Text Battle Archive: sp�rta -v- UNLM

-24-30
-Crew allowed
-Anyone can drop first

Sparta - Opener Was Good, Strong Punch. Next Bar Was Good. Next Bar Was Played, But I Like What You Did With It...Made It More Original. Next Bar, Werent Really Feeling It.Next Bar Was Average, Multies Seemed A Tad Forced.Next Bar Started Off Poor, 'This Stupid Wack' Makes No Sense To Me. I See What Your Sayin, Just Didnt Word It Right. In The End, The Lent Punch Was Nice, But Not Really Personal. Crew Full Of Rejects Thing Was A Nice Play, Fuck You For Usin It Tho Lol.Next Bar Was Ok, Had No Real Punch Tho.Next Bar, Werent Really Feelin It.Next Punch Was Nice. LMAO @ Spongebob Punch, That Was Hard Hitting. Ur Best Bar So Far ; I Was Expectin Lots Of Hard Hits Like That, But You Seem To Have Came Kinda Weaker In This Battle Compared To Your Usual Standards. Next Bar, Didnt Get The 'D Control Your Crew' Thing...Unless D = Dynasty. Anyway, Nice Punch With The Greek Writin. Didnt Like The Next Bar. Next Bar Was Ok. Closer Was Nice. Overall, Not As Good As I Thought It Would Be, But You Had A Couple Of Shots That Stood Out To Me, Like The Spongebob And Writin In Greek One. Nice Flow, Some Good Multies, Not As Personal As Most Of Your Other Verses. Could Have Came Harder. 7.5/10

UNLM - Werent Feelin The Opener. You Need To Come Out Of The Blocks With A Strong Punch To Set The Mood For The Rest Of The Verse, But You Didnt Do That :(. Next Bar, Nothin Special.As For The Next Bar, The Setup Line Was Weak, Somethin You Need To Work On Like I Said, But The Concept Of The Punch Was Nice, Jus Maybe Needed To Be Worded Better.Next Bar Was Dope, Again Could Have Been Worded Better, Like 'Dejavu for you coz ya get punished for tryin to fuck' Or Somethin,But Still A Pretty Nice Punch. Next Bar Was Ok, Would Have Been Good If You Had MAde A Punch Out Of It Rather Than Stating That He Is Jus Good At Typin The Alphabet. Next Bar Was A Strong Hit, Really Feelin That Bar. LMAO @ The Next Bar. Type Of Bar I Try To Come With, To Clown People. This Was A Really Strong Flip And VERY Effective. Same With The Next Bar...That Was Killer. Again, You Flipped His Bar And Clowned Him. Dope. Next 3 Bars were Good, Lol @ Retards. Next Bar Was Pretty Good, Nice Personal coz He Likes Avenged Sevenfold.Next Bar, Ok Punch. Didnt Like The Closer. Its Always Nice To Close On A Strong Punch To Seal It Off, But You Came A Bit Loose In The Last Few Bars. Overall, This Was Amazin From Your Standards, MUCH Harder Than I THought You Would Have Came. You Definately Put Alot Of Work Into This, Done Your Research Too, And I Was REALLY Impressed With This. Patrick Star And The Bar About Me Were Dope...Like I Said Your Setups And And Flow Could Do With A Little Boost, But Overall This Was Dope. 8.5/10

As A Battle This Was Very Tight, Both Had A Couple Of Very Strong Punches, But I Feel UNLM Took This From My Point Of View. Probably Coz His Style Reminds Me Of Mine, Therefore Its Obvious Ima Like It. Tho I Have To Admit, If He Didnt Make Some Of Them Strong Flips, And This Was A Blind Drop Battle, There Probably Would Have Been A Different  Ending. Nevertheless, He Took The Advantage Of Dropping Second And Done Exceptionally Well With It. Very Impressed. Props To Sparta Too, This Was A Very Good Battle. Lol @ Me Waffling On...Ill Stop Now.

