Clash for the Cash: CFC Prelim: J-Scott vs Shankley

J -Scott - had attempts at wordplay, your rhyming flowed quite well for me. The only real critique was that you didn't get personal enough in your verse. On LA that's what wins battles straight up, you've got potential though, you've got the basics down

Shank - you were a little repetitive with referring to his last battles, but I commend you on trying to get personal . What the hell were you thinking with that second bar? It doesn't rhyme for me. Also the third bar was a throwaway, no punch in it at all. Keep up though, perfect your tools

Vote : JS

J S:

Your writtens are unheard of, someone should leak his sheet.
Before I shove this mic down ya larynx to let em speak his piece.

Not a good way to start a battle,bro. It was generic.

Weve all seen you collapse under pressure, your easily outdone.
Because your skills have no trade like New York after 2001

I was looking for a personal in it. Couldn't find any

Your drops are all boring, after each of ya lines we'll read blah.
Youd think I was a cryptographer the way I simply decode sha.

Good good... Decent shit.

Treat em like a student, take notes from this lecture and better your future. 
Your a loser spendin friday nights like college nerds alone with ya computer.

Im assuming this is a personal. Good bar.


Shank: 

J scott imma detail your breakdown you too emotional
you a shit writer thats obvious your far from notable
 
Generic. Just like i told JS, opening bar should be the best.

lost  to Ash like your some sort of pompeii citizen
the big 3..0 not middle aged but fake like tits of silicon
 
Err- no.
you about to get Ass fucked by the king himself
your execution date looms no time for farewells
 
Turned out generic for me.

a few lessons i see your in need of like counting for sure
cos again vel you lost it and posted two bars short

It aint working for me tbh.. 


I dont know what shank was trying to do but i think Jscott edged it out on the basis of decent attempt of nameflip and some decent concepts.
Shank- dont get hurt- just put some more work in and you will b good.
V/ j scott