1-2 Punch League: Beans vs Slip (1-2 league week 3) |
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 Topic: Beans vs Slip (1-2 league week 3)Posted: 13 September 2016 at 11:31pm |
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Due Thursday midnight Yank times
You fuckin know the rules, let's get it.
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Slip
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Posted: 14 September 2016 at 2:24am |
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notice, without his crews aid in the crewsades he's just another overrated challenger out played by Con everytime he battles ya ,beans days are numbered like an out dated calendar |
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Beans
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Posted: 16 September 2016 at 12:43pm |
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Sorry I'm late again. Give him the win if you want but here's my bar
saw ya wack rap vid & nothing appeared to be hard Sure you "make everything shine".. When their compared to your bars His videos titles make everything shine |
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Posted: 16 September 2016 at 10:46pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slip: Decent set up and personal but it fell flat cause the punchline was played and vague. If I were you I'd have kept it personal and relevant instead of going for a universal. It's a shame though cause it did start and build as it should've. Beans: Pretty tongue-in-cheek funny. I appreciate the simple and blunt style. Quite a predictable flip when you think about it but that didn't make it lose any impact. I felt it was delivered as best as it could've been. Vote - Beans. |
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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 2:15am |
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This vote has been disallowed by a moderator. slip, I like the concept, but it is a used concept. the set up was dope and could have lead somewhere, but the punch is just something ive heard before. beans, I actually liked this bar a lot, it was simplistic yet effective. you didn't need something overly complex. that being said, I will vote for Slip for putting his bar in on time.
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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 10:48am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slippy Toad Decent attempt at best,this started stronger than it ended and by the time we got to the punch it felt tired and played plus short of the actual target Kidney A bit simple plus I'm not a fan of these kinda OM punches but I do appreciate you worked it well and it was at least hitting the target Vote Beans for landing a better punch line and working a better concept |
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Skep
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Posted: 19 September 2016 at 3:15pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slip - Decent jab this week, can't really complain, landed and everything Beans - Yours seemed hella rushed homie and I feel it could've landed much better, gotta stop sleeping bruh lol My vote - Slip this week, Beans seemed rushed and for me it took away alot of the impact it could've had, good concept doe.
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Posted: 24 September 2016 at 11:16am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slip i liked your punch here,nothing complicated just a nice simple bar really,when you have the material to work with, it doesn't have to be complex,I also liked the angle you ran with too,good bar.. Beans I do feel your bar was rushed,and i'll give you credit for still dropping a bar,not your usual attack here,as this seemed to be light on the whole,the personal worked out OK on the whole though.. Overall this cypher belongs to Slip he did have the better bar here and he also had a decent bit if wordplay too,nothing to heavy,but it didn't have to be as when something works then on the norm it works well like here.. Vote...slip..peace. |
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