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NepentheZ 
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 Topic: Calibra (w) v R.L.H (Week 1 - Semi Pro)Posted: 22 June 2009 at 12:31am |
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Week 1 Calibra v R.L.H 4 Bars (8 Lines) Due Saturday 28th June 11.59pm No Show's or Late Verses will result in instant Loss First to 3 / 3-0 KO Anyone Can Vote 1 Point for Win 1 Bonus Point for KO READ THE RULES Please DO NOT check in Edited by NepentheZ - 22 June 2009 at 12:31am |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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R.L.H
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Joined: 07 June 2009 Location: blackpool england Status: Offline Points: 96 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-3-0 Form: WWWLWL |
Posted: 22 June 2009 at 11:41pm |
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ok so cal's.....
Hotter with the keys?..left bottom of the league..can tell from ya drop Ur average im alot more savage..when ya see a calibra out front it'll be in a vauxhall garage! Calibras so predictable..we 'already know ya angles'...with Rap you lame prick jealous coz he's 'bored of the pink triangle' so expect more Blackpool gay flips left dead in a hurse..last time ya just fed off my verse..just proves ya no rapper cal's oozin dope factor? this nerd pulled accute bird 'n tried to Use a protractor! ive not got bad grammar but i'll 'L him in 8 sentences'....u aint my pal,,bender! when im spittin on the page i leave ya writtin in a daze..so call this the cal ender vauxhall calibra http://www.pubsnewcastle.co.uk/GayVillage.html eliminate sentences-bad gramma daze/days |
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Calibra
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Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 24 June 2009 at 11:35pm |
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Sorry for the wait, just got home today! Forcin' all his wordplay when he appeared from thin air
He stopped pointin' it out but it's clear it's still there Shrinks his font to hide stretched lines, so it's hard to judge When he has to write twice as much just to be half as good I beleive in God, life on Mars and that BIG isn't dead But RLH is a Semi-Pro? Now that's abit of a stretch Guess you could call him original if you pardon his lyrics His Retro Lines Hit since makin' played bars his gimmick! |
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I-SEE-GRIPS
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Posted: 24 June 2009 at 11:58pm |
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RLH
Wasnt to clever mate I think you concentrate on this internal rhyme thing you do to much and it takes you away from punching
Opener was a good idea closer was whack really, rest just not very good
I wouldnt say this was all bad though
Cal
Again not that good man even managed to have an equally whack closer I thought the rhyming was off too
Had a much better flow but just not hitting at all IMO
Not a great battle guys it's hard to say
Gonna go with RLH for better aggression shown
Peace
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Point Blank
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Posted: 25 June 2009 at 9:47pm |
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^huh? not a great battle? lol...this was dope.
Lol, RLH's opener was dope, a good nameplay and well worded. 2nd and 3rd bars werent all that, but the closer was real nice aswell, another good nameplay. you had 2 impressive bars and 2 misses. your style is good tho, unique, and i think you could be dope here if you worked on it a little. people may say your bars are stretched but i see no problem...it flows well, nice rhymes and your able to get punches in.
Calibra, opener was a nice hit, second bar was dope lmao, worded perfectly and a strong hit. bar after that was also funny, well worded, pretty much clowned him. closer was weak but ye, you had 3 solid bars, and 3 is better than 2, so ... Calibra gmv real nice battle tho guys keep it up |
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Evaze
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Posted: 25 June 2009 at 10:12pm |
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Calibra fucked up the multi on the last 2 bars. Much to learn, you still have!
This was two different styles. RLH forced a lot of his stuff. I don't understand putting internal multis in the setup bars? They didn't lead anywhere. Didn't really have any standout punches. Calibra just went for hard punches that = personal facts. So imo he takes it. Much more solid, direct and personal verse. Vote - Calibra |
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iCeZ
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 9:57am |
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man this was close
RLH - you got some nice ideas on wordplay man, accute/protractor line was clever and cal/ender could have been real hot but felt you didnt word it as good as it should have been. The more black play gay flips was funny and probably true since everone has used that on you (including me)
Calibra - A nice personal verse, first bar was nice, 2nd was even better but to me judge and good does not rhyme at all....3rd bar made me laugh, was worded well... last bar i felt was your weakest
overall vote calibra ...just... RLH needed to be alittle more personal and probably would have won.
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 10:52am |
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RLH - the was nothign wrong with the rhymes and the wordplay but the delivery didn't do it for me, and like the others said, some of the lines could've been worded better, and the lines were stretched which made me lose the flow
Calibra- the verse was very direct, clever, funny yada yada and that B.I.G bar was just fresh,
the last bar, wasn't feeling that, i saw what u were trying to do but...naahhh, lol vote goes to calibra 'cause he came with the more direct verse...
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 26 June 2009 at 10:24pm |
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Cal wins. Locked.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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