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Felon
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Joined: 08 December 2007 Location: Hell Status: Offline Points: 7 |
Topic: Dont Give a FucKPosted: 11 December 2007 at 11:27pm |
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shit idc if this suks or not jus hit it im B^ored
So many songs, SO~MANY~TIMES The world had to hear SO~MANY~RHYMES
About how LIFE~IS~FOR~STRUGGLES Minority groups, KIDS~WITH~SINGLE~MOTHERS Young homies turn hustlers, KILLIN~FOR~OTHERS It's kinda funny how the crime rate is SO~HIGHT In suburbs where family ties are low, 'n suicides ON~THE~RISE Oh why, so many die coz IN~THEIR~EYES The mistake they made, cant be erased the only way out is to TAKE~THEIR~LIFE And if they dont do it sudden then they'll DO~IT~SLOWLY Polluting themselves with drugs, because they on THIS~WORLS~LONELY Think they're doing just fine, but they still IN~THE~STRUGLE Yeah the kids of this time, in a whole lotta trouble If you IN~TROUBLE, jump over THAT~PUDLE And nobody knows they came from BROKEN~HOMES, Plus to us they're just EMOTIONLESS~CLONES And the pain plagues their brains they can't maintain HEALTHY~LIFE Change is all but easy, a life of crime is all BUT~NICE Plus life isnt worth living unless ya given the CHANCE~TO~FIGHT Drugs might not be the answer, but who knows WRONG~FROM~RITE |
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tha names RAB^B^IT
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2smooth
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 12 December 2007 at 10:31am |
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flow was off in quite a few places an' ya' rhymes mismatched most of the time... can tell ya' know what you should be doin' but you still need to elevate quite a bit... novice Edited by 2smooth - 12 December 2007 at 10:32am |
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:08am |
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is this bitten? coz usually this dick writes all his shit with K after a c and ^ after a b.....
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Music
Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:18am |
i REALLY hope not....and not cause he'll get banned |
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SwordedStylez
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Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
Posted: 12 December 2007 at 11:21am |
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where's sciko when u need him?
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Music
Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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2smooth
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 12 December 2007 at 12:07pm |
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http://www.lyricsandsongs.com/song/49596.html what the FUCK is wit' all the biters these days... fuckin' chompers...
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