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ch3kkgame 
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145  Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
 Topic: (Audio) Ch3kkGame VS D. Von DoomPosted: 13 July 2014 at 8:19pm |
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1 min and a half max. No flipping. He needs 4 days.
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ch3kkgame
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 13 July 2014 at 8:51pm |
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Lets go bitch... 4 days not needed.. YOU are Fucking dead.
Personals... we were supposed to have a text battle and this faggit never dropped a verse. Said he doesnt do text battle anymore cause the judges be on some bullshit and blah blah blah... fuckin pussy.. then I PM'd this guy and he says
So here it is. Death to D. Von over Eminem's Nail in the coffin.
Edited by SwordedStylez - 13 July 2014 at 8:58pm |
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 13 July 2014 at 9:39pm |
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Quit spamming your own thread or it'll get locked dudes. Keep it to verses and votes, talk shit in the fuck y'all section ta.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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D.Von Doom
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Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 14 July 2014 at 1:16am |
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https://soundcloud.com/doom918/ch3kkgame Can't fuck with me lyrically edit-embedded for you bro. Edited by SwordedStylez - 14 July 2014 at 1:34am |
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I can only fall off in space...
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 14 July 2014 at 7:01pm |
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Firstly, can I just say how glad I am y'all are on LA. With my plans for the future of audio battles guys like y'all will quickly become stars I think. This was a dope as fuck battle for real, so entertaining so props to both of y'all.
Ch3kk - Man you hit your style, I aint this type of rapper myself but you got that laid back southern swag and delivery and you kill it. Punches are more the bragg/swag style and clowning, production is off the chain. You didn't go enough, and whilst you have a voice that was made for this game you didn't blow my dome lyrically. Dope but a little soft hitting. Doom - Your delivery is decent, needs a little more charisma for battles and you need to highlight your punches better for clarity's sake. You also need more compression in your production to even out your vocals, that'll give you more presence instead of your voice dipping every so often. Lyrically you came nice, some cool bars and nice ideas. Again you aren't connecting them fully into haymakers but you're definitely not bad either. I judge using Punches as Delivery as the two main factors, then FLow/Rhymes, then production. I have Doom for Punches, Ch3kk for delivery, Doom for flow/rhymes and Ch3kk for production. As the 2 main are even and flow/schemes are a bit more important than production Doom edges this by a whisker for me. Great battle y'all keep it up.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Ransom
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Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW |
Posted: 15 July 2014 at 12:47pm |
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Great battle fellas, Nothing better then a battle that has real juice behind it.. I don't know how you battle someone you have no issues with but thats another topic..
Ch3kk - Your delivery and emotion was front row in verse.. You rode the beat pretty decent and had a lot of personals. Your punchlines were there as well as your multis. Not sure how long you been on the mic but It didnt sound like you were reading off the paper.. Doom - When I heard the beat I was like oh shit.. one of my favorite battle beats.. But After that I just didnt feel the delivery.. Sounded like you were reading a text battle to an audio.. You took some nice shots at Ch3kk but without a delivery man nothing sounds like you want it to... Vote: Punches, personals, multis and delivery all go to Ch3kk making my Vote for >>>>>>>>> Ch3kk <<<<<<<<<<
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~Lyrical Death Dealer~
"The Mike Myers of Papyrus" |
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UKK
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Joined: 16 July 2014 Location: Russia Status: Offline Points: 22 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Posted: 16 July 2014 at 7:03pm |
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Chekk- Wow, I like the aggression and you went at Doom non-stop, you flowed pretty well but there wasn't any punchlines that made me go "ohhhhhhhh" or "damnnnnn" your punchlines were generic and pretty obvious and you need to work on your lyrical ability a bit more especially on this website cause there animals out here......Other than that your verse was good on a "fuck you" level lol
D-Von Doom- I havent heard a slaughter like that since i joined this website and i clicked on mostly all the post, Your punchline were good, Lyrically I take my hat off to you, your flow was decent you kno sometimes it was hard to hear what you was saying at points but overall listening to you had my face all twisted up....The only thing you need to work on your flow and sting on your punchlines cuz i heard you but i aint feel you felt it but overall this need to be top lyrical assault audio at this moment.......Great Job both of you but my vote goes to....... >D-Von Doom< |
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H4ZE
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Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 12:35am |
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this was a dope battle. Both of you used dope beats haha.
