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    Posted: 27 December 2014 at 7:03pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:03pm
My bad bro. Lets get it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:59am
https://soundcloud.com/onthegrind157/vs-dvon-doom

Mooning a donkey/twice the ass 
Mooning is when pretty much flashing your ass and a donkey is a jackass so "twice the ass"

He got ko'd by ransom 
Natural disaster/ landslide 
A landslide is a natural disaster

The first time we battled he had a line saying that if I provoke him, he'll shoot the 4.4
Delayed/d layed/postponed

You put a pet (a hamster for instance) in a shoe box to give it air 

Metal/medal
In the special Olympics, everyone gets a medal/..

Bookmark/ book-mark/ 
Boom means to run and mark is an offensive term lol 

Long head/hey Arnold
If you seen the show, and if you haven't just kill yourself lol, Arnold has a long head 

Touch O/letter Q
If you see the letter q, it just an O with with the line touching it

Everything else yall should be able to get... Good luck
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 December 2014 at 9:38pm

https://soundcloud.com/daofficial1/vs-onarolle

expo:
-U.f.o translate to crop circles which always happen in corn fields
-Hes from Brooklyn and the dodgers no longer exist in the nfl
-if your bored...walk (boardwalks are properties in monopoly)
everything is self explan.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2015 at 6:49pm
Sick Battle

DVD: Wordplay and punchlines are just MAGIC.....then i like how you got sneaky personal within your punchlines...delivery a little up & down but good overall


OnARolle: The witty wordplay i gots to give you props, I enjoy having to replay songs to get what I'm listening too, nice punches, you should of got alil more personal but im not mad


Russia's vote goes to: Dvon
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 January 2015 at 6:53pm
Well this was hella fun to listen to. I swear onarolle sounds like one of my crew members lmfao.

Onarolle. First, very good wordplay and metaphors. You definitely know your way with words and witty punchlines. You had a few really nice ones, a couple light jabs, but I do think you could have done better if you got rid of the jokes about his girl and did something more personal, tho those lines were pretty damn nice in themselves. Mentioning Ransom immediately got my attention, I like u bringing up some dirt. I loved the Landslide bar, and those lines about his girl were not punches but the wordplay was absolutely hilarious. 

D Von. You came out the gate with equally witty punchlines, metaphors and wordplay, however, you took a much more aggressive approach, and used the wordplay more as a weapon for punches then as a medium for punchlines. You attacked more in every bar, with relevant clear punches.

Very hard choice, had to listen to these multiple times, enjoyed them both. but Von gets the edge here.

MVGT: D Von. Doom
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 January 2015 at 12:27am
I'm now just seeing this but how the hell? This got over 130+ views and yet no one is voting.. Should've never accepted this battle.. . Give the W to Von I forfeit.. Would've lost anyway... Already deleted my verse..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 January 2015 at 2:10am
That's fine and since your freeposting and complaining in the battle, you can have a battling ban as well.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 January 2015 at 3:24am
Well it seems that Onarolle is a crybaby and has removed his track from the battle. I will go ahead and close this out as a KO to Doom.


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