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CHAIN 
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 Topic: Facebook CrookPosted: 25 May 2014 at 9:01pm |
 What I wish upon you is nothing but the butt rapes All the cryptic disses are catty to me, cupcake @ me or something at least, captain fuck face Fudge stained faggot acting like he touched weight TMI-ing constantly, tryna catch a drug case Shook at the bus station, dudes wouldn’t dap you Cats was looking at you like ‘nigga, get the duct tape’ Jack boy buffet, you stood there like a statue Hash tag thug bait…Instagram that too Tattoos are war paint, to you they just designs And now you intertwined with that symbiote swag suit Bad move, that ain’t you, you ain’t on shit You say hard shit and THEN claim they hacked you Hopefully they yap you, they been know u cub prey Naked with no swamp gear, hiding in your mud sleigh Goons, they play dirty, they’ll stab you till your blood sprays Leaving flesh everywhere like kids tryna cut steak Crack you like a crustacean, cooling like ‘all is well’ Calm as hell sliding off the scene at a slug’s pace That's what the fuck you get for entering a truck race In a damn Prius, now let's talk about the trunk space Sun Tzu fanatic, going at it is a fun game Do bring the static if you want it to be one way Keep your Uggs laced… Don’t even ask me how Sissy. HG |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:07pm |
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I use Facebook a lot, not gonna lie, so half of this shit is my life.. Like, so much bullshit goes on when people are behind keyboards and in a 'social setting'.
Rap wise, as per usual, your rhyme scheme will go over some heads, cos it's next level. This shit right here- TMI-ing constantly, tryna catch a drug case Shook at the bus station, dudes wouldn’t dap you Cats was looking at you like ‘nigga, get the duct tape’ Just STOP IT. You make people start Opens, then highlight the verse, and delete that shit. Also, the uggs bit had me gasping for air. Props. |
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Boss
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:15pm |
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Damn this is dope as fuck!
From top to bottom, the rhymes scheme is fire You held the same through out, that's mighty creative bruh |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:16pm |
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:D appreciate it, man
Im just trying to keep up with you dudes tbh And fuck a PM. Get @ me on Facebook, you know where to find me. ;) |
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Kilo G
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:41pm |
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WoW....
this was hella fire mate from the very beginning till the end it's all shaped in a perfect way that I liked to finish reading it till the end flow, rhyming, wording, structure, concepts and everything was dope keep at it mate, Nice Job! Stay Active!
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Shankley
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 10:40pm |
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This shit was dope... The scheme was off the CHAIN lol You killed it with this one bro.
Great work man. HG |
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Beans
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 11:01pm |
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The fucking aggression in this was mean... Hard
Liked this chain. Keep it up |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 11:17pm |
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God Damn Chain....God Damn...
I guess since you weren't feelin your own verse in Stylin On'em you went ballistic here. Harsh shit. Your unorthodox style and rhyme schemes were dope and that aggression put fire in each bar... This part was insane: Jack boy buffet, you stood there like a statue Hash tag thug bait…Instagram that too Tattoos are war paint, to you they just designs And now you intertwined with that symbiote swag suit Bad move, that ain’t you, you ain’t on shit You say hard shit and THEN claim they hacked you Bang bang bang! |
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Blissful Barrage
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 5:46am |
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This was a good aggressive piece. Rhyme scheme was pretty nice, I felt it a lot. My favorite part which has mostly already been highlighted was this:
''All the cryptic disses are catty to me, cupcake @ me or something at least, captain fuck face Fudge stained faggot acting like he touched weight TMI-ing constantly, tryna catch a drug case Shook at the bus station, dudes wouldn’t dap you Cats was looking at you like ‘nigga, get the duct tape’ Jack boy buffet, you stood there like a statue Hash tag thug bait…Instagram that too'' |
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Nigma
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 5:49am |
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Another 5 star CHAIN classic tbcasual... Concise drops, you say what you want to without wasting words. Really dope tone here, quality piece man.
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 1:32pm |
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Duct tape, thug bait, trunk space and cut steak lines were RETARDED.. This shit was fluid and the scheme set up was straight ill.. Plain and simple, raw 9.5/10
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levy420
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 1:49pm |
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An chains back making us all look bad I like the picture as well it works well with the piece this was some real shit right hur
Five star all day Ps I can't find.u on Facebook anywhere where u at I typed in chain an I only see bike shops an huscavanas |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 3:29pm |
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Maybe im dumb, cuz everyone else sees it but I'm not quite sure i understand the message.. but what i do understand is the perfect word choice, butter smooth rhythm/flow and the fresh as fuck metaphors.. that i do understand, completely.
Stay up you talented mother ducker. |
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Iso
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 4:26pm |
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This was definitly some e-crack lol whole shit was nice flow punches all that concept was an interesting choice and well delivered because who doesn't hate an e thug lol. Nice drop though I look forward to seeing more like this.
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First off fuckers I'm a cunt mission in life is just to wind you up a cunt I won't go texting you back on t.v. I'm the worst phone a friend you can have
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CHAIN
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 6:05pm |
There's no message, it's just me going off on a Facebook/Twitter/instragram/Twitter/Tumblr swaggot for sneak dissing. That's all lol. Appreciate all the feed back. Y'all always say wild shit that leaves me like :O @Levi : c'Mon bruh you really think my government is Chain? ...c'Mon bruh lol PM me if you wanna find me. Edited by CHAIN - 26 May 2014 at 6:15pm |
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MarcusAurelius
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 6:30pm |
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Looks like an idea you might've had for a while with how nicely fleshed out n put together it is, especially with the picture above it.
Same thing to say as everyone else. Dope shittake bro. Toooo many people on social networks that are exactly what you describe. lol |
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Posted: 26 May 2014 at 6:39pm |
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this was some dope shit, chain
i wanna see more from you
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