Chekk, I love your delivery, I was really feelin it. Dope flow and emotion in this, some pretty good personals in this track. I really dig your style. Some pretty nice punches and nice multis. Good shit. Doom, love the beat haha, but I'm not really feelin your delivery. You coulda been a lot more aggressive imo. Had some pretty nice punches but the delivery wasn't there to help carry them for me. Rhyming was good though. Overall, both of you did pretty good, chekk took this flow, delivery and punch wise for me. Pretty enjoyable battle here. MVGT Chekk
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solidbars
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Joined: 19 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 11 |
Posted: 19 July 2014 at 7:06pm |
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this was really really good.
Ch3kk whoa man that was some good stuff you sounded so mean like you really wanted to kill him, I take it the wanna do text line is a personal, lmao@ the Cam battle line. That was hot. The give her that D Von was a nice line to. I like the play off his name. Dvondoom you were really good to. You ain't live by the 2 K's line was hot. At your neck like ya tats crooked line was crazy too. The problem with you is that sometimes your voice would get real low and I could hardly hear you and maybe you had some other Ines I couldn't hear. I've also heard the King Cooper line before not exactly like but the shells and turtle backs reference is played. This was still good ass battle though. I tip My hats to both. Good job I have to give it to ch3KK, He was like a monster on this he made it seem like he wanted to destroy dvondoom and I believed it. So I vote for Ch3kk
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ch3kkgame
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Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 21 July 2014 at 12:31pm |
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bump for votes
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 24 July 2014 at 7:55pm |
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Ch3k - Decent punches, the flow and delivery were okay as well and had a good battle feel to it. The track itself could have been polished up a bit so the vocals were more on point and clearer for the listener though. But overall, not a bad battle verse at all.
Doom - You also had decent punches your track as well. I thought your flow and delivery were amazing at times, and at other times you slipped in that area. The times that your delivery was on point though, you showed a ton of promise. I'll say the same thing to you about ch3k, the audio itself could have been polished up to be clearer. MGVT: Ch3k - I thought this was a super close one actually. It was pretty even for me, but there were a few times that I thought doom slipped up with his delivery which is why I have to lean towards ch3k on this one.
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 28 July 2014 at 3:19pm |
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Ok, firstly Spectreman the fact that you didn't just leave your vote and move on instead of further agitating things is really making you look like you're trolling. That being said I also don't think your vote is remotely accurate/legitimate. This was a close battle as everyone else who's voted has said, and your vote stands out like a sore thumb compared to the rest. The spam will be deleted and your vote does not count. Ch3kk, don't reply again or I'll have to give you a battling ban. Spectreman you reply again and you're getting a suspension. Quit trolling or eventually we WILL IP Ban you.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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nigerchu
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Joined: 27 April 2014 Status: Offline Points: 682 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: LLWLLL |
Posted: 30 July 2014 at 8:46pm |
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LOL^
Great battle guys, pretty good verses from both of you.
Ch3kk- I love your voice. You had some good punches and flow/delivery were okay too. I just feel like you could have cleaned it a lil bit. Nice multis too. But good verse overall. Doom- You had a good verse too, but IMO, delivery could have been better. Good punches too, but I gotta say too, that I wasn't really "in" your verse. Couldn't connect with it because of delivery. So, MVGT Ch3kk for better punches, delivery and rhyming. |
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 30 July 2014 at 8:50pm |
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Ch3kk wins 5-2
Edited by SwordedStylez - 30 July 2014 at 9:00pm |
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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