Rap Tutorials: How To Write A Bar...

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   Something I Wrote Time Ago To Help The Noobs In My Crew, Thought It Might Come In Useful For People Who Wanna Develop Their Skills

 Point Blank wrote:

Biatches

Right...I Know Some Of You Have Trouble Comin Up With Punches An How To Word Em, So I'll Show Ya How To Do It. First Off, The Punch Will Be Based On Me, Coz I Dont Wanna Start Shit. Secondly, I'll Also Show You My Tactics Of Creating A Bar...

Ok, Firstly Think Of A Personal Against The Person. Im In A Lazy Mood Here., So I'll Jus Use A Punch From My Battle With Junior Shade Where We Had To Diss Ourselves. The Thing I Based This Punch On Was The Initials PB. The First Thing That Came Into My Head When I Thought Of PB Was Personal Best.

Now That I Know What The Foundation Of The Punch Is (Personal Best), You Try An Think Of A Word To Put Down The Opponent, In This Case 'Broken', 'Smash', 'Wipe Out' Etc. I Chose To Use Smash As It Has A More Aggresive Manner. I Happen To Start Most Of My Punchlines With 'Coz Im'a' , Coz It's A Really Good Way To Link From The Setup Line From The Punchline, Unless You Have A REALLY GOOD Setup Line, Which I Ended Up With Here, Which You'll See Later.You Should Always Fiddle Round With The Words Tho, To See What Rolls Off The Tongue Better. Anyway, I Came Up With This

Coz Im'a 'Smash PB' Like Proffesional Athletes

It's Then That You Think Of Multies, Rather Than An Immediate Setup Line... So...

Pro-ffes-ion-al Ath-letes

Pick The Syllables That Have The Most Emphasis On (Bolded) An Try An Come Up With Rhymes For Them Syllables, But Dont Forget The Golden Rule. You MUST ALWAYS Have The EXACT SAME AMOUNT OF SYLLABES IN MULTIES, Otherwise It Knocks The Flow Off Completely.

Hair-dress-ers-in-back-seats

You'll-Nev-er-sur-pass-me

Etc. As You Can See Tho, It Doesn't Matter Whether Or Not The Unbolded Syllables Rhyme Or Not, As Long As There's Some That Do. I Know That 'Dress' And 'Nev' Aren't EXACT Rhymes, They're Called Indirect Rhymes. This Means They Both Have The 'eh' Sound In. This Also Applys With Back And Pass, They Both Have The 'Ah' Sound In, And In Seat An Me, They Both Have The 'EE' Sound In. In The End I Was Lucky To Come Out With

A-Vet-er-ans-ass-beat

Which Helped Me Come Out With...

Blank Just Battles N00bs, He Never Gets A Veterans Ass Beat
They All Just 'Smash PB' Like Proffesional Athletes

KABOOM

Please Let Me Know If This Help's You Or Not. I Hope It Does...