UNLM GMV

iight here's the breakdown:

Sparta: lol, opener was dope in all aspects, great opener. 2nd bar again was good, flow, punch, personal all relevant and nice. next bar was heat, another good bar. wasn't really feeling the 4th bar, although the flow and play were nice, just seemed a little played. still decent though. again, wasn't feeling the next bar, either. it seemed forced, and the flow was off a little. way to pick it back up on the 6th bar, though. good flow helped by multi's and a decent play, good bar. 7th bar was a hard punch that landed nicely, i liked the directness and aggression here. more of the same on the next bar, just another clowning punch that hit, well done. 9th bar wasn't much of a punch, more filler than anything. the play was ok, but really irrelevant. 10th bar was similar to the last, not much of a punch. the flow is good and the play is iight, but you gotta keep hitting him. lol @ spongebob play, actually worked nicely, i liked this bar. DAMN, writing in greek play is fucking killer, setup and flow were both nice too, great bar. 12th bar has good flow and the multi's are nice, but that's about it here. next bar was ok, kind of a reach to make the play work, but it was ok. to be honest, i wasn't feeling the closer very much. i see what you're trying to get at and it DOES kind of work, but i just didn't feel it. overall, was a good verse with more highlights than downsides, a couple of really killer bars, but did have some filler bars and miss-worked ideas.

U.N.L.M.: lol, decent flip on your opener. not much of a hit, but it worked ok for what it's worth. the setup on the 2nd bar was horrible, but the punchline was ok. punch wasn't hard, though. again, the 3rd bar's setup was horrible and even a little forced, but the punchline was ok. could've been a great punch/ flip but you didn't use it effectively enough. 4th bar was garbage, regardless of however you try to explain it, didn't like it. 5th bar was ok, could've been used better but still sort of worked. ha, nice 6th bar, though, good job. flow was nice enough and the play worked, good job. 7th bar, good flip, that's about it. next bar was Dope, good flip and play, landed here. 9th bar was ok, play was nice and somewhat relevant but didn't hurt him much if at all. damn, next bar works well, good punch. lol @ the mt. taygetus play, good idea that could have been great but only worked a little bit. 12th bar was a decent flip at best, with a mediocre play. was kind of a clever idea the way you put the songs into the 13th bar to flip as a diss, but it wasn't much of a hit. next bar was iight, cool play, but the setup was pretty weak, especially for a flip. wasn't feeling your closer, either. should've been worked better into a killer punch but the way you worded it just didn't work for me. overall it was a decent verse, had a couple of really nice bars, but had a lot more downside to your verse than Sparta did.

my vote goes to Sparta

Cause no one's seen a big hit from Sparta till the 300 movie

At Ghost..

lol   Good  wooooo

Thanks for that vote...2-2..uppin for more votes

Nice battle to read...

Sparta- came nice as usual, but you used many generic lines though which left you open to still lose the battle though they did all land... The nameplays were dope... the personal hits were good, but werent great... could have used them better imo... For example, the runaway line could've been worded better to me... A solid drop overall nontheless

UNLM surprised me here... The flips were killer, and the verse was more personal than sparta's. In a battle like this, I felt the personals gave you the edge in this battle. Your wordplays werent as strong as sparta's, but they werent much weaker (on a overall perspective). The Patrick and the Point Blank line = how flips should be done. Made me actually laugh...

Good battle... sparta came at his "B+" grade mode to me, and UNLM hit 'em wit' a "A-". Shit was close, but my personal preference is dope used personals, which makes for a more direct verse...

v/UNLM

I read these verses a couple times.. I honestly had trouble deciding... Sparta you came with hard hits but they were generic, you had a dope flow through out the choris wich i was fealing, mixed up the rhyme scheme to wich was dope. The Multis were good and on point. Some good punches but there were few personal punches ( wich imo hit A LOT hard ) Like the runaway punch was a good 1...