Open Mic: blood & Bondage:Deshi's Right hand Ma'am

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    Posted: 24 February 2016 at 9:29pm

Amy is Back and I have an announcement...
She is no longer a victim and im proud of it....
She is now a Night owl with fangs and loves violence
She wakes up in the dead of night to remain quit
Me and Her will torture you in dead silence....
 
Amy is grown now, she lives with no fear and resentment
Call me demented but I turned her out n bit her neck quick
Thirty Seven n now a devilish wench feeding off fermented limbs
eating the placenta froma bitch who was pregnant with seven kids
Amy rejected this twit n began wrenching her ribs 
biting the neck of this bitch that's begging for attention nd'
the rest of 'em? Well it was as simple as teaching them a lesson
Mess with Desh n your asking for torment nd a death wish
A sentence of relentless beatings and beheadings
A friendship is greeted with me nibbling at your neck ta get ya bleeding
you begin to seizure as i stick my teeth in
i release your inner demon and you start to think with reason
Its mortality's treatment, we are a legion of evil pimping the weakest
Amy and me can seek a bitch that's eighteen quick
No mother nor father can save these kids from the beatings
I have suck out the spinal fluid while they are screaming
Taking whips n CHAINS off the backs of Swedish kids
sometimes i get squeamish n sick but still make them eat feces n piss
i know, Desh Mean and Grim
But Vamps like myself have survived this way for centuries n its...
giving me the whits to get a masters degree in prostituting the weak n'
Im mental but Amy has enslaved more pre-pubes n shit than hell bro
pumping six inch stilettos as she fists cunts up till her elbows
while she listens to Mozart with headphones muffling the torment
the little whores get their core wrecked from Amy the Orient
Victim number ten? She was forty four from a foreign land
I tortured her dad with electrical chords n glass
forged into his core with hands N poured borax into his throat
He roared n gagged as he started to lose warmth n hope
cold on the floor with blood covered rags while his daughter watched
"Oh your sad, i forewarned your dad i was ready to slaughter your mom"
Choke the bitch so hard that her teeth will be popping off from the gums

 
 


Edited by daydizzle89 - 24 February 2016 at 10:14pm
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Titu Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 February 2016 at 6:29pm
Haha crazy
That was some twisted shit right there. Fucking savage.
The opening bit set it on the right path. The vivid imagery was dope. That placentaline actually   made me stop and visualize that shit for a second lol. You continued to paint that sick picture untill this bar came up..


Taking whips n CHAINS off the backs of Swedish kids
sometimes i get squeamish n sick but still make them eat feces n piss

And i was like..., okay haha. Nice shit. 
The next part was very strong in terms of gote. You actually managed to pull that off perfectly o guess. Good shit. 

You use a lot of near rhymes. So its like... I had to rap that shit out to make it fluid. Some psyco piece of work here. 
Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.

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Coke dope..lol I agree savage You ate this piece bro the content,lyrical ability this clicked from the on set to the finish on that Usain Bolt tip.. Bro from the bars point of view You too nice...wordup
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