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The Law 
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
 Topic: CFC Round 1: Brotha Goose vs ArthurPosted: 06 January 2014 at 11:14am |
 Round One - 16 Emcees 6 Bars/12 lines per battler Due Jan 11, 2014 by 11:59 Est Time 3-0KO or First to 5 Crew Votes Allowed Participant Votes Allowed Verses are to be sent to me No Free-posting or talking in your battle thread (Verses and Votes ONLY!!) If there is a problem, pm myself or a mod Failure to abide by the rules will result in warning and disqualification! Good luck everyone.. - Graphics made by J-Brenn.
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 10 January 2014 at 10:59pm |
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Arthur He won't Better Me, Art put the Metal to the neck of Goose like preparations for Foie Gras Recipes Hundred Dollars? Art Took It, cos ya punches Never Land and i ain't talkin bout some Hook Shit Now Look Bitch, see Bro Sure to get ripped like i'm tearing through Holiday Booklets (Brochure) Leave ya Crucified, you only Tag Champ cos you dropped bars that you got Spume To Write Bruise His Might, call me Cancer cos we all know BG gonna Lose This Fight (Beegee) I'm On These Wins, Watch the Time cos i damage and leave G-Shocked, He Quits Can't Stop Me Prick, i ain't talking piles of Manure when i say Don Key Shit! (Donkey) Witness Artful Rhymes, the Irony of being called Goose when you Far From Fly His Bars Don't Shine, only time that Goose Bumps Hot Text is if we Burning Books by R.L.Stein (Goosebumps) Art come Proper, deafeated you once and this'll be the second time i Stop Ya Bars Rock Ya, now i'll Weaken Goose like Watered Down Vodka. Expos: 1. Foie Gras is Goose liver, the goose is force fed grain like this (pic) for the liver to taste better. Foie Gras is pronounced Fwa Gra
2. Captain Hook? Neverland? Yeah you get it. Rest is self exp. 3. Robin Gibb, one of the Beegees died of cancer. 4. Watch? Time? G-Shock? Yeah you follow. Manure is horse or donkey faeces, his name is Donnie 5. R.L.Stein is the author of the Goosebumps books. 6. I beat him once already. Grey Goose vodka. Edited by The Law - 10 January 2014 at 11:52pm |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 10 January 2014 at 10:59pm |
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Brotha Goose DTP bitch, dude was DOA! I dont need to Rip paintings to make Art hurt, He's Han and im Vader, lines like lightsaber shanks work. Only kids are entertained when Art's Attack'n, So I'll blow out his brains, turn him to a tournament caption! He and Law made a callout for belts, me and Spume just chuckled, See'n you deal with Menace and Beans, its clear that you both wud buckle! Im swing'n with handfulls, splatter'n Art like brushes, Reading in bathrooms, only place Arthur's (authors) crush shit. Prolly say something gay about me post'n my picture up, Blind flip surprise today..... Art wud know his bitch clicked it enough! Shouldn't hav counted me out dude, Goose is known for lay'n golden eggs, I'll leave ya like Germany post world war 2, Art float'n in storm drains. Expos bar 2 Art Attacks is an old British TV show |
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Xplicit19
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Joined: 12 November 2013 Location: Usa Status: Offline Points: 764 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-9-1 Form: WLWNLL |
Posted: 10 January 2014 at 11:35pm |
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ART
As always solid punches throughout your verse. I dont really have much to feed on except the flow for your second line got me a little confused..maybe cuz I dont know how to say Foie lmao..however the picture and expo is sad to me :( i dont like the way animals r treated for our consumption
Hundred Dollars? Art Took It, cos ya punches Never Land and i ain't talkin bout some Hook Shit Now Look Bitch, see Bro Sure to get ripped like i'm tearing through Holiday Booklets (Brochure) This was your best bar..i really liked the punchline and how you used it..solid flow
Solid 8/10 verse
GOOSE
your first line is played out and dont feel bad cuz im guilty of using the same kind of punch towards him as well...i liked your flow throughout but some of your punches werent hitting to me. A few of your end rhymes were a little fetched such as GOLDEN EGGS and STORM DRAINS ..take your time when your writing and think of the best punchlines you can...especially for a tournament battle.
Im swing'n with handfulls, splatter'n Art like brushes, Reading in bathrooms, only place Arthur's (authors) crush shit. this was to me your best line of the verse ..i liked the concept and end rhymes..but to me it just wasn't enough to win the battle
MVGT Arthur
No hate...just feed and what I thought good luck to you both
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U.N.L.M.
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Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 1:12am |
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Arthur: Good opener...haha @ "shrink bro"...2nd bar was real good as well, liked the bro sure/brochure play...3rd bar was decent...I'm pretty sure i've seen the Beegee/BG play but the cancer angle added a bit to it...4th bar was good, but the Don Key shit is just a tad forced...The play is great and all, but it really sounds weird saying "Don Key shit" instead of keys...5th bar had such a dope concept but the line just seemed a bit long winded IMO...Still, love the goose bumps concept...Closer was good as well. Overall, a good verse...always coming with lots of concepts and this one was a bit indirect (in that they were all nameplays with no real personals except for that closer) but some were pretty tight.
BG: Opener wasn't doing much for me. I thought your setup was more of a punch than your 2nd line...2nd bar was decent...3rd bar was real good, nice...4th bar was cool, a bit of a contrived play but I thought it worked well enough...5th bar was a swing and a miss...would've been killer if he mentioned you posting your pic though haha...worth the try though...Closer was a good concept, liked it...Overall - you had one complete miss with that preemptive flip and your opener didn't do anything for me but the rest of the verse was pretty solid...Thought the beans/menace thing was a good, personal bar...Solid verse Overall: I think Goose had the best personal bar with the tag team title thing, but the rest of the battle was basically just nameplays. In that regard, I thought Arthur had the more creative concepts that were more effective. Goose had some good bars though, but that opener and blind flip really hurt him here. Good battle guys. V/Arthur
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JBrenn
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Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3778 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 10:01am |
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Goose you came strong here bro!!! this was a major swing and you took on a formable opponent….
THE ONE BAR YOU TRIED TO PREDICT THE PUNCH AND BLIND FLIP….. AAAAAHHHHH the only reason i gotta give this to arthur. Arthur and goose brought good wordplay nice personals and very good flow… MVGT- Arthur
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 12 January 2014 at 6:29am |
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Although, JBrenn gave the reason why he voted. I felt his explanation was a bit short.
I have to be fair to everyone as I have already made one member further his explanation for it to count. Vote still stands at 2-0 Arthur.
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H4ZE
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Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 12 January 2014 at 10:53am |
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arthur
Bar 1-lol good opener Bar 2-haha another dope bar, I liked the wordplay with the bro sure/brochure shit Bar 3-another dope hard hittin bar. Bar 4-this was decent not as good as the others but not bad. Bar 5-nice bar here awesome concept and executed well Bar 6-good shit. Brother goose: Bar 1-I basically agree with what U.N.M.L said for this bar Bar 2-couldve been better but its decent Bar 3-nice one here Bar 4-this was alright. Bar 5-another alright bar. Bar 6-I like this one,nice closer I think art took this one. His punches landed more consistently and were harder hitting. Mvgt arthur
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 12 January 2014 at 11:35am |
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