Introductions: Call me T C

HOLLA

I am a newbie, and i wanna say hi yall 2 alla yoll playin da game, so ima drop a rhyme and tell me wot u think.

Now this line is spitted half down a line and crazy/ cuz when i drop a bomb its like sadam but maybe/ he didnt do it all and it jus there to phaze me/ so put ya hands up when im pullin the ladys.

So who lookin it up/ and lockin it down/ caz i no by da end u can unleash on my ground/ when i pull up in my car/ girls grovin to my sound/ who gonna say that i aint bringin it round/ and a star born raised till em ready, caz when i swing it back i hit harder than nelly/ and when u think u up and down with the heavy/ will ya shoulders cave in like one of ya teddys.

i dont thinks so this is hip hop/ no new hard shit like punk rock or freaks like slipknot/ and when i lay it down im keepin it tip top/ like all you other gangsters on the top of da street kop/ so giv me a buzz and giv me a holla/ caz it gettin so hot all down under my collar/ so deep down inta them pockets and giv me a dollar/ caz i need a chesse burger and a coupla glasses of watar.

so listen out on da radio or ya newspapers caz im about to offend/ a bouncer and a bitch that never be my freind/ and so wot if i shoot off when the clock hit the 10/ caz by the time i finished this be the last statement u will send.

feedback plz, it aint dat gd, but its my first.