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Trizzy Tre 
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 Topic: "Chalk The Body" - Trizzy Tre (keystyle)Posted: 20 November 2014 at 3:43pm |
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It’s a crime scene.. ya’ll dying but HG's gettin nurtured…? 'Homicide' arrives only when his crew is gettin murdered! You’re worthless! Drop a verse and I got time to spare… Abandon ya kids?? Well I guess thats why they’re in 'Foster Care'! You drop’in dope is rare, but I’d hate to mention this… Congrats on a quick response,…..to bad it lacked all effectiveness!! Lesson bitch, come wit original concepts, cuz I pound the weak… Have blood pour’in outta ya skull like how an album leaks! HG feed is bleak, mediocre verse “you’re dope” is left all the time… When the feed should read..”Hey great one syllable rhyme!” Mission, Haze, Shank, Chu and others all left to die... Who’s the worst in ya crew? ...shit, I just can’t decide! Hunger Games cant drop no mean text…
Until you realize your roster is filled up wit Empire rejects! Go check! They requested to join our crew, nope never… I’d rather let a bum in my house during snowy cold weather! Ya’ll feather weights; Tre head check any heavyweight… …aint believe me? Shit, then go check the resume!! Empire. ******************************************************* |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 3:50pm |
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Damn Tre,
This was pretty good. t’s a crime scene.. ya’ll dying but HG's gettin nurtured…? 'Homicide' arrives only when his crew is gettin murdered! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Great opener. Liked this shit alot HG feed is bleak, mediocre verse “you’re dope” is left all the time… When the feed should read..”Hey great one syllable rhyme!” ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Liked the pause, and hahahaha thats "your dope" thing is too funny Overall, good shit. |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 4:17pm |
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lol
thanks diz
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 4:18pm |
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Some funny lines in here nice piece. It's good to see this carrying on, lots of good pieces being dropped left and right ATM.
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#bananas
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 4:29pm |
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I see you triz. Haha. Some good shit in this verse man. The opening bar was killer yo, and that empire rejects line was dope as well man. I'm at school so I can't drop any crazy feed. Anyways. Good shit. Peace.
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 4:32pm |
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"You're dope!"...
Lol shit I give decent feed damn... This was good Trizz nice key, a decent response to Jay your multis were sound and your flow was smooth af. You had some very good punchlines I liked the opener, ery well worded and delivered and I also liked empire rejects not sure about that but it was well put together lol. This was a great drop Trizz nice set ups and punches as usual, great job bro. |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 6:49pm |
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lol
thanks for the looks fellas.
Ya'll knew I had to respond. ...
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 6:59pm |
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cool shit tre most offending lines were the direct ones esp when you mentioned a few of our members
though i thought that was to make the piece longer cause i thought that this was for jay but you madeit work when you tied tge concepts flow was quite solid and your schemes were okay. over all this was quite dope man |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 20 November 2014 at 10:22pm |
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Thanks for the feed meds...
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 21 November 2014 at 9:06pm |
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Hey man, ya'll always try and jab Empire....
I had to bring the haymakers this time around lol
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Posted: 21 November 2014 at 11:56pm |
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haha dope. u straight killed em. And guys i didnt say my crew would kill HG. i said they would kill empire.
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Posted: 21 November 2014 at 11:59pm |
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lets not clog tres drop with bull shit mission, but even if that is what you meant, you still said u were planning on dropping fro HG basically. Cuz u said ur crew would be up on here as soon as you hit 500 points.
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 22 November 2014 at 2:21am |
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Oh really Mission? You think so...huh? I'll body your whole crew one at a time....period. Matter fact...have those mother fuckers sign right up now. No need to wait till you reach 500 posts for them to sign up. Right? |
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Posted: 22 November 2014 at 2:23am |
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 don't you know you're fucking with the most notorious killers? |
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Posted: 22 November 2014 at 6:18am |
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Great verse here Trizz, the flow was really good, and the punches tight, solid verse, ya'll going at each other pretty hard. Which is good caz we get to read pieces as nice as this
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 23 November 2014 at 12:53am |
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Thanks for the feed Tam...
And Mission, you keep sayin shit bout Empire. Get your boyz signed in so i can toe tag each and every one of them. |
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