupted seed ...

 

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Copped A Mic An Started Killin It Intense
Call Me A G.I.-Ant Like Millitant Insects

halla at yall lata!

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wahgwan

lemme freestyle a quick ting 4 ya

yo it be easy 2 see im 2 street for this/

so i sit an reminis/i try to focus/fools spit dreams/so i make them scream/oviosly they bleed

when a pull up with ma team/niggerz like us mor dan mean/always lean/always making a gore scene/wait a minite/lemme fuck wit it for a miniute/why dem fakes talk shit/when they done cry like a broke bitch/

which i gotta switch/cos i spit a poetry/dat criminals no as reality/my reability/to stay as a attacker/is at true quality/who come near me my wepon rises/blood or no blood representing/my adrenaling rises/as tha adversary/will be praying to mary/wishing to have a contrary/

am out

 

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i got a pit bull who eats sheep n spits wool
n chews on human body tissue till its stomach gets full

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what thefuuuck?,..
whatever bitch
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Cheeko....
dont POST if ya aint got fuck all to COAST
my ID is KRITICAL so a make my reply ANALYTICAL
Kaygee and baby dint like ya SPITTIN SHIT
they think ya goin CRAZY / another chance not MAYBE / 
ya show me ya DOWNFALL but where the fuck was ya PUNCH cheeko got GUTS postin shit that SUCKS jar ma throte so i dont make
u think its bad LUCK. 
Good luck
ama take u out like CRAZY doe ray me hit miss or MAYBE, shady ive gotto be to U / i no u only tryin cheek be somthin NEW
these niggaz seen it BEFORE they dont abide by the LAW
but they no a thing or 2 about makin u SORE.

 

Keep rolling ya'll

 



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shut tha fuck up fool i ll be ya downfall ya jake wa street wa law you a clean ass fag

Fag ass pussy/shut tha fuck up /you a suck up/were tha fuck you at/u see senor an got yo cock up/a bit louda/Shut tha fuck up/you a nasty hoe dat wet/Let Kaygee and baby give you a shag/an jet/ 

DANGER/KRITICAL a leave you in hospital beeping like a pager/you a kid acting like a power ranger/ take dat shit back/cos it total crap/bullshit/whack/Shut ya trap/fuck your bigboy act/you gettin mor dan a Blood-clap slap/punch i can NEva lack/cos in hitting ya lil RaT A TAT TAT

Kritical you must be on Crack/spittin ya act/u abide Law??/fool you follow Every FuCkin sign/like Get Of tha FlooR/Taking the 5 hour tour/fuck useing dem white man methophors/WAT SORE/PUSSY you in UK??/lets say/come my way/london tha east were der no Bitch ass peace/so wit pleasure/come up/an try an chop me up/sho me everything yo got/cos after my 1 shot/all ya shitty punks go DROP/so Shut tha fuck up

 

tryin ta be street SHUT up PUSSY come up our YARD NIGGA COME UP pussy

WOOLISH,LEWISHAM,BIRMINGHAM,WOLVAHAMTON,PECKHAM,EAST HAM,ELEPHANT an CASTLE

PICK A MOTHER FUCKING PLACE BRING YA FAKE ASS CREW YA HOE
BITCH COME U LIL FAG a aint new ta street warz so BRING YA ASS UP

HOLLA BAK BITCH NOT A STUPID VERSE A FUCKIN TIME AN PLACE

UGLY DICKHEAD a BE UP HERE FOE YA ASSS BRING WHOEVA kageee baby smoke senor rule portex whoeva u ride wit on diz site bring em bitchz  up   

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Yeah, Klit, bring whoever you ride with... like me, PorteX, Blaze... whoever you want...

Out of those places on the list I think we should go to Birmingham.  Want me to drive...?

Adios...

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lol,... i aint even COMMENTIN on that yo, lo
whatever bitch
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Fuck me....    this guy needs a hit,. where did he say to meet i'll send im a little 1/4 or summot, u still wanna drive senor!  lol! 

Peace out



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cheeko - you after that post .. have made me so proud. so proud im not a twat like you.. you false internet bravado is bullshit.. please give up and go away - and dont let the fucking door hit you on the way out...

 

 

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ouch cheeko, dont that hurt! lol
whatever bitch
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no wonder he hasn't been bak to this sight in awhile

lol you dun made that nigga piss his pants

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yall come to Chicago to see what real street wars is..
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na i'm good enough wit theguns here

i'm holdin my ground, can't walk these streets wit out your friend on yo waist

halla

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