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    Posted: 11 December 2007 at 11:27pm
shit idc if this suks or not jus hit it im B^ored
 
 
 
So many songs, SO~MANY~TIMES The world had to hear SO~MANY~RHYMES
About how LIFE~IS~FOR~STRUGGLES Minority groups, KIDS~WITH~SINGLE~MOTHERS
Young homies turn hustlers, KILLIN~FOR~OTHERS
It's kinda funny how the crime rate is SO~HIGHT
In suburbs where family ties are low, 'n suicides ON~THE~RISE
Oh why, so many die coz IN~THEIR~EYES
The mistake they made, cant be erased the only way out is to TAKE~THEIR~LIFE
And if they dont do it sudden then they'll DO~IT~SLOWLY
Polluting themselves with drugs, because they on THIS~WORLS~LONELY
Think they're doing just fine, but they still IN~THE~STRUGLE
Yeah the kids of this time, in a whole lotta trouble If you IN~TROUBLE, jump over THAT~PUDLE
And nobody knows they came from BROKEN~HOMES, Plus to us they're just EMOTIONLESS~CLONES
And the pain plagues their brains they can't maintain HEALTHY~LIFE
Change is all but easy, a life of crime is all BUT~NICE
Plus life isnt worth living unless ya given the CHANCE~TO~FIGHT
Drugs might not be the answer, but who knows WRONG~FROM~RITE
 
 
Cry  haha
tha names RAB^B^IT
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 December 2007 at 10:31am

flow was off in quite a few places an' ya' rhymes mismatched most of the time... can tell ya' know what you should be doin' but you still need to elevate quite a bit...

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Edited by 2smooth - 12 December 2007 at 10:32am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:08am
is this bitten? coz usually this dick writes all his shit with K after a c and ^ after a b.....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:18am
Originally posted by SwordedStylez SwordedStylez wrote:

is this bitten?


i REALLY hope not....and not cause he'll get banned
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:21am
where's sciko when u need him?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 December 2007 at 12:07pm

http://www.lyricsandsongs.com/song/49596.html

what the FUCK is wit' all the biters these days... fuckin' chompers...
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