Open Mic: Bars At Work

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    Posted: 07 February 2010 at 3:50am
at work bored as hell so felt like droppin somethin..... let's git it!!
 
I been spittin for years, and shittin on peers
Sippin on beers while I grippin dem gears, so jus sit in the rear
This is a free, maybe somethin that you can handle
But my rhymes hard, try to bite em risk breakin ya tooth enamel
I'm a volcanoe, yous a candle
I been searchin far n wide but cant find nobody who can stand you
I stay wit dem K's like a white supremacist
So get into this, an end up on the wrong end of this
Flow limitless, like dem baskets of bred and fish
Keep lead for bitch niggaz who be scared of fists
I hate loose lip niggaz. Why they keep speakin?
Talkin all dat hot air, guess my bullets are heat seekin
Aim at cha head pussy, I dont play wit a snake
Aint nuttin sweet, but the speach the revrun gave at cha wake
I'm brave an u fake, In a grave u get placed
The cemetery's kinda crowded but LOOK! I saved you a space
 
*Ladies: Awww $n00z is SO thoughtful* lol
yea I'm bored... this more on some flow shit
 
U already know...
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote $n00z Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2010 at 7:18am
lol boy people really hate me lmao.. UP... i can do this at least once cant i??? dont wanna get banned or things of that nature
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your flow was decent, multis were good.
a few lines that stood out;
 
I been spittin for years, and shittin on peers
Sippin on beers while I grippin dem gears, so jus sit in the rear
 
I'm brave an u fake, In a grave u get placed
The cemetery's kinda crowded but LOOK! I saved you a space
Sick-Witted->means

I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it
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