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SGC 
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 Topic: Black And Yellow FreePosted: 01 April 2011 at 11:14pm |
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this is another joint i did to appeal to the masses to keep my name buzzin... hopefully yall like it
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[SIZE="1"][FONT="Tahoma"]...LeBron in the beginning of the game yeah I toss white... |
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J504
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 5:26am |
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You already know I'm a fan of your last 2 audios, but this one really wasn't doing it for me if I'm keeping it real. Alot of annoying repetitiveness in the beginning before the verse started and there were so many reference-type (Santa Claus, Wolverine, Facebook, etc) lines crammed in that it didn't sound like a freestyle more like a who's who of lines you had stored in a notebook. Some of the lingo was a miss for me too, white dudes saying "Goon" and "Shottys" is pretty much considered cliche these days (ask anybody who plays Call of Duty online, wiggers constantly say that shit along with variant spellings of "murk") When the beat changed, the speed-up on the delivery was a bit awkward too.
I actually really liked the beat and I still like the way you can deliver but this just didn't come across as real as your other drops. If you made it into a real track, spaced the references out and didn't try to pass it off as a freestyle, I have no doubts that you could make it nicer.
Speakin of delivery, you still dropping your verse tonight for our battle? lol
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SGC
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 2:55pm |
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....thats really how i free...but thnx for the comments
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[SIZE="1"][FONT="Tahoma"]...LeBron in the beginning of the game yeah I toss white... |
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$n00z
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:52am |
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was coo but ahm that santa clause bar is conceited's... dont do dat
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U already know...
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J504
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:07pm |
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I knew that sounded familiar from the jump. I almost Google'd it when I heard it.
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:51pm |
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could be proof that he freestyled....i bit someones lines once, freestlying on call of duty....
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 9:16pm |
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tru dat. i have said somethin similar to what another rapper has said during a freestyle before. but was jus reminding mr vegas to try not to let any outside bars influence his freestyles. i know how it is cause you're jus tryin to say the first thing that comes to your mind that rhymes
all in all tho, decent free
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J504
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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 4:58pm |
upping
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