1-2 Punch League: [Champ Match] Goryo vs Ridley [wk15]

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A good battle.

Gor- like the concept. Liked how the set up and finisher contacted. Bit of an old joke is my only criticism. But it was good humour.

Rid- also like the concept. Main criticism is that the set up wasn't fantastic in context. Also an old joke, but because of the gore and squat plays, it was on a higher level.

Close, but mvgt Rid, as I appreciated the word play. Close though, could go either way.

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Goryo yeah I liked it,the angle was well directed and creative here,also had a good
tempo running along side too,the punch/personal was aimed well and found their
mark,the play added some more weight on the the whole,also had a little humour
of your own here, good bar..

Rid's,I liked your angle here too,the play was good as to the punch/personal,like Gor's they were well directed also,dispelling the double account scenario,the set up was a
little weak really but that's no biggie,at least it flowed well,the serious/period was in
my opinion a stressed and forced bit of rhyming though, but it worked still..

Overall good battle and kind of hard to call, so I re-read them both before making a
choice here,I like it when I have to be forced to make a choice as it shows for me
just how close this was,I liked the role reversal here too,Rid's coming like Gor,and
Goryo with the humour element coming like Rid's, both did well with their offerings,
there is a winner for me here and that was Rid's,here why,he was more focused i
believe,and he's bar appealed to me just that little bit more,sorry if this seems lame,
but that all I could see that separates you both is focus..

Vote..Rid's..peace.

This was a great battle, very close and it's hard for me to decide so let me brake it down real quick...

Goryo- good bar, solid punch... Love how you ended this bar... It was funny and a solid punch good work

Rid- another good bar, solid punch and great wordplay.. due to that I believe u won


Vote- ridley

nice