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    Posted: 13 May 2013 at 4:18am

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RinnnnnnnnG ...... RinnnnnnnnnG .....Rinnnn

Hello No NaMe assassination service No NaMe speaking who do you need dead? 

I wanna put a 'hit on a man', and I don't mean like that "Will" guy on TV.
Say No Name, jus call'm Soul, since he won't be 'stayin alive' like a beegee. (BG)
To catch'm, not easy. See he's half Alien and Half Tepee, yea., he's kinda sneaky.
Believe me, ya gotta be real deal! Can't be acting, like you're rehearsing lines with Kiki.

Teepee? Damn is this nigga a fucking native? But how do you want the kill? 
Pill, bullet of extra bloody? 'Klean' my knife on 'his butt buddy' to flaunt the thrill 
It'll be a little while before I can track this man down and pull the trigger 
So Big why don't you sit down and gimmi a description of this nigger? 

Okay he’s black as burnt toast, short like Kevin Hart, but fat like Ant Anderson.
Thick glasses n, a nose like Humpty. Bluntly, ‘Gary Coleman’ if ya can imagine him.
He’s broke, like Vibs training wheels,  rides a Huffy wit a seat like a banana peel.
And wears the same Miley Cyrus T-shirt everyday, that reads "Hannah Montana’s real!”

deal, so it sounds like your telling me were hunting a real soul driven mind? 
kind of like after killing this faggot maybe all of L.A will be livin redefined 
I dont mind, give me the address and I'll be 'in the house' like my names 'Corey'.
tomorrow morning the news paper boy will be shouting "read this lames story" 

Surely, and just to fit in at his hometown LA, you should wear a Pac shirt
And listen, every morning he walks 'Noodle", his poodle at 6 A.M, like clock work.
Slip in his window when he's gone. And yo, be sure no one sees ya brother!
And then call me once you're in and hiding under his Justen Bieber cover.

Alright, I'm on it man gimmi a couple hours... 

5:59 in the morning and Im watching for this faggot and his poodle
wait is that him, I throw on my Pac shirt and tag it as Soul and Noddle 
He doesnt see me in my van across the street so i creep into his house
quiet as a mouse I climb into his bed, thanking God he aint got a spouse.
I pull my phone from my pocket, actions fast a a rocket, i call my hommie Big
dial the number and first thing i think to say is "hey guess what nig!" 

Haha you in there, like swim wear? Don't wake the neighbors, Police lives there.
Soul comes back home at 6:18,  he'll be coming to his room to greese his hair.
When he's in the mirror, ya should jump out and choke him til his visions blurry.
And before ya kill him, make him say "Uncle!" like that kid in the Christmas Story.

It's really up to you

*Beep* the line goes dead like cold lead and thoughts of murder in my head 
man i look at the time 6:15 damn I know i gotta make this guy dead
dread, im waiting for this faggot to come back into his room to do hair care
i dont care, i hear the creaking of his door, im ready to make my move 
fat, black and ugly.  hell hes such a fag even a yes man wouldnt approve
i jump outta the sheets and punch him in his cheeks, he tumbles to the floor
im screaming you want more? my hands wrap around him through his airs only door
say uncle you ugly fucker i whisper in his ear, "uunccc" he barely spits
his eyes roll back in skull, this kill was dull just an unfairly blitz 
time to fucking call my homie Game
i murder this ugly lame...


*ring* *ring* 

done deal? 
We should kill again some time! since 'Souls' have such a simple mind.
Ignert blind! We'll make em all sleep in a hole like coons in the winter time.
He tried to fuck with Big I throw my cig to the curb groanin "do or die".
If ya said it, dude ya tried, cos who said it better than "Soul committed suicide"


Til next time .........









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That was a dope collab man. It was awesome working with you to diss these faggots.
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Your just mad because this kicked the shot outta you and kleans diss.
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Yep, you too bro. This was fun.
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Yo, I'm going to bump this once before it gets buried with the rest because i think this is a cool lil script.

maybe it needs some expos:

*I say he's half alien and half tepee because his profile says his name is Alien and his avatar is a pic of an Indian.

*I say "Can't be acting, like you're rehearsing lines with Kiki." because Kiki is a member here who is an actor in real life.

*No_name says "Klean his knife with his butt buddy" because klean is his boy here at LA.

*The same reason i say "he's broke like Vibs training wheels".

*the rest are social references and if you have not been living in a cave for the past 10 years, you really should get them.
If not, you need to get socially aware because such a short mind will get you nowhere while writing.


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This was a nice lil collabo to be honest, the lyrics and shit were good but tbh you lost me when you said "It'll be a little while before I can track this man down and pull the trigger 
So Big why don't you sit down and gimmi a description of this nigger? "


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Originally posted by Vib.Klean Vib.Klean wrote:

This was a nice lil collabo to be honest, the lyrics and shit were good but tbh you lost me when you said "It'll be a little while before I can track this man down and pull the trigger 
So Big why don't you sit down and gimmi a description of this nigger? "



Right, I didn't catch that when I posted it.
I don't know if he meant to say "nigga", but that's how I read it when I skimmed across it.

I think it should have been "nigga"
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Decent, decent....just signed up here but it seems pretty active, my last site was dead out ...feel free to send for me, interesting to see the levels here

(I'm from the UK so I'm at a disadvantage in that half you guys wouldn't get my slang/references but I'll adapt or explain as much as I can)

edit : wait, what....is this a uk site? everyone seems american....
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Originally posted by venjah venjah wrote:

Decent, decent....just signed up here but it seems pretty active, my last site was dead out ...feel free to send for me, interesting to see the levels here

(I'm from the UK so I'm at a disadvantage in that half you guys wouldn't get my slang/references but I'll adapt or explain as much as I can)

Naw hommie, this is a UK based site.
So we all kinda adapt to each other which works out well.
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Thanks for the input people! It's nice to post actually verses rather than just battles.
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I know this isn't the place for it but I can't see any other decent threads active recently so I'm dropping here....

Last week B was a neek and now he wants to try and send for guys
A geek watching star trek and now he want to enterprise
Copped an eighth to brag to all his mates bout shottin' peng to guys
I didn't care before..... and I ain't about to empathize

16 for 16 my lyrics been the end of guys
No emotion flowing, doctor says I compartmentalize
Pricks been using gimmicks like he feels he need to emphasize
So every other verse he writes in bold, [brackets] or underlined

It's true that I'm rusty but the steel is stainless
I was ready for this clash I haven't merked in ages
You'll get dando'd pon the doorstep that way the whole ends'll see
I bust bars from bare yards, you'll get John F Kennedy'd

Feel free to hate on a nigga, you can crew up with the klu klux
I batter man on beats with no chorus just two hooks....
a left and a right one...don't come on a hype one
I'm dangerous on road...like a car with no lights on


References :  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jill_Dando - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jill_Dando

....just for fun
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^ Yo, somebody find out where that verse came from ...
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thats me dude, I have more
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Well it just is weird because it obviously aimed toward somebody in specific.
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nah, not written for anyone....its an old bar for a open thread on a site thats dead now

originally "last week YOU were a neek"

i'll take the fact you don't think I wrote it as a compliment
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if you want a bar aimed at you, make a thread....thats what I'm here for
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venjah we can go if u want
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sure
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