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    Posted: 26 February 2014 at 8:15pm
Crew battle between JBrenn vs Smoothtung for Tha Syndicate and Vis Maior, respectively.

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Topic: Being raised in the wild by Hyenas

Lets keep the battles clean and limit the bitchin to just the linked thread for the crew battle.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 March 2014 at 8:54pm
JBrenn

Hyenas:

Still to this day i find it hard to relate, hard to express myself best.
Docs suggest relief in this typewriter as i relay my story through ink on the desk.
The well mannered gentleman you will find me as today isn't how i was.
My life isn't normal I fought for life daily, death always at the cusp. 
I was born on a farm in Africa where my parents neglected me...
I wondered. My foster parents found me, bathed me and protected me...
This world of which I'm a part of now was much different on that side...
They called me a farrell child here are the facts the truths of that life...
My first memory is of when I was just five or six running with my kin.
Hunting game, for hunger was the motivation for most of our whims...
We ate mostly meat though i remember bugs being in my diet too.
Hunting herds on farmland tippin over garbage tins anything we could get into..

I personally was RAW SAVAGE cattle feared me i slew young...
I was a MURDERING BLOOD RAGER before i became soft with a 'Smooth tongue'.*
My paws though oddly shaped would pound the reddish clay with my pack...
My legs different keeping up was hard at first but the others never held back...
Yet i communicated as one of the pack mostly with emotion and yips...
I growled snorted and barked. bit and panted showed love with licks...
If you haven't guessed by now Hyenas raised me as a pup...
My last memory of my foster family we were hunting running a muck...
Raiding a farmers fields for live stock in tune with my kin...
Light fading no food in the fields so i knock over some tins...
I heard a snap and i yelped felt like my paw was broke...
I tried to run as i howled but i was bit by steal jaws and rope...

Everything faded to black i awoke to a light in my face robes on my waist...
I growled and tore at needles in my arms with teeth, voices fueled my hate...
My ears hear the tones of my pack their pleads for my return...
Insides burn i squirm visions purge feels like my brain is stirred.
I remember images of my whole family slaughtered by humanity...
Doctors tell me my life is a story i made up in my insanity...
I refuse to believe the alternative I make this life mine through fantasy...
reality is what we perceive it to be i couldn't have murdered my family...
could I?......
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