Spit for Rank: anything better than novice ..?

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   I brag and boast, hoes, I bag the most/
fuk grabbin toast, I commit murder via battle posts/ 
I'm that determined, settin traps for you rap vermin/
me and my cats stay huntin rats, we crack sternums//
all fact and actual rap, no lies or fiction//
City of Roses, step, catch bloody noses my shit flows like hoses//
saying u got beef ..clown u wud never take the shot//
your like a dark doomy hole in a wall on the block//
no body know who you are and nobody cares//
i got you runnin like a greyhound chaising hares//
explain'how you call ya self killerz wearing a crusifix on your chain//
And u emphasis ur empire...The only crew u got is christian quire//

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Lyrical Mind Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 June 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 630 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-27-2 Form: LLLLNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lyrical Mind Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: anything better than novice ..? Posted: 14 August 2007 at 10:24am
	I brag and boast, hoes, I bag the most/ fuk grabbin toast, I commit murder via battle posts/ I'm that determined, settin traps for you rap vermin/ me and my cats stay huntin rats, we crack sternums// all fact and actual rap, no lies or fiction// City of Roses, step, catch bloody noses my shit flows like hoses// saying u got beef ..clown u wud never take the shot// your like a dark doomy hole in a wall on the block// no body know who you are and nobody cares// i got you runnin like a greyhound chaising hares// explain'how you call ya self killerz wearing a crusifix on your chain// And u emphasis ur empire...The only crew u got is christian quire//
	Dominance beyond your grasp That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts I spit flames, like rocket packs

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 August 2007 at 5:43pm
	NOV... You've CONSISTANTLY shown taht you are still learning the intricacies of how to rap...you struggle wit flow still and ya content is really basic...ive feed this verse already in ya open mic, so i wont do so here but that is my reasoning...keep workin tho homie...


G-Pfeif Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote G-Pfeif Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 August 2007 at 11:30pm
	gettin better.. but still NOV
	<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks"

2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote 2smooth Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 August 2007 at 10:03am
	keep workin' at it... an' drop more bars like the first one ya had... novice