1-2 Punch League: Contenders- Kiki Spirez vs Rutter (week 8)

Kid bitches about crew kin, but keeps the dude in- This SHOWS he stays tethered,
Noise deaded.. Cos his feet move quicker on seeing Manny Hood than Mayweathers..

Says he's from Manny Hood. Manny Pacquiao/Floyd Mayweather.

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Kiki I liked the factual content of your bar here,plus added with
the flow/tempo you layed down just made the punch more weightier
on the whole,the humour of your bar was the highlight for me too,
brought a smile to my face to be honest,so that poured even more
weight beefing this bar up again,the personal was directed well
also, good bar..

RKB sorry but I wasn't feeling your offering here,plus I found it
didn't rhyme to well also,whether that's down to accents is anyones
guess,cooking keema was this a substitute for the word beef?,as it
didn't in my opinion get at him with much gusto,the punch felt kind
of bland really,no direct personal to type of either,not the best
bar of yours I've read..

Overall I thought RKB seemed off he's usual game here,whilst KiKi
came with a bar that worked,although not the hardest hitting bar
from him also,he did do more than enough to take this round today,


Vote..KiKi..peace.

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CiCi: nice angle to use in the setup (and all the more so since Beans no-showed yet again this week), setup starts well, but the word choice at the end seems forced for the multi. The punch was decent, flows on well, and though the concept here seems unrelated to the setup, the play was good and it landed OK.

Our KB: As ever the basic bar structure is OK, the multis run through making it flow well and I can see how the rhyming may be considered too slant, but worked OK for me. A couple of things though; capitalising 'Knows' because that's one of the words in your name doesn't make it wordplay; I get the wordplay in the punch, but it seems it's just hung on a random reference that has the syllable 'Ki' without any other relevance.

Sorry Rutz usually dig what you do, in fact both usually come better than this, but for me this week ... MFVGT CiCi

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Kiki, smooth setup, manny hood play was pretty funny, consistent rhymes, etc -  Good bar.

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Both good efforts (as to be expected!!)...Keeks, I liked the diss in the opener, strong effort, but I think you kind of overextended as you had two long ass lines...I like the flow to be a bit more fluid but I think you just about got away with it. The punch was good and a cool diss against him. Rutts, I felt you had a crisper, sharper flow with a punchier rhyme scheme. As for the punch, I really echo what everyone else said...I can see what you were going for, but (I think I've said this to you in the past as well) when you do a breakdown wordplay it needs to at least read smoothly as a 'sentence' (or connected phrase, if you like) with the rest of the line...and yours doesn't really work. Lost a bit of the impact for me...I think really it was just a bit risky to go for it.