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Kay B 
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 Topic: The fall of mankindPosted: 11 February 2007 at 5:26pm |
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Rape, murder, abuse one man thinkin he's above a state
Explain how the fall of mankind, switched all love to hate Memory lane, a place were we used to enjoy helping others Every man got along, many friendships all felt like brothers Never repelled by others, woman stood safe to walk the streets Close you eye's, picture a time when the only talk was peace "Peace ended, when man gained some power" - Kay 'Clock ticked over a second' and 'time began to change' Dodging crimes and pain like we'd all sit n stand in lanes Could you handle pain? evil minds abducting those of peace First saw it driving, years later a car a would blow the streets All at war with no retreat, young children lay slowly beat Even musicians dropped the mic, and always rolled with heat Racism grew, different colored skins separated the play ground Kids jaw stomped on continuously till he couldn't make sounds Switched to beasts hunting our prey, even dropping bombs Like 'human Godzilla's' just 'don't care what we stomping on' Grown men proving there strength, by taking ya fist to a girl As she screaming "Evil bastards wont be missed in this world" Innocent lives taken because they lay in path of destruction No-one taking life seriously they all jus laugh at production Ego's grew "Go ahead, Search the whole world im the best" Power led to a 'suicidal leap' 'mankind slowly fell to its death' Final statement The fall of mankind performed so fast you can't see them Like given a 'life sentence' no longer such thing as 'free-dem' |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 6:23pm |
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I think you're one of the best Open Mic artists on LA... You fuck around a lot, but this piece was on point for me, and you're consistently nice with your drops... Proizzle to me...
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Mackie
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Posted: 12 February 2007 at 6:31pm |
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only thing i dont like bout ya drops is the flow is like i dunno... text flow, it flows for text, but i cuddnt see it workin audio nah mean... PRO tho, shit is still dope
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Kay B
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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 7:58am |
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xXTormentXx
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Posted: 06 March 2007 at 9:05pm |
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Yea i have to agree on mackie comment.....its more of a poetic open mic for poetry books....audio-wise you don't have that flow watery instinct to tag along with this wonderful piece...overall: Pro is ok with me...i rather Elite in my opinion lol but thats my saying.
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Abstract~is~Creativity
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njZillesT
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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 4:51pm |
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pro eazy pro pro i like the ending especially
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Mackie
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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 5:11pm |
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pro is alot harder to get around here than ya thinkin.. not sayinkay ain pro but u said liquid is pro... jus coz G got angry u ain call him pro don mean u gotta say everyone PRO... i mean.. how the fuck is LiQ a pro n G not.. n Liquid just ain pro straight up nah mean
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 07 March 2007 at 6:51pm |
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I agree with both IKON and Mack...
i think you deserve pro... you drop consistantly... for the most part... and although your flow is stretched at times/simply a text flow (most of the stuff you write, would be very hard to spit the w/o editing it first), your drops are always enjoyable. you always have some creative similies/wordplays/metaphors/general punches in ur shit... and you always bring original and creative ideas... so i think you are deffinately a Pro with ur open mics... *EDIT* Thanks for stickin up for me MAck!!!! *EDIT* Edited by G-Pfeif - 07 March 2007 at 6:52pm |
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 10 March 2007 at 11:12pm |
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arent you already pro?????
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Scotty32
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Posted: 11 March 2007 at 7:51am |
i think Kay was pro, but he did his "I wanna be a nov" drop, which put him back down to nov. anyway, to everyone who likes to vote on S4Rs, you DO realise that votes only count from S4R Judges right? and only 1 judge has posted in here. if you want to drop feed - try going to open mic, am sure theres LOTS of posts just dying for feedback. |
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Posted: 11 March 2007 at 11:56am |
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i thought other pros and/or vets could drop votes that count....
thats what orion said in my rank thread.... i think that should be allowed... as Ikon is the ONLY active S4R judge |
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Posted: 11 March 2007 at 3:03pm |
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if u get pro before me kay, i'll have Ice piss in ya mouth
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Kay B
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Posted: 12 March 2007 at 7:20am |
 MAKE ME PRO MAKE ME PRO! |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 2:27pm |
nope, its only selected Judges (will say under their name) can vote (and it will count) but even if we say "Pros OR vets" can vote - iKon is still the only one who was able to vote. and why would you take orions word for it? hes not a mod, or judge or wot not he hasnt even been active for like a year (untill recently) |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 4:20pm |
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HAHA. SCOTTY'S 300-3! Da Gawd!
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 4:22pm |
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LMFAO
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 4:24pm |
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I think he's mocking you and Mackie's complaining about battle scores in that other thread ya'll made. I dunno though.
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 4:27pm |
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Lol....Mackie I Think...I Got A N In A Battle That Me OR My Opponent Didnt Show In
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Mackie
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Posted: 13 March 2007 at 7:23pm |
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nah hes not mocking me.. actually we was jokin on msn about this i told him to do it... hes also a PRO... and im not complainin id just rather have 27 KO's than 18...
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Posted: 14 March 2007 at 12:53am |
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I came in here thinking this was about Wrestling...
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Insert something rappy here
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