Open Mic: Ignorant Shit 3 Ft. Chain

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    Posted: 11 December 2009 at 5:50pm
We do not promote ignorance in this establishment...

[Chain]

Preaching to the choir while I'm serenading lesbians
Beat the ants I can while the chairmen face their elephants
Losing all their wars as I barricade my settlements
Gearing up for battle where sheriffs hate to let us win
Wishing I was there when Larry Davis tested them
I'm sticking to the script while Interrogating thespians
Scared to change society 'cause parents ain't intelligent
Paraphrase this sentiment till Sarah Palin's president
I'm really not that conscious, won't wear a cape to rescue men
I really don't care 'bout the married gays in Netherland
Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin”
Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine
I talk about how strong Ares made us veterans
Looking in the mirror like these pair of shades is heaven sent
Too macho to ignore that Terrence J is feminine
Watching Rocsi's lotion while it marinates her melanin...


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Turnin' melons into smoothies, Veterans to Guccis
Severin' a groupie cause my Heaven is unruley
Levelin' the playing field, defener of the jury
Im shinin' with a verse like this, was never into Rubies
Eye to eye, the Dragons den, the endin' of this movie
Armed with words to pierce flesh, they're enterin' like Bruce Lee
Loosely, terms are used repeatedly to bruise me
If you could see that stupidly they equally amuse me
Etherin' as standard, pens are secretly my uzi
While ya life story comes across as weaker than The Goonies
Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house
You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out
And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence
Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance
Tired of takin' shit from pricks, still seethin' from this incident
And now ya gettin' fucked you bitch... New Era's gettin' intimite!



Edited by Calibra - 11 December 2009 at 5:59pm
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

Coolio
 
Thanks for your time!
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As expected pretty much perfect, both had decent flow and both had nice content, out of the two i preferd chains simply cause i enjoyed it more but both verse's were really good and had lines i liked.

Best chain lines imo were

Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin”
Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine
I talk about how strong Ares made us veterans
Looking in the mirror like these pair of shades is heaven sent

Best cal lines were

Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house
You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out
And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence
Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance
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Both are top on the site when it comes to rhymes,  Chain had the better rhymes, but Cal had more..if that makes sense.. I just found Chains rhymes much smoother.  Flow was good on both, nothin that really stood out all that much though compared to ya usual standards.. Nice shit yall
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Originally posted by Calibra Calibra wrote:

Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

Coolio
 
Thanks for your time!

^ Stealth bump

What you want me to say...you both know how to rhyme & you both know I will know that and appreciate it, wasn't the greatest drop ever but it was coolio...I could be anal and pick out minor things I didn't like but it serves no purpose and takes away from me liking the verses
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chain.. as usual nice rhyming and flow.. always the one who shows more complexity in the verse....
Shy away from gossiping like ”Mary Kate's the better twin”
Rebel with a cause where Mary Jane's the medicine
^^I like this line..

Calibra
Eat from my plate, make no mistake, ya livin' in the mans house
You only failed to help yourself, these fuckers want a hand out
And overnight I showed the light, still dealin' with this insolence
Why can't you See Jay? You just revealed ya ignorance

that one stood more.. nice read.. the rest seem bit weak to me.. but u doing great.
ez

would be nice if u feed my verse in return


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this shit was definitely sick..flows were tight, content was fresh...props to Chain, for killing it on  the multis...and to Calibra, for spittin' some flames...peace y'all, I'm out..
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when

Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin

But testin da realest

Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it
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