Open Mic: Duality of Reality[KOTM]

The Duality of Reality[KOTM]


Man in the middle playing second fiddle to left and right,/
My right shows life and light, my left shows fights and plight,/
City on fire many pawns inspired by dire straits your entire fate,/
In the hands of hate death and taxes at higher rates,/



Death destruction and dysfunction facing dichotomy,/
Corporations cater to the economy but what about biology?/
Twisted Psychology, profiting off properties,/
Money used properly probably could of cured poverty,/

Fuck up the forest for fortune,/
And driving in foreigns and forcing,/
Animals out their element hard to ignore the elephant,/
In the room that's far from elegant,/

Symbolizing and emphasizing the negligence,/
Insulting intelligence,infants inflicted with recklessness,/
Innocent internally ingrained with insane thoughts on their brain,/
Mentally chained and eventually trained to keep nature constrained,/


The world split in two which side do you choose?/
The big business view, or the plants with the greenish hue,/
Duel with reality it's duality tools in actuality,/
Used by fools with a money hungry mentality./

Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.

Thanks for the feedback Puente.

Man in the middle playing second fiddle to left and right,/
My right shows life and light, my left shows fights and plight,/
City on fire many pawns inspired by dire straits your entire fate,/
In the hands of hate death and taxes at higher rates,/

(liked how this flowed here,it came off like a spilt oil tanker,slick,the contents and
vocab were also solid,i also found this segment to be subtle and creative bordering
on being abstract too,these short lines are a joy on the eye aswell,I thought you did
good as you used fewer words to say a lot,not an easy task to do)

Death destruction and dysfunction facing dichotomy,/
Corporations cater to the economy but what about biology?/
Twisted Psychology, profiting off properties,/
Money used properly probably could of cured poverty,/

(yeah nice message here,if only the elite gave a fuck,then we could all have a
small piece of utopia,i liked the way how you see globalisation and dividends
as an artificial enemy of poverty in a metaphorical view,I also liked how you
presented this segment by using abstract contents and again vocab,all still
whilst keeping that tempo)

Fuck up the forest for fortune,/
And driving in foreigns and forcing,/
Animals out their element hard to ignore the elephant,/
In the room that's far from elegant,/

(again nice point made I believe,the absurdity of the Elephant having no place
and habitat left was a nice inclusion,and the irony here,chopping down forest
for money,which in turn is then made to form paper which is then turned into
money,to carry in wallets and pockets,shit if only we could class all litter as
currency,we'd all pick it up all day long, and do a great public service in the
process,you just highlighted how shallow humans are,i'm liking this verse
here)

Symbolizing and emphasizing the negligence,/
Insulting intelligence,infants inflicted with recklessness,/
Innocent internally ingrained with insane thoughts on their brain,/
Mentally chained and eventually trained to keep nature constrained,/

(yep I feel the view here,education has it's advantages for the elite as it keeps us in
our place,we're not taught survival techniques or independence,we're taught to work,
and to work for them only,follow orders and don't question anything, loving the subtle
messages in this drop and the scale of the elite societies reach)


The world split in two which side do you choose?/
The big business view, or the plants with the greenish hue,/
Duel with reality it's duality tools in actuality,/
Used by fools with a money hungry mentality./

(nice to be reminded that we do have choices,and like everything in this world there are
2 sides to it all,this is a thought provoking piece on the whole,and when in contact with
a thought evoking piece i like to share what I took from it,hence the feed I leave, i kind
of paraphrase a little..lol..but this was solid from start to end,and I have really enjoyed
the read here,and the vision you took from the picture was ripe, good work and I shall
look forward to reading more of your work)..peace.

Thanks for the feedback. Glad you liked it.