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IZIAH 
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 Topic: (audio) IZIAH vs Young D #2 (0-3)Posted: 02 December 2014 at 8:27pm |
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45 second verse
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~Insight The Inspired~
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IZIAH
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Posted: 03 December 2014 at 8:12pm |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Young D
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Posted: 04 December 2014 at 9:27am |
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https://soundcloud.com/young-d-40/young-d-round-2-iziah It should look like this Young D minus the * [*soundcloud]https://soundcloud.com/young-d-40/young-d-round-2-iziah[/soundcloud*]
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Shankley
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Posted: 04 December 2014 at 3:20pm |
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Post in the battle threads that is not a vote or a verse will incur a battle ban, if you are having trouble have a look at the Getting Started thread or just simply follow the BBcodes just below text box.
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Posted: 04 December 2014 at 3:25pm |
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Well, this was kinda onesided. Neither one of u brought any big punches but Young D had a couple light ones. I like that christmas line lol. Izaiah, i think u could have come up with way harder punches if u took the time, u just kinda messed around. Young D took the last battle, learned from his mistake, and brought a cool calm and collected verse, that atually sounded like a diss and not a UK pop track.
For punches and better flow, MVGT: Young D
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Posted: 05 December 2014 at 10:13am |
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Young D the rule on 'Upping' is clearly set out. Next time you don't abide by the '24 hour rule' it will be a battle ban.
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Posted: 05 December 2014 at 7:53pm |
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Iziah you went light in my opinion...no real punches and some of it didn't rhyme..yes i got the dog/bitch line but you telegraph your punch by not rhyming on the end. your flow was a little off in my opinion also.
vs Young D you are great at rhyming but i feel you went softer than the first time you guys battled. but you did seem more tuned into actual battling him this time. I think you should of kept the energy of your flow from the first battle but direct it also towards your target. MVGT: Young D |
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Young D
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Posted: 06 December 2014 at 8:11pm |
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upppin for votes
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IZIAH
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Posted: 08 December 2014 at 10:30pm |
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Posted: 18 December 2014 at 4:01pm |
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Hmm, hard one to call. Iziah, your verse was cool but nothing special. You got a little aggressive with your delivery towards the end but you should have been doing that throughout as at the beginning it sounded like you were just reading it without putting any emotion into what you were saying. Nice mic quality though. Young D, your verse lyrically was better than IZIAH's, your rhymeschemes and flow were on point throughout too (apart from the last bar), and I just think you edged him on a lot of categories. You'd have to be stronger with your punches against higher ranked battlers than Iziah, but you took this.
Young D GMV |
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Posted: 18 December 2014 at 5:25pm |
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Young D ko
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