Audio Battle Archive: (audio) Ch3kkGame VS Mission (5-1)

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I had more punches but he didnt accept my extension for 2:00 so this is what I got. Please take the time after you listen to it and read the expos, because I used alot of punches that you non americans prolly wont get, as well as some less obvious ones but ill do my best to keep the expos brief as possible. And as is my tradition, I have posted the lyrics for your reading pleasure.

I wasn't planning on logging in again but I heard Chekk's on his soundcloud and wanted to hear the other side, saw y'all weren't gettin votes (typical text head scene.)

Firstly, I ignored all of Mission's text lyrics, this is audio kid, you need to let it stand on it's own.

Chekk - Presence was there, collected/confident in your delivery, and you got a great voice for the mic. Flow was at times standard at times really fun especially towards the end, some really nice strings in there adding to your impact. Overall your schemes worked really well for you so good work there. Punches ranged from ok to decent here but your delivery adds weight to your bars which is always important in terms of overall impact. I prefer you on-beat to be honest but I think you handled this well, nothing was rushed everything had a nice smooth phrasing and you executed well.

Mission - Never heard you before but you're decent at what you do. Firstly, you spat this entire thing way to fast, I'm not sure whether that was to fit more lines in or as a display of skill but it actually worked against you heavily here.  By rushing right through this whole verse you lost a fuckton of impact, this isn't a track, it's a battle. You need to give your audience time to absorb your bars or you're instantly losing impact, I caught everything you spit easily, however - nothing at all hit me in the verse as a stand-out line though there may well have been some doozies. Slow down, approach your verse from a position of cold confidence, this was like listening to someone who's drank too much espresso and injected a few cans of monster ;). Lyrically you're not bad, you have ok concepts but your rhyme game needs work, some longer strings or well placed stress rhymes will give you more of a "groove" in your flow and well let the audience's mind really get to working over your bars. Schemes were basic and underused, think of your actual underlying rhyme schemes/patterns as the pulse/drone/rhythm and then use the conjoining words to highlight that. Delivery was what hurt you most though, it was neat to hear but not suitable for battles.

My vote = Chekk - because he won and the community is still too lazy to support actual hiphop...

Check - you had some sick wording and your verse came off more with a battle vibe. You have good rhyming and your punches were Hella good. This was dope shit.

Mission- you had some decent punches but check came in with some hard punches and his technique was smooth. He had complexity within his rhymes.

Mvgt- check, he had a heavier battle verse. Both had good Verses but Check edged out

Rutter your vote is disallowed as D Von Doom was not in the battle so how you voted him I have no idea.

upping

Mission: 

The rule on upping is quite clear mission.

Check wins 5/1